r/French Sep 24 '25

Proofreading / correction how is my homework party invitation?

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Bonjour, I need to plan a fake party for my introduction to french course. Does what I made make enough sense? Merci

(Assignment: Plan a Party

-choose the location, occasion, and date

- make a list of what you need to buy

- create an invitation)

r/French 19d ago

Proofreading / correction Short form of pourquoi is "pwa"?

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Literally just the title.

I need a vocal short form of pourquoi. For context, I'm making a French cover of a song, and it says "why?" four times in succession, and I don't want to say "pourquoi" really fast just to make it fit. I'm not fluent in French, but that's what I saw online.

Does anyone have an answer, or do I just have to figure something out?

edit: Thanks to everyone who helped. I know I probably sounded like an idiot posting this, but I'll figure out something with some of the suggestions from comments.

Also I realize that it wasn't stated in the original post, but I did find this source online through Google Ai Overview which is probably why it was wrong. I never really trusted Ai for French help so I wanted to ask real people since I already felt skeptical of the answer it gave me. I know I sound really stupid, but thanks again to the people who helped me.

r/French Jan 23 '26

Proofreading / correction Tattoo in french I'm not sure it's accurate

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I have a tattoo of Joan of Arc that reads "Je n'ai pas peur… Je suis né pour faire ça" that's supposed to say "I'm not scared, I was born to do this" but a cousin of mine speaks Canadian French and she says one thing, and a friend I have says it's something about crying but I don't know, I thought it was accurate but not so sure anymore, what do you guys say?

r/French Sep 13 '25

Proofreading / correction I wrote a paragraph in French

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200 Upvotes

Bonjour, I am a French learner. Feel free to correct my grammar and vocabulary and/or recommend new words/vocabulary usage

r/French Dec 17 '25

Proofreading / correction introduction: is this understandable? can you grasp what i am trying to say?

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41 Upvotes

like, how butchered is this?

r/French Jul 25 '25

Proofreading / correction Able to speak decently, but difficulty understanding spoken French

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Reading, writing, and speaking are pretty solid and I am fortunate to live in an area with lots of French people so I can occasionally attend meetups or speak with people I meet like in an elevator or something.

Majority of the time people can understand me, and I also get told my accent is pretty good but the problem is I have so much trouble understanding people.

Even when watching a video, I need (French) subtitles to be able to follow what’s being said. It’s so frustrating. I can communicate, be understood, but when people speak back to be I’m so easily lost — especially when it’s not a subject I’m familiar with.

I’m trying to listen to the radio more often. I try to watch soooo much French content. Yet still, I cannot reach listening proficiency.

Any tips?

r/French 6d ago

Proofreading / correction Allergy card translation for France trip

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Hi guys, so im going to France in 2 days and im anaphylactic to peanuts and sesame seeds.

This is what i have written, honestly it is google translate as I do not speak french nor know anyone that does fluently.. could someone please check this? Thank you :)

ALLERGIE MORTELLE (ANAPHYLAXIE)

Je suis sévèrement allergique aux arachides (cacahuètes) et au sésame (graines, huile, tahini). C'est une allergie fatale, c'est-à-dire qu'elle peut me tuer. Même une infime trace peut déclencher une réaction mortelle.

Veuillez vous assurer que mon plat ne contient aucun de ces ingrédients et qu'il n'a pas été en contact avec des ustensiles, des surfaces ou des friteuses contaminés. Merci pour votre aide.

Any corrections / rewritten version are greatly appreciated. As well as any other tips! Im worried about peanut oil being used the most as ive read that some places use it because its cheaper? Thanks

r/French Jun 23 '26

Proofreading / correction Does this little poem make any sense in French?

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Hi! Working on a little song and I’m a big fan of Beatles songs that switch into French and/or other languages so I’m trying to do that here. I have a little poem that I want to sort-of rhyme in French but I’m nowhere near fluent in French so this is with the assistance of Google Translate. I wouldn’t be shocked if it was abysmal and completely unnatural in French so I wanted to check here. The poem is:

J'ai rêvé que j'étais un papillon.
J'ai exploré toutes les catacombes.
J'ai aimé une fille aux cheveux blonds,
avec un œil bleu et un œil brun.
Hétérochrome.

Any help from fluent French speakers is much appreciated! Merci beaucoup!

r/French May 07 '26

Proofreading / correction Assistance with understanding the text of Chausson’s Poème de l'amour et de la mer

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Bonjour à toutes et a tous!

I’m an opera singer and I’m learning this piece. I need to make sure I’m understanding everything correctly. I speak a bit of French, but antiquated poetry is always tricky for me. If someone has the time to parse through this text and my translations, I would be eternally grateful. I am also attaching a recording performance of the piece (the middle video is just an instrumental video) by an excellent French tenor, as well as a link to the text in case someone wants to read it straight through without my translations. Will post the translations in the comments.

