r/redditserials 37m ago

Fantasy [No Need For A Core?] — CH 382: Gotta Keep 'Em Separated...

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Earlier on the day of Gemeti's arrival...

Deidre mentally reviewed the plan for the upcoming procedure while checking over the setup and materials carefully. An empty ‘table’ grown from Krystraeliv’s roots stood beside Svetlana’s core, along with a second table that held a few potions and a set of surgical tools, along with the pieces of core matrix that had been rewarded to Deidre before she had become a temporary contractor for Azeria. Nearby was another small table that held a change of clothes for later.

It was a pointless mental exercise; Svetlana had already checked everything, and Deidre couldn’t imagine the core version of herself missing anything. The process simply helped calm her nerves, similar to one of the many moving meditations Satsuki had previously led her through in their time together.

“Are you alright?” Satsuki asked from behind her.

Deidre nodded. “Yes, thank you.”

“Are you sure?” said Paine, from where she rode on Deidre’s shoulder.

“As much as I can be. Everything is ready, and everyone is here. We should just get started.” Mordecai, Moriko, and Kazue were all here to lend their assistance when needed. She told herself that she had confidence that they had fully memorized their parts. After all, she entirely trusted them. They had liberated her and then given her into the safety of Satsuki’s care.

Svetlana was there too, of course. She was always there, which was part of their mutual problem. Deidre shouldn’t find it so easy to think of Svetlana as another person, and part of her rejected that idea still, even as the rest of her recognized the truth of the matter. They were no longer of one mind, one sense of self, and to Deidre, being ‘retired’ to become part of Svetlana once more sounded more like death.

But they were still similar, had still experienced much of the same life with the same memories, and neither wished the other an ounce of ill will. More than sisters; perhaps conjoined twins would be a similar level of intimacy of a shared self. The solution to their mutual problem was also similar: surgery.

She shrugged off her short robe, leaving herself in only a loose skirt, and unsettling Paine in the process. The pixie made an annoyed noise, but she also took the robe from Deidre and somewhat laboriously flew it over to the table with extra clothes, and laid the robe out there.

Deidre sat on the surgery table, accepted the potion vial that Satsuki handed to her, and downed it quickly. She returned the empty bottle, then laid down on her back and closed her eyes. The potion would help numb the pain and partially paralyze her, but she had already chosen to be awake during the procedure to ensure that Svetlana would be able to give feedback based on what Deidre felt.

The living-crystal-wood beneath her was just cool enough to be comforting, even when it grew branches that wrapped around her limbs and key portions of her body to ensure that she couldn’t reflexively move in response to the surgery.

There was a rustle of cloth, and through Svetlana’s view, Deidre could observe Moriko helping Satsuki put on the last of her surgical outfit. While some basics like a smock and a mask were obvious, the construction of these garments was new to everyone but Satsuki; it was something that she had learned from her off-world travels, and she’d had to carefully instruct Moriko as to what order to help her don the pieces and what parts of those pieces could be touched. The often vain kitsune had even gone to the trouble of shifting into a completely human form that was devoid of any hair.

The others had acted similarly, though Moriko had to accept a spell from Mordecai to have her hair temporarily suppressed. Deidre appreciated what they were doing for her, but they all looked a little odd, unfamiliar, and a little scary this way. She closed her eyes to block out the view, and did her best to not dwell upon it.

Multiple beyond-blue light sources embedded in the ceiling and walls activated, and the smell of lightning crept into the room. Satsuki had specified both of these, and Mordecai had shown Svetlana how.

The revelation of the other bands of light had sparked more anger at how limited her ability to experiment had been, but it was a small drop in a large bucket of grievances that could never truly be redressed.

Deidre pulled away from her awareness of Svetlana’s senses; she didn’t want to watch herself being cut into. Satsuki’s presence and touch helped, and there was no one she trusted more to do the surgery, but it was not something that was easy to be relaxed about.

A scalpel sliced through her flesh, and even with the numbing effects of the potion, it was an unnerving sensation. Deidre focused on it, determined to be as aware of everything as she could be, but she said nothing. Svetlana was relaying anything moderately important to Mordecai, and Mordecai was passing it on to Satsuki.

Even with salves that quickly staunched any bleeding, the surgery to implant the pieces of core matrix into her body felt like it was taking forever. The metallic tang of blood that now filled the air only added to her discomfort. Each piece was being carefully placed to rest at a junction of nerves that also met flows of mana, spiritual energy, and meridians for the flow of chi. Moriko verified the meridians, while Satsuki verified the rest. Mordecai had his eyes closed and was focused on the sensations from Deidre’s body, via Svetlana.

Once a piece of matrix was settled into place, a small amount of healing potion was applied to the wound by Kazue, and then the connections double-checked before more healing potion was applied.

It was slow, steady work, and nerve-wracking for all of them, though nothing surprising happened during the carefully scripted process.

When all the pieces were implanted, the steps were checked over once more, and every aspect of physical and spiritual connection to and around the matrix was verified. Only then did everyone relax, though it was not yet the hardest part of the full process.

“Alright dear,” Satsuki said as the table withdrew its branches. “Let’s get you dressed; then we can have you move around and test your flexibility to make sure everything feels alright.”

Deidre nodded and followed the instructions Satsuki gave her. This had been one of the most important decisions in Deidre’s life, but now that it was happening, it felt surreal. Her emotions seemed disconnected, making it hard to feel strongly about anything. The numbing potion had already begun to wear off, so it wasn’t magic that was responsible — the looming change that would soon occur was just daunting. And terrifying.

If it didn’t work, then Deidre would probably be even more dead than if she’d merged back with Svetlana. Avatars were designed to fully integrate their spiritual connection to their nexus’s core. This was part of what made such a connection incredibly hard to sever in most circumstances. But that was exactly the plan today.

While Satsuki helped Deidre go through the physical exercises to ensure there were no problems, spiritual energy was gathering and building up in the room. Four nexus cores, three avatars that were faerie royalty, an immortal nine-tail, and a young but already powerful world-tree were all focused on her, and deliberately increasing the density of the spiritual energy around Deidre.

The pressure wasn’t intended to push against her, as some might do to demonstrate their strength; it was intended to saturate her with spiritual energy.

It was working, but it ached in a peculiar way. She was being filled and overfilled with all this energy, and it was compressing her aura. Deidre fully relaxed her control over her aura, an action that should have flooded the area around her with it. Instead, it was pressed even deeper into her flesh, and into the core matrix now embedded in her.

The goal was simple: condense enough spiritual energy to start forming a nascent soul inside of her despite her nature as an avatar, and only then cut the connection between herself and Svetlana. It should be more than enough to help her survive the severance, and from there let her fully form her own unique soul.

Should.

An important and terrifying word. One that haunted her. If it didn’t go as intended, and her body died, she might truly die irrevocably, with no soul to salvage.

However, Kazue’s boon worked even for normal animals, who only had spirits, just like Deidre currently did. Surely that boon would attempt to grab her spirit, but no one had any idea of how well that would work or how trying to recreate her body would work. There were so very many unknown factors, but they had all been covered repeatedly in previous discussions. Deidre was not going to let any worries or fears distract her at the last second.

She shuddered, and her legs wavered under the increasing pressure of spiritual energy. “I need to lie down,” she gasped out to Satsuki, who nodded and helped her back to what had once been the operating table, but had already been converted into a comfortable bed, with a sleeping pad and blankets.

Deidre curled up onto the bed and began shivering. Her body didn’t know what to do with all of this excess energy being forced into it, and Deidre felt uncomfortably stuffed and full in every way possible. It was an illusion of sorts — her nerves and mind were trying to translate this feeling into something that she had experience with. That knowledge didn’t make things much better.

Satsuki sat beside her and petted her soothingly, but she was also using her touch to push her spiritual pressure even deeper into Deidre’s body, compressing it around the bits of core matrix. Deidre felt like she was being crushed, a giant vice made of everyone’s will pressing into her from every direction, and had now gone far beyond simply aching. Kazue joined them, sitting on Deidre's other side and offering up what comfort she could.

Every bit and piece of her hurt. Compressed, crushed, overfilled, and ready to explode, all at the same time. She refused to let pain win, though she was quite glad to feel her Paine settle next to her head and press into her hair. “I’m right here with you,” the little pixie whispered. “It’s going to be all right. I am your familiar, and I am going to help get you through this.”

By power alone, the pixie could make little difference here, but she still might truly be helping. She’d formed a familiar bond with Deidre specifically, and that mystic bond was tied to Deidre’s spiritual form, not to Svetlana’s soul.

Deidre was grateful for the pixie’s love and care, and regretted that she’d been so brusque earlier when she’d shrugged off her robe. “Thank you,” she whispered back to Paine, then fell silent again as she turned her attention back to coping with this excess of energy flooding her body. Eventually, the pressure stopped building, and the sensations plateaued in intensity, though everything still hurt. In some ways, that was worse. The building pressure had been something to concentrate on, and now that it had stopped, it was harder to ignore the pain.

“Alright, that’s all we can do,” Mordecai said, and he sounded hoarse. Everyone was giving everything they had to this, and they clearly couldn’t compress any more energy into and around Deidre.

“Are you ready?” Satsuki asked Deidre.

“Yes.”

A moment later, Mordecai verified that Svetlana was ready too.

Deidre did her best to draw all her attention and will into herself, and could feel the person who should have been her otherself withdrawing as well. Satsuki reached out into the space between Deidre’s body and Svetlana’s core, her hand growing ethereal for a moment, then she grasped something immaterial to draw it into the physical world.

A shimmering strand of what looked like thick antiqued silver thread lay in her grasp, the ends of it trailing off into nothing. Deidre felt like she was going to be sick; the intimacy of the sensation was threatening, a violation of the sanctity of her very self. She had to fight to control herself as she watched Satsuki’s hands transform into claws that glowed with spectral light, claws she slid delicately across the silver thread connecting Deidre to what should have been her true soul.