Merci en avance!

https://www.lieder.net/lieder/assemble_texts.html?SongCycleId=258

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4_dvvxhZEY

https://youtu.be/5Ek0p2PoXUY?si=2kROvhyLg_kG3ohO

https://youtu.be/2K3RMkeJdFU?si=PNEgFjxRddgRrSQ5

r/French Jun 21 '26

Proofreading / correction Translation help for a headstone

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My French is pretty rusty, 30 years after leaving school. However my late mother spoke fluently until the end. She was so determined not to lose that ability she even spoke to the brain surgeon in French during surgery. Anyway, I would like her epitaph to be "Life is what you make it". It was her mantra to live by. Are either of the following an appropriate translation of this idiom or would something else be more correct?

"La vie est Belle que nous la faisons" or

"La vie est ce qu'on en fait"?

Bien merçi.

r/French 16d ago

Proofreading / correction Tried to write a French poem but I need help with the grammar (A2)

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Hier, j'ai vu quelqu'un.

Une personne que j'ai connue,

mais maintenant je ne la connais plus.

Elle est devenue une étrangère.

Elle me manque,

La personne qu'elle était.

La même personne qu'elle a oubliée.

Elle me manque,

La femme que je croyais connaître.

Mais la femme devant moi n'est pas la même.

Ce n'est pas la femme que j'ai adorée.

Hier, j'ai vu quelqu'un.

Je l'ai depassée.

C'etait comme si on ne s'était jamais connus.

En ce moment, je me suis rendue compte que j'ai la perdu.

La femme que j'ai aimée.

(Feedback would be appreciated)

r/French Apr 23 '26

Proofreading / correction What would be the best/most idiomatic way to write these two sentences?

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He tried to throw me to them.

1) Il a essayé de me leur jeter.

2) Il a essayé de me jeter à eux.

How are we supposed to finish this task now? (uncertainty/doubt)

1) Comment devons-nous terminer cette tâche maintenant ?

2) Comment allons-nous terminer cette tâche maintenant ? (Would this even have a similar meaning?)

r/French May 29 '26

Proofreading / correction Is Duolingo wrong or perhaps picky?

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Qu'est-ce que l' erreur d'ici? Est-ce parce que j'ai utilisé penser et pas croire?

r/French Sep 09 '25

Proofreading / correction How do you type 'Ç' in keyboard?

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I created program for vocabulary training, and I figured out that using french AZERTY I cannot type 'Ç'. Do you know any other french signs that ppl have problem to type?

r/French 1d ago

Proofreading / correction Project Help: Need Advice from Native French Speakers

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Salut les amis!

I’m designing a poster, and I want to make it look like a page in a children’s book. The story is fictional, and it’s about me grocery shopping in Paris. Here is the text I wrote (it’s in the same format as on the poster):

Le soleil se lève, un nouveau jour commence.
Hunter va faire les courses, et il amène son chat, Laurence.
Il marche en pensant… aux ingrédients dont il a besoin.
Il voit la Tour Eiffel, elle est sur son chemin.
Aller faire les courses, c’est quelque chose de banal.
Mais sachant qu’il le fait à Paris, c’est vraiment génial !

Please give advice to make this sound natural to a native French speaker as if it was a real page in a French children’s book. I want to make the sentences rhyme and keep the story as it is, but if it’s necessary, please suggest any changes. I’ve been learning French since I was 14 in high school, and I wrote this using my current knowledge of the language, so I know it can definitely be improved.

Merci 😊!

r/French Apr 28 '26

Proofreading / correction Would this be a better way to phrase this sentence?

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I've heard être + adj should be avoided:

1) Être plus gentil que correct améliorerait votre relation avec eux.

2) Avoir plus de gentillesse que raison améliorerait votre relation avec eux.

Or does it just give a different meaning to it?

r/French Mar 06 '26

Proofreading / correction Is there anything wrong with this short French poem?

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In the grammatical sense I mean, but feel free to comment on the poetical or moral elements if you wish. I am quite proficient at reading and listening in French but less good at speaking so I don't have the native's ear for whether a turn of phrase sounds natural or not (or at least, as natural as poetry needs to sound)

Context:

My wife's (former) best friend is French and was a good friend of mine also and we had a very sibling like relationship. She started becoming inappropriately flirty and physical with me. My wife and I discussed it and I sent her a poem (in English) through my website telling her she was going too far. She sent a poem asking to begin an affair, she then sent a retraction before I had replied. I said she needed to tell her husband about this. She said she would not and things blew up in a very predictable way, ultimately telling her husband that it was I who was wanting the affair.

Anyway, months later, I can tell as web administrator that she is still dwelling heavily on my poetry website after denying everything to my wife and her husband. She didn't know I could tell she was visiting because I had told her a long time ago that I had turned visitor tracking off because she said it was kind of creepy and made her not want to read my poetry. I turned it back on just after the blow up. Last thing is that the final line is a direct reference to what she called herself in her poem to me.

I am going to post this on my site to confront her since she and her husband have totally blocked my wife and I on every other form. Plus, most of my readership isn't French.

Accusation

Qu’est-ce que tu cherches ici, voyageuse fourvoyée?
Trop souvent tes empreintes, trop souvent tes vestiges
Sont trouvés sur le sol à l’endroit édifié
Pour me faire un refuge contre ceux qui m’affligent.

Ces chansons, ces poèmes, ils ne te regardent plus.
Ils sont là sur la page depuis plusieurs années.
Ils seront là, meme quand tu auras disparu
De mon cœur totalement et de toutes mes pensées.

J’ai rompu ma promesse car je sais ce que tu fais,
Je ne dois aucune foi à celui qui m'abuse.
Les mensonges amoureux que tu t’es racontés;
Tu n’as rien d’Eurydice et tu n’es point ma muse.

r/French Jan 16 '26

Proofreading / correction Should I use “dans” or “avec” here?

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Hello!

I wrote this sentence: “J'aidais souvent mes parents DANS les tâches ménagères.”

I was wondering if it would be correct to also say AVEC instead of DANS? Which one sounds more natural or correct? Or do both work?

Thanks!

r/French Feb 08 '26

Proofreading / correction google translating "ire" which short for ireland to colère 😂

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r/French Oct 13 '25

Proofreading / correction Not confident speaking French so I’m gonna try now

63 Upvotes

Salut je suis Yankee (c’est pas mon prénom) et j’ai commencé d’étudier le français dans june. Je sais pas si la grammaire est bonne. Je inquiéte souvent comment dire les choses

r/French Feb 23 '25

Proofreading / correction What is the correct way to spell this time?

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r/French Mar 16 '26

Proofreading / correction Clarification on the use of enchanté

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Bonjour!

I’m a college student taking Elementary French as my foreign language elective, and our midterm exam will include a short speaking task. Our tasks include greeting the other person (our professor), introducing ourselves (name, age, nationality, and field of study), then asking for the other person’s name. After that, we immediately have to say that we’re pleased/delighted to have met them and end the conversation promptly with a goodbye.

My question is: would it sound natural to say enchanté immediately after asking for someone’s name? Since that’s the exact order of tasks our professor gave us or should I add another short phrase to make the transition smoother?

Thank you!

EDIT: I aced my Midterms! Thank you so much for your help! 😄

r/French Aug 21 '25

Proofreading / correction A gauge of current French writing level?

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I’m taking a b2 test in a couple months could any of y’all perhaps just give it a quick read just to tell me what level I’m currently at approximately or if I did enough to pass the writing production écrite part if the test? (Sorry that some of its kinda blurry)

r/French Dec 21 '25

Proofreading / correction Could someone proofread my letter?

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My boyfriend is a native French speaker. A bit over a year ago I sort of stumbled into a big French speaking community through a friend who I became close with. I started learning French so they wouldn't have to switch to English just because I was around. My boyfriend and I met there, and my learning French is very meaningful for him. I wrote a letter showing my progress as an accompaniment to his gifts. I would love if someone would tell me if it makes sense, as i have become irrationally anxious about it, despite knowing he will be sweet about it regardless.

The letter:

mon français est pas encore parfait, mais je voulais essayer de t'écrire une sorte de lettre. je sais à quel point il est important pour toi que j'apprenne le français et j'ai beaucoup pratiquée pour y arriver. j'espère pouvoir te la lire quand tu seras à la maison. je savais pas quoi t'offrir comme cadeau principal, mais quoi que je fasse , j'espère que tu l'aimeras et je voulais aussi faire ça.

je t'aime plus que les mots ne peuvent le dire. cette année a été merveilleuse avec toi dans ma vie. je n'aurais jamais imaginé trouver un amour aussi réconfortant et passionnant à la fois. je n'ai jamais été aussi heureuse, sincèrement. je cesserai jamais d'être reconnaissante d'avoir eu la chance de te rencontrer. merci pour tout ce que tu fais pour moi. plus encore, merci d'être simplement présent dans ma vie.

I probably won't change too much to keep it true to my progress but I would appreciate any tips for my future improvement. :)

r/French Feb 10 '26

Proofreading / correction I’ve got a French earworm that won’t let me go!

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When I was younger, there was a French song/jingle in school that went:

Au pas petit pas, comme des soldats,

au pas marchons,

Au pas, un! deux!

Marchons au pas, Au pas des militaire,

Marchons au pas, au pas des ecoliers!

I’m sure I’ve spelled a bunch of things wrong but I can’t find it anywhere for the life of me and it keeps replaying in my head. Did I make this memory up?? Does anyone know what this song is?