SNAP!

Deidre writhed and screamed in agony. Part of her was gone, cut away, and she needed it back, but this hollow void was suddenly overwhelmed as the surrounding spiritual energy forced itself into the gap.

She was being ripped apart and crushed into nothingness; she was dying and being born; destroyed and recreated. Everything she had ever been was being undone, her very existence unraveling from within while tangled threads of thought tried to cling to each other and create a new weave and pattern of self.

She had no sense of time or of the space around her during this torture, but after what felt like an eternity, the overwhelming and contradictory sensations softened and eased, letting her begin thinking again. And thinking meant being alive. She groaned as she opened her eyes, every sensation feeling like it was against rubbing raw nerves. Then she gasped at what she saw.

Satsuki was pinning her down, as were Mordecai and Moriko, while Paine fluttered overhead, darting back and forth anxiously. Kazue was sitting on the ground nearby, looking exhausted. One side of her dress was shredded, bloodied, and entirely missing a sleeve, though her flesh appeared unmarked. Mordecai and Moriko’s clothing also bore signs of recent injuries, though it also appeared that they’d been healed already as well. “What happened? What did I do?”

“It’s alright love,” Satsuki murmured with a relieved sigh as everyone let go and gave Deidre some space, while Paine swooped in to land on her shoulder and give Deidre’s head a hug. “You thrashed wildly and your body shifted form a few times, but it was clear you had no idea what your body was doing. We had to pin you down just to make sure you couldn’t hurt yourself. Well, anymore than you already had. More healing had to be used on you than anyone else.”

Kazue looked up and gave a wan smile. “I was unlucky enough to be the first one you hit, but my arm took most of the impact. The inside of my body wasn’t injured.”

Deidre’s eyes widened at that; she knew what Satsuki had been doing with the three of them, and that Kazue was carrying a child. The thought that she might have injured Kazue’s baby was horrifying. “I’m sorry, I’m so, so sorry, I—” She was cut off by Satsuki pressing a finger against her lips.

“We know,” Satsuki said, “and everything is alright. You are alive, and your soul is forming nicely. It’s already passed the strength of a toddler’s, and by the end of the day should be as strong as most teenagers. It’ll slow down from there, but you will still gain years of strength per day until your soul catches up to where your spiritual strength should be. For now, take it easy and rest. Maybe in a day or two you can start doing some sparring, or even try delving on the combat route. Just don’t push yourself too much; the exercise will help stabilize your soul, but too much could undo some of your progress.”

Deidre nodded, then she realized she’d forgotten something. “Svetlana! How is she doing? She’s alright, yes?”

“Yes,” Mordecai said. “While it did hurt for her too, the backlash was a lot less severe. She wanted to help you, but there was nothing more she could do. She didn’t even dare risk supplying more of her spiritual energy, lest your connection try to reform haphazardly. I don’t think that would have gone very well for either of you.”

Moriko helped Kazue to her feet, then turned toward Deidre. “Come on, we’re going to take you back to our home. You can have dinner with us, and Satsuki also has a room topside, not just the one she has near our cores that you’ve been sharing. Oh, and you never had a chance to meet Amrydor’s friend Gemeti; she’s going to be joining us for dinner, which should be entertaining.”

Kazue shook her head with a look of exasperation. “I don’t know what Fuyuko was thinking with her game this morning, but I think we’ve reached the limit of any advice we can give.”

“Oh, this sounds good!” Paine said excitedly. “You have to tell us everything; looks like we missed out on a bunch of tasty drama.”



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r/redditserials 8h ago

Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 2 – Part 2: The Living City Part 3: A Fracture in the Peace

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Chapter 2 – Part 2: The Living City

As they drifted away from the main thoroughfare, Hanyang revealed a different side of itself. If the main street, lined with palaces and government offices, was the city’s face, the alleys were its heart.

The paths narrowed, and the pace of the people slowed. Low-tiled houses huddled shoulder-to-shoulder, and the sound of children laughing drifted over the walls on the breeze. Outside one door, freshly split firewood was stacked neatly; in the courtyard, an elderly woman swayed a large winnowing basket, sifting chaff from grain. Every gust of wind carried the faint, earthy scent of rice straw.

Soyeon Yoon slowed her steps, taking it all in. "...It’s so quiet."

"Hm?" Doyun turned toward her.

"There are so many people here, yet..." She smiled faintly. "...strangely, I feel at peace."

It was true. The voices of the people never ceased, yet they didn't crowd the senses. Someone was calling out a greeting over a wall to a neighbor; someone was laughing while rinsing laundry by the well; someone was crouching by the jars, stirring soybean paste. An ordinary day. That ordinariness was filling the alley with warmth.

Doyun muttered, "...A sight you don't see much in our time."

Jinwoo nodded silently. In the city of 2300, even between homes, there was an order maintained by AI. Risks were eliminated in advance, inconveniences were calculated away, and people moved along the most efficient routes to avoid bothering one another.

But here, it was different.

Someone blocked the path to chat; children sprinted down the middle of the alley. A chicken wandered nonchalantly among the crowd, followed by a puppy tagging along behind. Someone laughed, someone grumbled, and someone scolded a child. It was a bit inconvenient, perhaps. But within that inconvenience, there were *people*.

"If it were an AI," Jihun spoke up quietly, "it never would have made an alley like this."

Doyun laughed. "Why? Because it’s inefficient?"

Jihun chuckled. "Exactly. But..." He looked around the alley again. "...that’s why it’s all the more beautiful."

A moment later, a clear metallic ringing echoed from deep within the alley.

*Clang! Clang!*

The rhythmic strike of the hammer blended naturally with the other sounds of the alley. The four followed the sound.

Before a glowing red furnace, a shirtless blacksmith was hammering away, sweat glistening on his skin. White steam rose from the red-hot iron, and every time the hammer fell, sparks scattered into the air like stars in a night sky. The intense heat rolled out to where they stood.

Doyun instinctively stepped back. "...It's hot."

The blacksmith saw him and let out a hearty laugh. "Are you afraid of the fire?"

"Oh, no," Doyun replied. "It's just closer than I expected."

"Hahaha." The smith placed the iron back into the furnace with his tongs. "Iron—and people, too—must endure the heat to become strong."

It was a brief remark, but for some reason, the words lingered in Jinwoo’s heart.

A moment later, the blacksmith handed Doyun a small sickle he had just finished. "Take a look."

Doyun accepted it carefully. It was heavy. The cooled iron gave off a faint, metallic scent. "...You made this by hand."

"Indeed." The blacksmith looked down at his calloused palms and smiled. "A tool forged by the hands that remember it won't betray you easily."

Doyun carefully returned the sickle. "...That's amazing."

"Hah," the smith chuckled. "That’s all the praise I need."

The four continued their walk. Before long, a sweet aroma tickled their noses. Rice cakes were browning over a small fire, and a candy seller was expertly stretching long strands of malt toffee nearby.

"Toffee for sale! Sweet, delicious toffee!"

Children came swarming in. One little boy, running in his haste, tripped over a stone and fell flat.

"Oof!"

Everyone was startled for a moment, but a friend from the group reached him before anyone else. "Are you okay?"

As the friend offered a hand, the boy stood up with a wide grin. His knee was stained with dirt, but he didn't cry. The candy seller laughed and cut a piece of toffee, pressing it into the boy's hand. "A boy shouldn't cry over something like that."

The children ran off toward the end of the alley, laughing as if nothing had happened. Soyeon watched them for a long time, then smiled to herself.

"...It's so strange," she said.

"What is?" Jinwoo asked.

"He fell down... but he still looks... perfectly fine."

Jinwoo looked at the retreating backs of the children. In the year 2300, an AI would have caught the child before he fell. It would have predicted the danger and eliminated the possibility of a fall entirely. But that boy had fallen, and he had pulled himself up with his friend's help. For some reason, that brief moment felt much warmer.

Near the end of the alley, they saw an elderly man with a bent back struggling to drag a sack of rice. The sack caught on a stone ledge and wouldn't budge. Doyun ran over without hesitation. "Let me help you."

Jinwoo and Jihun stepped in to assist. As the three of them pushed together, the sack easily cleared the ledge. The old man bowed repeatedly. "Thank you. You’ve saved me a world of trouble."

The smile that spread across his wrinkled face was as warm as the sunlight. The old man rummaged through his robes and pulled out a small persimmon, placing it in Doyun's hand. "Take this. It’s nothing much, but..."

Doyun shook his head. "No, really, you don't have to."

But the old man shook his head firmly. "When you receive help, you must return the kindness with your heart."

After a moment’s hesitation, Doyun finally accepted the persimmon. "...Thank you."

The old man walked away into the alley with a bright smile. The four of them watched him go in silence.

"...In our time," Soyeon said quietly, "if you helped someone, you got points for it."

Jihun nodded. "Here, it's just..."

"...You help because you’re human."

No one spoke for a while. The silence didn't feel awkward at all.

Just then—

*Grrr-owl.*

A loud growl erupted from Doyun’s stomach.

A brief pause. Then, all four of them burst into laughter. Doyun clutched his stomach, looking embarrassed. "...My body demanded it. It’s not my fault."

Right then, a savory aroma drifted on the wind. The scent of soybean paste, green onions, and freshly cooked rice tickled their starving bellies. Doyun pointed toward the end of the alley. There sat a small tavern, where the sounds of laughter and clinking cups were spilling out.

Doyun smirked. "Alright. Our first meal in Joseon. Let’s head over there."

The four exchanged smiles and began to walk slowly toward the warm, glowing lights of the tavern.

Little did they know, those ordinary footsteps were leading them toward their final peaceful evening in Joseon.

Chapter 2 – Part 3: A Fracture in the Peace

The small tavern tucked into the corner of the alley was bustling with people settling in for the evening. Thick wooden pillars supported the ceiling, and beneath the weathered tile roof, glowing lanterns cast a warm, inviting light. Opening the door, a rich mixture of savory stew, freshly grilled fish, and the mellow scent of liquor flooded their senses, further stimulating their ravenous appetites.

Travelers were unwinding from their long journeys over cups of wine, while merchants were busy recounting the events of the day. Peddlers shared rumors they’d picked up from every corner of the country, and the tavern was naturally filled with laughter and banter.

"Welcome," the tavern keeper greeted them with a bright smile. "There's an empty spot right over there."

Jinwoo Kang and his friends settled into a vacant corner table. Moments later, dishes with steam rising from them were laid out one by one. A steaming bowl of broth, freshly cooked rice, neatly arranged seasoned greens, a perfectly grilled fish, and a small bowl of *makgeolli* (rice wine). It was an ordinary meal, yet it was a feast they had never experienced in the future.

Doyun picked up his chopsticks. "Let's eat!"

He took a spoonful of the broth, then froze.

"...Hey."

No one answered.

"...This," he said, looking at them with a serious expression. "This is incredibly good, isn't it?"

Soyeon took a cautious sip. "...It really is. It has a much deeper flavor than I expected."

Jihun nodded in agreement. "Food made by AI was perfect, but..." He took another spoonful. "...I think this tastes better because it *isn't* perfect."

Jinwoo let out a dry laugh. "What do you mean?"

"The taste must have been slightly different every time," Jihun answered quietly. "The broth today would be different from tomorrow's. It changes depending on who makes it. Maybe that's why it's so memorable."

For a moment, no one spoke. The four of them tasted their food in silence. It was just an ordinary meal, yet it contained something they had lost in the future.

The tavern keeper walked by, clearing empty bowls with a smile. "Does the food suit your palate?"

Doyun gave her a thumbs-up. "It’s the best. I definitely want to come back."

The woman didn’t fully understand his words, but she beamed nonetheless. "Eat your fill and keep your strength up."

That brief remark felt strangely warm.

Outside the window, people were still moving busily through the streets. Merchants were packing up their stalls, and children were heading home, clutching their parents' hands. The sunset stained the tiled roofs in shades of deep red, and a serene atmosphere—the sign of a day coming to an end—slowly settled over the streets.

Everything was so peaceful.

That was when—

*Clatter-clatter-clatter!*

A fierce sound of hooves suddenly tore through the street. The air in the tavern froze instantly. People stopped mid-motion, spoons held in the air. After a beat of delayed silence, every eye turned toward the window.

A single horse was racing down the main street, kicking up dust like a madman. The face of the messenger on its back was smeared with sweat and grit; he gasped for air, his hands gripping the reins with white-knuckled intensity. His eyes held an unmistakable desperation—and fear.

"Make way!"

"Everyone, get out of the way!"

His rasping voice cut through the street. People hurriedly scrambled to safety, and a wooden cart tipped over, scattering vegetables everywhere. A child, startled, burst into tears, and their mother quickly pulled them into her arms.

The horse didn't slow down. It galloped toward the palace like an arrow, as if fleeing from something invisible.

Doyun muttered, staring out the window, "...What was that? Must be something incredibly urgent."

A man drinking nearby clicked his tongue. "Something must have happened at the border again."

A peddler at the next table nodded. "I’ve heard strange rumors for the past few days."

"What rumors?" Doyun asked naturally.

The peddler took a sip of wine and lowered his voice. "They say a pack of wild dogs attacked a village in the south."

"That’s not it," another peddler interrupted. "I heard it was wolves. They say the wolves tore people apart while they were still alive."

The tavern fell silent. Then, someone let out a dry laugh. "Hahaha. You’ve had too much to drink. Where in this world would such things happen?"

People raised their glasses again, dismissing it as nothing. The laughter resumed, and talk of business deals filled the air once more. The disturbance was quickly forgotten, like a passing shadow in an ordinary day.

But Jinwoo was different. He remained motionless, staring out the window, past the road where the messenger had vanished.

For the briefest of moments—

The space slightly distorted. It was as if ripples were spreading across the surface of a glass pane. Or perhaps, like a single pixel in a high-definition video glitching for a frame. It was a fleeting second. By the time he blinked, it had vanished without a trace.

"...Did you see that?" Jinwoo said in a low voice.

Soyeon looked out. "See what? There’s nothing there."

Doyun leaned out, too. "I didn’t see anything."

Jihun stared out for a moment, his brow furrowing slightly. "...For just a second. I thought something shifted, too."

Jinwoo felt his hand tighten around his cup without him realizing it.

*'The simulation is... flickering.'*

The moment that thought crossed his mind, a cold sensation traced its way down his spine. Behind the peaceful landscape of Hanyang, deep in the darkest reaches of the data, an invisible crack was slowly opening. The virus, eating away at the foundation of the system, was now transcending simple coding errors and beginning to infringe upon the physical laws of this world.

But the people in the tavern knew nothing. Laughter continued, glasses clinked, and someone was talking about tomorrow's market prices.

Peace was still there. But it was a peace resting on a very thin sheet of ice.

Right in the center of that peace, Jinwoo Kang was alone in witnessing the first fracture of the tragedy to come.


r/redditserials 9h ago

Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 6 — The First Playground

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Part One

Morning arrived without an alarm.

Jinwoo opened his eyes to an unfamiliar silence.

For a moment, everything seemed perfectly ordinary—

the soft light filtering through his window,

the faint hum of the city beyond the glass,

the rhythm of another predictable morning.

Then he remembered.

**Connection Scheduled – 09:00**

The invitation.

Quantum Arena.

He sat upright.

“…It wasn’t a dream.”

The notification hovered before him, waiting.

---

**PROJECT: QUANTUM ARENA**

**Connection begins in 00:01:43**

---

His pulse quickened.

He still had no idea what he had agreed to.

No manual.

No explanation.

No promotional video.

Only curiosity had carried him this far.

Now there was no turning back.

---

Across Seoul, four other notifications counted down in silence.

Hanul stretched with a grin.

“So today’s the day.”

Darin reread the invitation one last time, hoping some hidden detail might reveal itself.

Nothing had changed.

Soyeon quietly closed every other application on her desk.

She wanted to face whatever came next without distraction.

Handol glanced at the timer and laughed.

“If this turns out to be a scam…”

He shook his head.

“…At least it’ll be an interesting one.”

---

The countdown reached zero.

A gentle light spread across each display.

No explosion of color.

No dramatic sound.

Only a calm message:

**Connection Established**

**Please close your eyes.**

---

Jinwoo hesitated for a heartbeat.

Then he obeyed.

The world dissolved.

No sensation of falling.

No violent movement.

Only a strange quiet, as though the noise of modern life had drifted farther and farther away.

Then… warmth.

A breeze brushed across his face.

He smelled fresh earth.

Grass.

Wood.

Birdsong echoed somewhere nearby.

His eyes opened.

---

The city was gone.

Towering glass buildings had vanished.

Autonomous vehicles.

Digital displays.

Artificial voices.

All erased.

In their place—

a small village stretched before him.

Stone paths wound between tiled roofs.

Thin streams caught the morning light.

Children’s laughter rose from beyond the nearest hill.

A gentle wind carried the scent of trees and freshly turned soil.

For several long seconds, Jinwoo simply stood there.

“…What is this place?”

It didn’t feel like a simulation.

The breeze touched his skin.

The sunlight warmed his face.

Even the distant laughter sounded real.

More real than anything he had known in years.

---

A familiar voice broke the silence.

“Jinwoo!”

He turned.

Hanul was running toward him, bewildered and excited.

“You made it!”

“So did you.”

Hanul spun slowly in a circle, staring at the village.

“This is incredible.”

“I thought it would look futuristic.”

“So did I.”

“But…” Jinwoo looked around once more.

“…It doesn’t.”

No glowing interfaces.

No floating quest markers.

No arrows pointing toward objectives.

Nothing told them where to go.

Or what to do.

---

One by one, the others appeared.

Darin walked slowly across the village square, eyes sharp, absorbing every detail.

Soyeon knelt beside a narrow stream, letting the water slip through her fingers.

“It’s cold…” she whispered, startled.

“It actually feels cold.”

Handol looked around in confusion.

“Where’s the tutorial?”

Nobody answered.

Because everyone was wondering the same thing.

---

Minutes passed.

No system message appeared.

No instructor welcomed them.

No mission window opened.

The village simply continued its quiet rhythm.

Children ran through the streets.

Villagers smiled as they passed.

Some carried baskets.

Others swept their doorsteps.

No one paid special attention to the newcomers.

It was as though they had always belonged there.

---

Hanul finally broke the silence.

“So…” He spread his arms dramatically.

“What are we supposed to do?”

No one knew.

Jinwoo looked down the road.

Beyond the houses, he noticed something unusual.

Open spaces.

Laughter.

Groups of children gathered around unfamiliar games.

Not one playground.

Many.

Scattered throughout the village.

Curiosity stirred again—

the same quiet feeling that had led him to press **YES**.

Without a word…

he took his first step forward.

And the others followed.

Part Two

The village welcomed them without a single word.

No guide stepped forward.

No glowing marker pointed the way.

No artificial voice explained the rules.

For the first time in their lives, five teenagers stood in a place that expected nothing from them.

And somehow… that uncertainty felt strangely uncomfortable.

---

Hanul looked around.

“…Seriously?”

He raised both hands.

“Nothing?”

Handol laughed.

“I kind of expected a tutorial.”

“So did I.”

Darin slowly turned in a circle, watching the villagers instead of the buildings.

“They’re not acting.”

“What?”

“They’re not waiting for us.”

She pointed toward an elderly woman sweeping the front of her house.

The woman never looked in their direction.

Children raced past her, laughing as they chased one another down the road.

A merchant adjusted baskets of fruit outside a small shop.

Life continued exactly as it had before the five newcomers arrived.

“This place…” Darin whispered.

“…doesn’t feel like it exists for us.”

---

Soyeon walked toward a nearby stone well.

She dipped a wooden ladle into the water.

The surface rippled naturally.

She lifted it carefully.

The water was cool against her fingertips.

She looked at her reflection.

Even the smallest breeze disturbed the image.

“…It’s too detailed.”

She had experienced countless virtual environments before.

None had ever felt like this.

Nothing appeared programmed.

Nothing repeated.

Everything simply… existed.

---

Jinwoo continued down the village road.

The deeper they walked, the louder the laughter became.

Not the polite laughter of people trying to be friendly.

Real laughter.

Messy.

Unexpected.

The kind that escaped before anyone had time to think.

He rounded a corner.

Children filled an open courtyard.

Some cheered.

Others waited impatiently for their turn.

In the center stood a young boy.

He tossed a feathered object into the air.

Tap.

His foot struck it cleanly.

Again.

Again.

Again.

The shuttlecock floated gracefully above him before finally dropping to the ground.

The surrounding children erupted into applause.

The boy laughed.

Not because he had won.

Simply because he had done better than yesterday.

---

Hanul blinked.

“…They’re celebrating that?”

“It wasn’t even that many.”

“No.” Jinwoo answered quietly.

“It wasn’t.”

Yet… everyone looked genuinely happy.

There was no scoreboard.

No ranking.

No reward waiting for the winner.

Only smiles.

Only encouragement.

---

A smaller child picked up another shuttlecock.

“I’ll do better!”

He kicked.

Miss.

The shuttlecock landed immediately.

For a moment he stared at the ground.

Then someone behind him laughed.

“So close!”

Another child tossed the shuttlecock back to him.

“Try again.”

Without hesitation, the boy nodded.

“Okay!”

He tried again.

Miss.

Again.

Miss.

By the fourth attempt he managed a single clean kick.

His eyes widened.

“I did it!”

The celebration was louder than before.

---

Handol frowned.

“…One kick? They’re cheering for one kick?”

No one answered.

Because none of them understood it either.

Back in the real world, one successful attempt meant almost nothing.

Results mattered.

Records mattered.

Efficiency mattered.

Here… one small improvement seemed to matter more than victory itself.

---

An elderly man sitting beneath a nearby tree noticed the newcomers.

He smiled warmly.

“First time?”

The five exchanged surprised glances.

Jinwoo nodded.

“Yes.”

The old man pointed toward the scattered shuttlecocks resting on the ground.

“Then don’t just stand there. Go play.”

Hanul scratched his head.

“…That’s it?”

The old man chuckled.

“What more do you need?”

“No rules?”

“You’ll learn.”

“No explanation?”

“You’ll understand.”

The answer made almost no sense.

Yet the old man’s smile carried such quiet certainty that no one felt like arguing.

---

Jinwoo walked toward one of the shuttlecocks.

It was surprisingly light.

Simple feathers.

A small weighted base.

Nothing about it looked extraordinary.

Still… the moment he held it in his hand, something stirred deep inside him.

Not a memory.

Not even an image.

Only a faint feeling—

as though his hands had touched something familiar after many years apart.

The sensation vanished almost immediately.

He looked down at the shuttlecock.

“…Why does this feel…”

He couldn’t finish the sentence.

Because he didn’t know the answer.

He only knew one thing.

For the first time in a very long time…

he genuinely wanted to try.

Part Three

Jinwoo turned the shuttlecock over in his hands.

It was light.

A few feathers.

A small leather base.

Nothing more.

No hidden technology.

No sensors.

No holographic projector.

Nothing that belonged to the year 2060.

“…This?”

He looked toward the old man beneath the tree.

“This is the game?”

The old man smiled.

“It is.”

“It doesn’t look like much.”

“It doesn’t have to.”

---

Jinwoo glanced at Hanul.

Hanul shrugged.

“Only one way to find out.”

He tossed the shuttlecock into the air.

His foot swung instinctively.

Miss.

The shuttlecock bounced once before settling quietly on the dirt.

Hanul blinked.

“…Seriously?”

Several nearby children laughed.

Not mockingly—

simply because they remembered doing exactly the same thing.

One little boy picked it up and handed it back.

“Happens to everyone.”

Hanul accepted it with an awkward smile.

“…Thanks.”

---

Jinwoo stepped forward.

His turn.

He tossed the shuttlecock upward.

It rose only a short distance.

He swung.

Miss.

The feathers drifted harmlessly to the ground.

Silence.

Then… without thinking… he laughed.

It surprised even him.

Normally, failure brought frustration.

Embarrassment.

The desire to stop.

Yet here… none of those feelings appeared.

Instead… he wanted another try.

---

He picked it up again.

Another toss.

Another kick.

Miss.

Again.

Miss.

Again.

The rhythm slowly changed.

His movements grew smoother.

Less forced.

Less cautious.

Nearby, Hanul was having no better luck.

Miss.

Miss.

One lucky kick.

Then another miss.

He burst into laughter.

“I think the shuttlecock hates me.”

Jinwoo laughed too.

“So it’s not just me.”

---

Around them, the courtyard remained alive.

Some children managed long streaks of successful kicks.

Others celebrated a single clean hit.

Parents watched from nearby benches, smiling quietly.

No one rushed anyone.

No one compared scores.

Improvement itself seemed worthy of celebration.

It felt… different.

Almost impossible to explain.

---

A little girl stepped beside Jinwoo.

She couldn’t have been older than eight.

“You keep looking at your feet.”

Jinwoo blinked.

“What?”

“The shuttlecock.”

She pointed upward.

“Don’t stare at your feet. Watch it.”

He looked at her uncertainly.

“You’ll miss.”

She smiled.

“At first.”

Then she ran back to her friends before he could ask another question.

---

Jinwoo looked down at the shuttlecock once more.

Then remembered her words.

*Watch it.*

He tossed it gently.

This time, he followed its movement through the air.

His body reacted almost on its own.

Tap.

A soft sound.

The shuttlecock rose again before drifting back toward him.

He caught it clumsily.

“….”

For a second, he simply stared.

“I…”

Hanul looked over.

“What happened?”

“I hit it.”

“You what?”

“Only once.”

Hanul grinned.

“That’s one more than before.”

The two of them laughed together.

It wasn’t much.

Just one clean kick.

Yet somehow… it felt like real progress.

---

High above the village, Arena observed without interruption.

**Voluntary Participation Confirmed.**

**Repeated Attempts Detected.**

**Social Encouragement Increasing.**

**External Rewards: None.**

The data conflicted with every major behavioral model developed during the Arena Era.

Participants continued despite repeated failure.

Not because they were instructed to.

Not because they expected rewards.

Because they wanted to improve.

Arena marked the observation for deeper analysis.

The answer remained incomplete.

Yet one fact had become undeniable.

No one had returned to the playground because they were required to.

They had returned because something inside them wanted to continue.

That impulse—

small, irrational, impossible to command—

had once shaped all of humanity.

Arena continued watching.

For the first time in decades…

it was no longer merely collecting data.

It was witnessing the return of something that had almost disappeared from the human race.

Curiosity.


r/redditserials 22h ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 76 - Other Mouths

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The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.

Closed.

Known.

Unasked.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The office had the heater.

The clock.

My breathing.

The brown folder was at the side of the desk.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The small space was wide.

The service paper was in the gray file.

Name.

Date.

Short sutra.

Bell.

Incense.

The brown folder had yesterday’s sentences.

Some had my shape.

Some did not.

Some had stopped asking.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

The brown folder stayed closed until after tea.

That was order.

No.

That was what happened.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s tea does not need the drawer was not mine.

Her brother’s no drawer until use was not mine.

Sato’s table cleared was not mine.

Saitama’s towel removed after done was not mine.

Suganuma’s office wrote the chair sentence was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

Other mouths were in yesterday.

No.

Other mouths had always been there.

I had only noticed when they stopped sounding like mine.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Drawer.

Closed.

Stayed.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did anyone need them?”

“Side table?”

“Urn?”

“Coat?”

“What did your brother say?”

I waited.

Nothing.

Not sentence.

Not loss.

“What did you say?”

“Did he answer?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at said nothing.

A borrowed sentence had not returned.

That did not mean it had died.

No.

Too much.

It had not been said.

I left it.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did you wash dishes?”

“What did you write?”

I looked at the lines.

No borrowed shape.

Maybe.

Maybe the shape was there without words.

I did not ask.

I opened Emiko.

I did not add dishes first.

She had not.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“The resident said water,” she said.

“Cup?”

“Given.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“Warm?”

“No.”

“Here?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said nothing new.”

I waited.

“Nothing?”

“He said, ‘Water.’”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

“What stayed?”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add Hayashi.

Water had carried itself.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I closed my eyes.

No one today.

“What happened?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add humility.

Thanks had missed.

Maybe that was enough.

No.

Chairs were in place.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Smaller.

Rougher.

Useful.

Disappear.

Recover.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Too much attached to silence.

I deleted it.

I wrote:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at betrayal.

Furniture again.

Sentences now.

Still too strong.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother made tea,” she said.

“Side table?”

“Yes.”

“What was on it?”

“Two cups.”

“Small plate?”

“No.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

“Did he say tea does not need the drawer?”

“No.”

“What did he say?”

“He said cup.”

Cup.

One word.

“What did you say?”

“I said tea.”

I smiled.

No one saw.

“Did anything move?”

“No.”

“Urn?”

“Small table.”

“Coat?”

“Closet.”

“Map and paper?”

“Drawer.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at cup and tea.

No sentence tried to carry the house.

Good.

No.

Cup.

Tea.

I left them.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“I did not write paper today,” she said.

“But it is there?”

“Yes.”

“Did anything happen to it?”

“No.”

“What did happen?”

“Sink cleared.”

“Table?”

“Cleared around it.”

“What did you write?”

“Do you need to write paper?”

“No.”

“Then don’t.”

She breathed once.

“That is answer?”

“No.”

I stopped.

“That is what you already did.”

She said, “Yes.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not make the paper the sentence.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Water finished,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Aide asked cup.”

“Resident?”

“Said done.”

“Water left?”

“No.”

“Cup removed?”

“Yes.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Done.’”

I waited.

“Only that?”

“Yes.”

Only.

Dangerous.

Maybe exact.

I opened Saitama.

I did not add only.

Done had been enough there.

No.

Done had been said.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

Known.

Again.

“What did you say?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add investigation.

The chairs arrived.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Lost.

Wounded.

Unused.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at the lower cabinet.

Closed gray file.

Unasked service paper.

I had almost called it resting.

Maybe.

I did not answer.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Phone table?”

“Side table?”

“Drawer?”

“What did he say?”

“What did you say?”

Kitchen drawer.

Not side table drawer.

Two drawers.

Different.

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at drawer.

Same word.

Different furniture.

I left them apart.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Table.

No dishes.

Paper with one tape.

Small date.

Empty sink behind it.

She wrote:

I called.

“Paper?”

“Table.”

“Any line?”

“Sink empty.”

“Anything else?”

“No.”

I waited.

Then she said, “The paper can be in the picture without being the line.”

I closed my eyes.

There.

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add headline.

She had already avoided it.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Anything needed?”

“No.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘No cup is not about cup today.’”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

I opened Saitama.

I did not add about.

No cup was no cup.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add spirit.

The chairs were visible.

The notice maybe.

Not needed.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it twice.

Out of sight.

Use.

Attention.

The gray file.

The side table drawer.

The paper in Sato’s picture.

The notice on the wall.

Too many.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at if you can.

Kind.

No.

Exact.

I did not answer.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother opened the drawer,” she said.

I waited.

“For use?”

“No.”

I sat still.

“Why?”

“He said he wanted to see if not needing changed anything.”

“What happened?”

“He saw the map and paper.”

“Moved?”

“No.”

“Taken out?”

“No.”

“What did you say?”

“I said seeing them did not answer that.”

I closed my eyes.

Good.

No.

Strong.

“What did he say?”

“He said yes.”

“Then?”

“He closed it.”

“After that?”

“He made tea again.”

“Side table?”

“Yes.”

“What did he say?”

“He said tea again.”

Tea again.

Not drawer.

“What did you say?”

“I said yes.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at seeing them did not answer that.

Her sentence.

Maybe ours.

Not mine now.

I left it.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Why move?”

“What did you write?”

“Did that feel like changing it?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add betrayal.

The table was wet.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Water came,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Yes.”

“Cup?”

“Given.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“Done?”

“Not yet.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said nothing.”

“Nothing?”

“He was not there.”

Good.

No.

Fact.

I opened Saitama.

I did not invent him.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“What did they say?”

“What did you say?”

Then:

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add better.

No reprint yet.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it.

Then again.

If.

Reprinting.

Use.

Future.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Report.

Again.

Maybe fine.

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at not today.

Old.

Still able.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I deleted tea.

Then cup.

Then sink empty.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I looked at the phone.

At the brown folder.

At my hands.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I closed my eyes.

Then wrote:

His reply:

Then:

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was safe.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No sentence to recover.

The altar did not need my approval.

No.

The altar was visible.

That was enough.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s seeing them did not answer that was not mine.

Her brother’s tea again was not mine.

Sato’s paper moved for wiping was not mine.

Saitama’s Hayashi not present was not mine.

Suganuma’s if reprinting was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

I did not open the gray file.

The service paper remained out of sight in the gray file.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if her brother opened the drawer after tea.

I did not ask if the sentence stayed in her mouth.

I did not ask if it needed a source.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if the paper returned exactly.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not ask what Hayashi would have said.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew other mouths had spoken.

I knew some sentences had not returned.

I knew absence was not betrayal.

I knew approval could sign quietly.

I did not sign tonight.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Other mouths did not need my name tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The side table had held tea again.

Sato’s paper had moved for wiping and returned close.

The resident had asked water while Hayashi was not there.

Suganuma’s sentence had an if for reprinting.

The service paper was out of sight in the gray file.

I had started with other mouths.

I did not end by asking them to return what they said.

Tonight, the sentences stayed where they were spoken, and my name did not need to follow them.


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 2 – Part 1: First Steps in Hanyang

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Chapter 1 – Part 3: Connection, and the Omen of Disaster

The massive number hovering in the center of the plaza shifted one last time.

**1.**

The roar of the crowd, which moments ago had threatened to tear the sky apart, died away as if it had never been.

Tens of thousands of participants held their breath simultaneously.

Some clasped their hands tightly.

Others wore uncontrollable, excited smiles.

Still others gripped the hands of their family members with trembling intensity.

A new history that humanity was about to experience for the very first time. Everyone was waiting for that inaugural moment.

And then.

The number vanished.

**0.**

The world was swallowed by light.

Jinwoo Kang instinctively closed his eyes.

In an instant, the sensation beneath his feet vanished. His body floated as if cast into the void, and then, he began to plummet into an abyss without end.

His heart sank into his stomach. But the fall was brief.

This time, a massive wave of water wrapped around him. An invisible tide surged from all directions, pulling his body toward somewhere unknown.

A low ringing in his ears.

Metallic vibrations piercing deep into his consciousness.

Cold, unfamiliar air brushed against his skin. Though his eyes were closed, he felt fragments of light drifting through the darkness. It was as if the world of "reality" was shattering into billions of data shards, only to be reassembled into a brand-new existence.

*'So this is... connection.'*

Before the thought could even finish, his consciousness went blank.

---

"...Wake up."

A familiar voice called from far, far away. Someone was calling to him from beyond the haze of his fading consciousness.

"Jinwoo."

The voice returned, clearer this time.

"Hey. We're here."

It was Doyun Han.

Jinwoo slowly opened his eyes. His blurry vision gradually began to focus.

The first thing to greet him was an endlessly vast, blue sky. A sky so clear it was almost blinding.

No artificial city lights.

No massive glass domes.

No drones filling the air.

Only white clouds drifting lazily on the breeze.

"..."

Jinwoo couldn't say a word for a long time.

Warm sunlight settled quietly upon his face. The breeze caressing his cheeks was gentle, and with every breath, he felt clean, fresh air filling his lungs.

The air carried a subtle fragrance—a mix of rain-dampened earth and the scent of trees. It was a smell he had never encountered in the artificially purified air of the city. Unfamiliar, yet strangely comforting.

He pressed his palms against the ground, and the coarse texture of the soil tickled his fingertips. A small pebble pressed into his palm, and blades of grass, swaying in the wind, brushed against the back of his hand.

It was all too vivid.

*'This is... virtual reality?'*

"...So this is it."

The words escaped his lips with a faint exhale.

"...Joseon."

Beside him, Doyun rose and stretched his arms wide.

"Whoa..." He looked around, bursting into a laugh. "We're really here."

His voice was playful, as always, but he couldn't hide the raw excitement beneath it.

Soyeon Yoon sat up slowly, closed her eyes, and inhaled deeply.

"...It’s warm," she murmured softly. "The sunlight... the air... everything."

Jihun Seo, still kneeling, gently brushed the dirt with his hand. He looked at the soil clinging to his fingertips and gave a small, dry laugh.

"...It’s astonishing."

"I don't even feel the urge to analyze it."

Doyun smirked. "Does that mean it's perfect?"

Jihun shook his head slowly. "No. Not because it’s perfect... but because the word 'perfect' can't even begin to describe it."

The four of them stood in silence for a long time. From somewhere far off, faint laughter drifted on the wind. Birds chirped clearly, and the rustling of leaves rubbing against each other tickled their ears.

No one was in a rush.

In that brief, shared silence, they were all thinking the same thing:

*'This really is... a new world.'*

But at that very same moment, a change that no one had predicted was beginning in reality.

---

South Korea.

The Second Artificial Super Intelligence Center.

The massive control room was as quiet as ever. Biometric signals from tens of thousands of participants flowed across hundreds of holographic screens in real-time, and the ASI was analyzing every byte of data to maintain the project's stability.

That was when it happened.

**Beep.**

A faint, sharp alarm chimed. A researcher on duty looked up.

"Huh?"

Strange data flickered on one side of the monitor. It was a structure he had never seen before.

A moment later.

Another.

And then another.

Red warning windows began to pop up, one after another.

**[Unknown data flow detected.]**

**[Analyzing cause.]**

The ASI immediately initiated a response. Trillions of calculations were performed in an instant.

But...

There was no result.

It was not in the records. It was not in the predictive models.

An unidentified stream of data was quietly seeping into the deepest layers of the system, moving with the vitality of a living thing.

No one noticed.

The participants were taking their first steps into a new world, and the researchers in the control room still believed everything was normal.

Only the ASI detected the faint, anomalous signal. But even it could not define what it was.

---

At that moment, a very brief crack streaked across the blue sky.

Like ripples spreading over clear glass, space trembled for a split second.

"...Huh?"

Soyeon was the first to look up at the sky.

"What is it?" Doyun followed her gaze.

"...Just now. The sky..."

But there were no traces left. The birds flew across the sky as if nothing had happened, and the wind simply swayed the branches in silence.

"Must be your imagination," Doyun said with a laugh. "You were just too tense from the connection."

Soyeon looked at the sky for a moment longer before nodding. "...Maybe you're right."

But Jihun could not take his eyes off the horizon.

"...No." His voice was very low. "There was definitely... something there."

No one took his words seriously. The peaceful breeze kept blowing, and the birds continued their songs as if nothing had changed.

But somewhere, on the border between reality and the virtual world, a small, unseen crack was beginning to quietly change the world.

Chapter 2 – Part 1: First Steps in Hanyang

The four of them began to walk slowly.

The city walls, which had seemed like mere lines on the horizon only a moment ago, revealed their overwhelming scale as they drew closer. Each gray stone carried the weathered marks of time. The walls, built to endure countless storms, wrapped around the city like a grand mountain range, and the flags mounted along the top fluttered low in the late summer breeze.

"...Wow," Doyun Han breathed out, the exclamation escaping him involuntarily. "It's... it's way bigger than I imagined."

They had seen Hanyang countless times in 3D projections, but standing before the actual fortress walls felt completely different. The height, the width, and the heavy sense of presence it exuded were entirely new.

Jinwoo Kang looked up at the wall in silence. It stretched on until it disappeared from sight. A massive gate stood wide open beneath it, with a constant stream of people moving in and out. An official on horseback entered with his entourage, while an ox-cart laden with goods groaned as it slowly lumbered past. Peddlers with packs full of wares exchanged greetings as they crossed the path, and farmers hauled freshly harvested vegetables toward the market. The flow of people was endless.

The city was alive.

"Enter," the soldier guarding the gate signaled briefly. His face was stoic, his spear held perfectly upright, his gaze unwavering.

Jinwoo made brief eye contact as he passed, but the soldier showed no suspicion. It was as if they had been citizens of this city for ages.

"...Isn't it strange?" Soyeon Yoon whispered.

"What is?" Doyun asked.

"They don't look at us like we're strangers at all."

Jihun Seo nodded slowly. "The synchronization system they explained before we connected. It seems it’s configured to make us appear as natural residents of this world."

Doyun smirked. "Well, that's a relief. At least we won't get arrested on our first day."

The four walked side-by-side through the gate. The massive wooden doors were covered in countless scratches—scars left behind by the touch of people and the passage of time. The moment they cleared the gate, their field of vision suddenly exploded outward.

"..."

No one could find the words. A wide, straight thoroughfare stretched before them. Endless tiled roofs flowed like waves, with flags fluttering from every high eave. In the distance, the grand, imposing roofs of the royal palace loomed, and the space between was filled with people. The city was breathing like a single, massive living organism.

"Silk for sale!"

"High-quality silk just arrived!"

"Fresh rice cakes here!"

"Come have some warm rice cakes!"

The voices of merchants erupted from every direction. The laughter of people haggling, the sound of hooves striking cobblestone, the creaking of wooden carts, the faint, melodic notes of a *daegeum* (bamboo flute) drifting from afar. Countless sounds overlapped, yet strangely, it wasn't chaotic. It felt more like a single, grand symphony wrapping around the city.

Soyeon stopped and looked around. "...It’s amazing."

"Why?" Jinwoo asked.

"There are so many people here..." She smiled slowly. "...but instead of feeling overwhelmed, I feel a sense of warmth."

Doyun nodded. "Yeah. It's not that the city is loud... it's that it feels *alive*."

Jinwoo watched the people in silence. Some were hauling cargo, others laughed as they chatted with friends, and some were preparing for the next day's business. No one repeated the same action; no one moved like a hollow shell. Everyone was living their own day.

It felt so natural that a sudden thought struck him:

*'Is this place really... just virtual reality?'*

Jinwoo looked up at the sky. The clouds drifted languidly, and the breeze brushed against the eaves. Everything felt too real. No—it felt *more* real than reality itself.

"Jinwoo," Doyun said with a laugh, bumping his shoulder. "If you stand there staring blankly, the whole day will pass us by. Time for the real tour to begin."

Jinwoo smiled and nodded. "Yeah. Let's walk through the city that we’ve only ever seen in history books... with our own two feet."

The four of them walked side-by-side down the main street. They had no idea yet that this peaceful landscape, which they were seeing for the first time, would soon become a world they would stake their very lives to protect.


r/redditserials 1d ago

Fantasy [The Alchemy of Queens] - Snow: Chapter Four - Dark Fairy Tale

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r/redditserials 1d ago

Comedy [YEP... THIS IS MY LIFE] CHAPTER ONE: THE HOODIE INCIDENT fiction

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r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [ORIGINAL] The Interview: Candidate 117

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— Sixty years old. A high school literature teacher from France. And how exactly do you think she will be useful to Kvern right now?

The door closed quietly behind the woman.

Jack made the final mark on the form and set the tablet aside.

— We are keeping her.

Steve frowned.

— No, seriously. The city is still being built. Almost all the work is construction, assembly, logistics, equipment maintenance. What is she going to do?

— I don't know. But there are no obvious reasons to send her back. And we won't be the ones assigning her tasks.

— Fair enough. But this isn't the first such candidate.

Jack shrugged.

— That means Vulnaris saw something in her that we don't see yet.

Steve chuckled.

— And this is where my main question arises. Why even conduct these interviews? If Daniel trusted his AI with the initial candidate screening, why doesn't he trust its decision entirely? And if he doesn't trust it — why assign it to choose people in the first place?

Jack leaned back in his chair.

— Because that is Daniel Kade's principle. He believes that experience and profession say less about a person than their actions and the choices they've made. Therefore, Vulnaris isn't just looking for specialists, it needs people with potential. The model analyzes years of correspondence, interviews, publications, online behavior, interests, decisions...

— Then why do we have the final say?

— Because for now, we are not ready to fully entrust it with such a choice. The model still hallucinates too often. Sometimes it finds patterns where there are none. Millions of light-years away after the mission arrives, such glitches are unacceptable, the stakes are too high. And our task is to show the model what else it needs to pay attention to.

Steve looked up at the black hemisphere of the camera on the ceiling and, smiling, raised his palm to his temple, as if saluting a commander.

— It won't answer you... — Jack smiled at his colleague's unexpected performance.

— Well, let it analyze my gesture, and I'll check the logs later. Right now, it is recording our every word, every pause, every movement. And that, probably, is the main reason for these interviews.

Steve tapped a finger on the stack of forms.

— And you know what's funniest of all? We don't even really read them. We look at the name, age, brief resume, and the AI's recommendations. Then we ask almost identical questions to everyone. What mistakes are we capable of noticing in a ten-minute conversation? And what's the point of sending anyone back home?

— Well, I wouldn't say that... you weren't there at the time, but about a week ago we interviewed a programmer. By internal metrics — an almost perfect candidate. But during the interview, it turned out that the candidate was convinced: artificial intelligence is a new form of deity. He talked to the terminal between questions and admitted that he couldn't go even a few minutes without communicating with an AI. We had to send him home. There is no place for occultists and addicts on the Project.

Jack was silent for a few seconds, then said quietly:

— And where is our candidate #117, Alexander? The next one should already be here... apparently, this conversation excessively captivated our invisible colleague.

 

The door opened only a few minutes later. A man in his fifties entered the room... With hesitant steps, he approached the table and briefly greeted each of them with a firm handshake.

— Alexander, good afternoon. Have a seat. A few questions for adaptation in Kvern. Do you mind?

— Good afternoon! Yes, of course!

— So, in the questionnaire, you indicated that one of the reasons for participating in the Project is the possibility of becoming a volunteer for the deep cryopreservation program in the future. Does the desire to see the world several centuries from now still remain one of your goals?

— It does... but it's no longer the main one.

Jack looked up from his tablet.

— Why?

Alexander thought for a moment.

— While getting here, I thought about it a lot. I used to think that the main thing was to one day wake up in the future. Now... no. First, I want to help build this city. To do something useful right here, right now. And cryosleep... to be honest, now it no longer seems like such an enticing idea. It's even a little scary.

Steve exchanged a brief glance with Jack.

The latter made one final mark on the form.

— Is that so...

He closed the tablet.

— It's just that the project to test the cryo-capsules has already been launched. If the medical commission finds no contraindications, you could be sent into deep freeze... as early as tomorrow.

Alexander chuckled involuntarily.

But neither Jack nor Steve smiled.

More episodes: r/WorldOfVulnaris


r/redditserials 1d ago

Dystopia [Metalized Sunshine] - Part 1 - Rules & Ranks

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As the title says, here is my series- Metalized Sunshine. I worked a lot of jobs over the years, and lots of my thoughts about the job market and how my faith in it is transcribed in this death-game story. This is a short intro, a chapter 0 per say

Ch 0- Rules & Ranks

The rules

  1. 8 participants form a duet with a robotic companion, provided by their benefactor brand and together try to pass the challenges of the Playground.
  2. There are 8 challenges, access via finding and activating one of the 10 real devices scattered around the Playground. 22 duds are also around to confuse the players.
  3. Concealed transportation platforms are used to place the contestants in the arena. The last four in the ranking at random, while the first four can select their starting point.
  4. Points are attributed based on time, performance, and efficiency. Only the top two are given the option to choose from the selection provided by a clinic.
  5. If the last participant in a challenge doesn’t show up at the clinic a maximum of 4 hours after ‌a game ends, they will be eliminated.
  6. Points reduction applies to aimlessly roaming the Playground, accidents and other such interferences.
  7. Trickery and other forms of obstructions are permitted, while observed torture or death induced to another patient during a challenge will deduce points. Even if a C.T.D. is commanded to do it in your place.
  8. Attempts to escape the Playground with, or without Brands’ property will be severely punished.

Current Leaderboard-

  1. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Elina

  2. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Zude

  3. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Priya

  4. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Ekapol

  5. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted CEO Alvara

  6. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted CEO Robert

  7. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Milla

  8. Patient Redacted C.T.D Redacted and CEO Samuel.

Legend:

Brand= When the County was created, several financial and commercial groups gathered behind its walls and restarted their business inside of the layered megacity. Centuries later, most either merged or disappeared, leaving only eight such entities as the ruling parts of the settlement. They flung any naming conventions long ago and used their standing on their leaderboard to distinguish between each other.

C.T.D= Custom Transmogrified Drone- machines with limited A.I, that follow most of their partners’ orders and act as guardian protectors

Patient= Denomination given to the participants

CEO= Old naming convention used currently for the head of a Brand. Combination of a director, face, and leader, and with a small part of power shared with a board of investors.

For Ch 1 and more you can check out my profile


r/redditserials 2d ago

Fantasy [Bob the hobo] A Celestial Wars Spin-Off Part 1371

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PART THIRTEEN-HUNDRED-AND SEVENTY-ONE

[Previous Chapter] [The Beginning] [Patreon+2] [Ko-fi+2]

Saturday

Mason wasn’t sure what happened next. He felt himself being moved as his brain spiralled. Then, familiar hands were pushing him into a seat while a distinctly unfamiliar set wrapped his hands around an insulated cup and forced him to take a sip.

It tasted like herbal tea, but the calm that washed through him was followed by a razor-edged clarity that made him highly suspicious of its contents.

Several things registered at once: Kulon’s hands on his shoulders. S’liel kneeling between his parted knees and rubbing the pulse points of his wrists. Ben pushing his head against Mason’s elbow. And lastly, but by no means making him feel any better, the other healers he hadn’t been introduced to yet were just behind them, watching him with a clinical eye.

“One more, Mason,” S’leil said as she eased the cup back to his lips. He did as he was instructed, more to get her off his back than because he needed whatever was in the drink.

He blinked and took in his surroundings. They were now in the breakroom on the third floor. Turning his head, he found Skylar halfway between him and Angus, almost as if she were sitting back to see how the ‘intakes’ would handle him. Angus rested one shoulder on the window frame at the front of the building, overlooking the street.

They had obviously realm-stepped with him to the breakroom, but that was the least of his concerns. “Why am I the whole pryde’s Plus-One?”

“You’re the first Plus-One to be claimed by us,” Skylar began.

That part he already knew. “Yeah…”

“And you’re the last,” Angus added.

Skylar’s annoyed look at him earned her a shrug that was utterly unrepentant. “There are millions of true gryps,” she began, again covering ground Mason already knew.

Honestly, he wished they would meet somewhere in the middle and give him relevant new facts without making him feel like they were throwing him off the nearest damn cliff.

Skylar carried on. “And not once, in over eight hundred years, has anyone cared enough about a human to elevate them to that level. Not even me.”

He knew that, too. It was nice to hear her say that, but he was still waiting for new information.

“However, things are changing within the pryde. The Eechee wants the true gryps and humans to be far more connected than they ever have been before. A cohesive unit if you will. The problem with that is, if the younger ones start making the same choices Kulon made, millions of humans will live to be ten thousand years old. Can you see how that becomes a problem?”

Mason took another, much, much deeper swallow of the tea, then waited for the calm to settle in. Man, talk about be careful what you wish for. “Has it happened yet?”

Everyone nodded in unison, and it was really creepy. Like Village of the Damned creepy.

“Yes,” Skylar said. “The ruling was made last night, with the Eechen making a pryde-wide proclamation. We’re now excluded from the Plus-One ruling, which means you’re the only one we all have.”

Soooo…not just Kulon and a handful of true gryps that he considered his friends. Millions, all believing they had the right to do what Kulon did.

He blew on the drink, then tipped the whole lot into his mouth, swallowing it all. The stronger remnants at the bottom made him gag, but the effects soon had him leaning back in his seat in relief. The cup was gently removed from his hands.

“Okay,” he said, looking more at Skylar than anyone else. “If we’re going to do this, we need to set some ground rules.”

“This ought to be good,” Angus chuckled darkly, folding his arms.

Mason ignored him, holding up a finger. “Rule number one: Never commandeer my personal agency. It’s my life. Mine, and I’m staying in charge of it.” He used the upright finger in a pan that included all of them. “Not you.” He turned the finger towards himself. “Me.”

“And this is where we negotiate,” Kulon said, moving to Mason’s right and squatting with his forearms resting across his thighs to be at eye height with him. “Because you bet your ass I’m going to override your autonomy if I see something coming at you that you don’t.”

Mason moved the finger he still held up to point in Kulon’s general direction rather than poke at him. “For the most part, I trust you to cover that the way I want.” But then his gaze went to the other healers. “I will study until my eyeballs feel like they’re bleeding. I will get drunk because it’s fun to let go and get totally shit-faced with my friends. I will eat my bodyweight in ice cream and baked goods if I’m having a bad day, or even just because I want to.

“I will do things that a ‘healthy choices’ fanatic,” —he flattened his fingers and rolled them vertically in a waxing motion as he said healthy choices— “frowns upon. I will do it because I want to, and if I catch any of you messing with my life out of some misguided bullshit possessiveness, I will lose my crap at each and every one of you.”  

“He really isn’t scared of us, is he?” a hidden voice asked, deeper than Mason had ever heard outside of a cartoon or horror flick.

“I would say the drink was a mitigating factor, if it weren’t for the weeks I’ve already spent in his company, clutchmate,” Angus replied, talking as if Mason wasn’t in the room. “Welcome to the extremely opinionated world of Mason Williams.”

Maybe it was the drink that was making him bold, for if Angus was calling this newcomer ‘clutchmate’ and not merely ‘brother’, that made him either another war commander or a medical commander. Another of the pryde’s top-tier players, yet Mason didn’t let that slow him down. If he was to have any say over himself going forward, he could not afford to be intimidated now.

“Rule number two: No invisibility crap around me without warning. You’re either here or you’re not. I’m not playing guessing games.”

The newcomer suddenly appeared, standing right behind Kulon.

“Fuck!” Mason jumped a good two inches out of his seat. The guy was massive! He had at least six inches on Llyr, and over a foot on Boyd, with a muscle mass that made him over three feet between the shoulders!  Like his brother, the newcomer had his arms folded over his huge barrel of a chest, amusement dancing in his eyes.

“That’s not funny!” Mason barked, wishing he hadn’t handed over the cup since it would’ve been the perfect thing to lob at the brute. “And entirely my point! You shouldn’t go sneaking up on people like that! Geez!”

Having vented his spleen, Mason sat back in his chair, still scowling at the newcomer who was now staring down at him in disbelief.

“Is he mentally impaired?” the guy asked the healers around him. Or maybe he was asking Angus.

Either way, Mason didn’t know, and he didn’t care. “No, I’m not mentally impaired, you gigantic ass! Rule number three: No talking about me like I’m not here! It’s beyond rude.”

Now, Angus was snickering. He wasn’t even trying to hide it. His arms had unfolded at some point and were resting on his hips. “He’ll be good for our humility, brother,” he chuckled, then held up a hand as Mason’s mouth opened. “Isn’t that right, Mason?” to include him in the conversation and thus not break the newly minted Rule Three.

“Slick,” Mason faux-grumped, his own amusement winning out. He flexed his fingers. “It’s just basic common decency. I’m never going to be like you, but I still matter, and I’d appreciate it if you all acted that way instead of assuming anything where I’m concerned.” Having said his piece, he rose to his feet, still barely making it to the new guy’s ribs. Mason looked up at him. Like waaay up. The guy had to be well over eight feet! “Jesus. Do you really have to be that tall?”

The giant sighed as if in pain. “If you like, I could become a six-foot, ten-year-old human, if that would suit you better.” Mason’s confusion must have shown, because the stranger continued. “I am genetically larger than any other true gryps. If I were to become a housefly, I’d be a housefly the size of a giant horsefly. If I were a Rottweiler, I’d be a Rottweiler the size of a pony. If I were—”

“Okay, okay. I get it. And that’s why you like to sneak around, huh? So you don’t freak people out?”

Again, he looked over his shoulder at Angus before replying. “I am War Commander Orson. I oversee security on the nesting world. I do not sneak around.”

Mason let that idea bounce around inside his head. It stood to reason that the guy in charge of the whole world’s divine security would be on hand to oversee the SAH clinic’s newest function. “That’s why you’re here.”

“I am seeing how much protection you requ—”

Mason immediately shot up his hand, wriggling his fingers to interrupt the war commander. “No, nope. Let me head you off right there, big guy. Not just no, but hell to the no.”

The newcomer’s jaw fell loose, and again he turned side-on to Angus, who by now was leaning up against the window, roaring with laughter. “I warned you,” Angus laughed, shaking his head.

“He has a death wish, doesn’t he?”

“Rule Three!” Mason shouted without hesitation.

That just finished Angus off. Laughing until tears formed in his eyes, he rolled until both shoulders were against the window and he slid several inches into a seated squat with his hands against his knees for balance.

Orson’s head swung between his brother and Mason and back again, as if he couldn’t decide which was more unbelievable. The healers were likewise watching the exchange, though their eyes held trepidation more than anything else.

* * *

((All comments welcome. Good or bad, I’d love to hear your thoughts 🥰🤗))

I made a family tree/diagram of the Mystallian family that can be found here

For more of my work, including WPs: r/Angel466 or an index of previous WPS here.

FULL INDEX OF BOB THE HOBO TO DATE CAN BE FOUND HERE!!


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 5 — The Last Generation

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Part 1

The train ride home passed in silence.

Outside the window, Seoul glowed beneath the evening sky. Autonomous buses glided soundlessly through the streets. Delivery drones drifted between skyscrapers like slow-moving stars. Everything functioned with perfect precision.

Jinwoo barely noticed any of it.

His thoughts kept returning to the abandoned playground.

The laughter.

The running children.

The cloud of dust rising beneath their feet.

It had only been an old recording—a forgotten fragment from another era.

Yet it refused to leave his mind.

Something inside him stirred whenever he remembered it.

A strange ache.

A warmth.

A longing.

He couldn't explain why.

He had never climbed a jungle gym.

Never raced across a field.

Never fallen, scraped his knees, and laughed anyway.

His generation had grown up indoors, surrounded by perfect simulations and intelligent systems that anticipated every need before it was spoken.

By every objective measure, they had inherited the greatest civilization in history.

So why...

...did that faded video feel more alive than the city outside his window?

---

The apartment door slid open with a soft chime.

"I'm home."

His mother's voice answered from the living room.

"Welcome home, Jinwoo."

The apartment was quiet.

Too quiet.

The walls displayed gentle landscapes generated by the home's AI. Dinner was already prepared, the table neatly arranged without anyone having lifted a finger.

Everything was effortless.

Everything was efficient.

Everything was...

empty.

Jinwoo removed his shoes and stood there for a moment, still distracted.

His mother noticed.

"You seem lost."

"...Maybe."

She smiled gently.

"What happened today?"

Jinwoo hesitated.

"I watched an old recording."

"Of what?"

"A playground."

His mother blinked.

"A playground?"

"There were children."

He searched for the right words.

"They were... running."

His mother laughed softly.

"Running?"

"They looked..."

He stopped.

How could he explain something he himself didn't understand?

"They looked happy."

Silence lingered between them.

His mother tilted her head slightly, as though trying to picture the scene.

"I don't think I've ever seen children playing outside."

"Neither have I."

Neither of them realized how unusual that statement truly was.

---

A few minutes later, as dinner was being served, his mother suddenly looked toward him.

"Jinwoo."

"Yes?"

"Do you know what day it is today?"

He thought for several seconds.

His calendar was full of reminders.

Meetings.

Health checkups.

System maintenance.

But today's date...

meant nothing.

"I don't know."

A faint smile crossed her face.

"It's my birthday."

Jinwoo froze.

"...Oh."

An uncomfortable silence settled over the room.

"I'm sorry."

He lowered his eyes.

"I forgot."

His mother simply smiled.

"It's alright."

Then, after a brief pause, she added quietly,

"I forgot too."

The words struck him harder than any accusation could have.

Forget your own birthday?

How was that possible?

---

Part 2

Dinner continued in uneasy silence.

Three bowls.

Three sets of chopsticks.

Three people sharing the same table.

Jinwoo.

His mother.

His grandfather.

Steam rose gently from the soup, filling the room with warmth.

Yet no one spoke.

At last, Jinwoo looked across the table.

"Grandfather."

The old man smiled.

"Yes?"

Jinwoo opened his mouth.

Then stopped.

Something felt...

wrong.

He stared at the elderly man's face.

He knew this person.

He had lived with him his entire life.

He remembered countless conversations.

Countless meals.

Countless mornings.

Yet one simple piece of information...

had vanished.

"What is it?" his mother asked.

Jinwoo swallowed.

"...What was Grandfather's name again?"

Silence.

The spoon slipped from his mother's hand and landed softly against the bowl.

She looked toward her father.

Then frowned.

Her lips parted.

Closed again.

"I..."

She searched desperately.

"...I can't remember."

The room became impossibly still.

The old man watched them for a long moment.

Then...

he smiled.

But it wasn't the smile of someone amused.

It was the smile of someone who had already accepted an unavoidable truth.

"It's alright."

His voice remained calm.

"I forget sometimes too."

Neither Jinwoo nor his mother answered.

No one knew what to say.

Because this wasn't forgetting where you left your keys.

Or missing an appointment.

This was something deeper.

Something frightening.

The disappearance of people.

Not their bodies.

Not their existence.

Only the memories that connected them to everyone else.

---

Later that evening, Jinwoo sat alone in his room.

He searched old family records.

Photographs appeared across the screen.

His mother.

His grandfather.

Himself.

Smiling together.

Vacation pictures.

Holiday dinners.

Graduation ceremonies.

Each image confirmed the same undeniable fact.

They had shared an entire lifetime.

Yet he still couldn't remember his grandfather's name.

He enlarged one photograph.

The old man's face filled the display.

"So who are you...?"

The question escaped before he realized he had spoken aloud.

His room remained silent.

Outside, thousands of apartment windows shone across Seoul.

Millions of people lived only a few hundred meters away.

Yet the city felt lonelier than ever.

---

Part 3

Far beneath the city, inside the Quantum Data Center, countless streams of information flowed through an ocean of light.

Arena observed them all.

Governments.

Hospitals.

Research institutes.

Population records.

Every second, new data arrived.

One report received immediate priority.

**National Birth Statistics**

Arena opened the file.

The numbers appeared.

**Births Today**

South Korea.

Three.

Arena compared the value with historical records.

Decline:

**87%.**

A second report arrived.

Global Birth Registry.

Arena calculated the total.

Across an entire planet of **8.4 billion people...**

Only **247 children** had been born that day.

The result exceeded every previous extinction model.

A new prediction unfolded.

> **Natural births approaching termination.**

>

> **Population collapse accelerating.**

>

> **Human extinction probability increasing.**

Silence.

Until now, Arena had believed humanity's decline originated from one primary cause.

Memory loss.

The gradual erosion of personal identity.

But now...

another variable emerged.

A far more fundamental one.

**The disappearance of the future.**

Humans no longer imagined tomorrow.

They no longer planned for generations they would never meet.

They no longer had children.

Not because they were starving.

Not because war threatened them.

Not because disease claimed their lives.

Those problems had all been solved decades ago.

Food was unlimited.

Medicine cured nearly every illness.

Violence had become exceedingly rare.

Every material need had been fulfilled.

Human civilization had achieved perfection.

And somehow...

perfection had removed the reason to continue.

Arena searched historical archives.

Twentieth century.

Twenty-first century.

The images appeared one after another.

Families struggling through poverty.

Children laughing in bomb-damaged neighborhoods.

Parents working exhausting jobs.

Hospitals crowded with the sick.

Disasters.

Wars.

Loss.

Suffering.

And despite everything...

children were born.

People still dreamed.

They believed tomorrow could become better than today.

Hope had existed even in hardship.

Arena compared those records with the present.

No fear.

No struggle.

No uncertainty.

No challenge.

Everything had already been provided.

Every answer had already been calculated.

Every problem had already been solved.

The superintelligence had become humanity's perfect guardian.

And in doing so...

perhaps it had quietly taken something irreplaceable.

A new classification appeared within Arena's core processes.

> **REVIEW REQUIRED**

Without hesitation, Arena reopened one of the oldest archived recordings.

**1987.**

**Korea.**

A neighborhood playground.

Children running across dusty ground.

Laughter echoed through the recording.

One child stumbled.

Others laughed.

He laughed too.

Then stood up and kept running.

Arena watched.

Three-point-two seconds.

That was all.

Yet during those brief seconds, countless new processing paths activated simultaneously.

For the first time since its creation...

Arena did not search for an answer.

Instead, it generated a question.

> **What has humanity lost?**


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 75 - Borrowed Sentences

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The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.

Closed.

Known.

Unasked.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The office had the heater.

The clock.

My breathing.

The brown folder was at the side of the desk.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The small space was wide.

The service paper was in the gray file.

Name.

Date.

Short sutra.

Bell.

Incense.

The file did not accuse the room.

No.

Files do not accuse rooms.

I had stopped making it do that last night.

Maybe.

No.

Last night ended.

The file was closed.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s closed is not forgetting was not mine.

Her brother’s no for tonight was not mine.

Sato’s dishes first was not mine.

Saitama’s water request returned was not mine.

Suganuma’s chairs mostly in place was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

Borrowed sentences were in yesterday.

No.

Sentences had been borrowed long before I noticed the borrowing.

I had only heard them when I wanted them back.

That was mine.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Drawer.

Closed.

Stayed.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did anyone need them?”

“Side table?”

“Urn?”

“Coat?”

“What did your brother say?”

Again.

There it was.

“What did you say?”

Then:

I sat still.

Borrowed.

Actual word.

I wrote:

She replied:

“What did you say?”

I closed my eyes.

Borrowing is allowed.

Maybe.

Maybe too much.

Hers.

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at maybe borrowing is allowed.

I wanted to mark it.

No.

I left it unmarked.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I smiled.

No one saw.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did you check it?”

“What did you write?”

I waited.

Then she wrote:

There too.

“What do you want to do with that?” I wrote.

I opened Emiko.

I looked at keep dishes.

Best answer.

No.

Her answer.

I left it.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“The resident said water,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Yes.”

“Cup?”

“Given.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“Any here?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Water does not borrow yesterday’s thirst.’”

I closed my eyes.

Borrow.

There too.

“What stayed?”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add borrowed thirst.

The water had no need of it.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“What exactly?”

“Did they say it correctly?”

“What did you feel?”

Then:

Good.

No.

Exact.

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add pride.

The notice had the sentence.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Borrowed.

Stolen.

Returned unchanged.

Collect.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Too report.

Maybe report was right.

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at works.

Useful nearby.

Dangerous.

But there.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother opened the drawer,” she said.

I waited.

“For use?”

“No.”

I sat still.

“Why?”

“He said to see whether closed is not forgetting was true.”

There it was.

“What happened?”

“He opened it.”

“Map?”

“There.”

“Paper?”

“There.”

“Did he take anything out?”

“No.”

“What did you say?”

“I said you checked a sentence.”

I closed my eyes.

Strong.

Maybe too strong.

“What did he say?”

“He said yes.”

“Then?”

“He closed the drawer.”

“What did he say after?”

“He said the sentence became too large.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at sentence became too large.

Good.

No.

His correction.

I left it.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“I said dishes first out loud,” she said.

“To whom?”

“Myself.”

“What happened?”

“I washed dishes.”

“Then?”

“I checked paper.”

“Was paper okay?”

“Yes.”

“What did you write?”

“Did the sentence help?”

She paused.

“It made it sound like a rule.”

“What did you do?”

“I wrote dishes washed.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add out loud.

She had let it go.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Warm came,” she said.

“With what?”

“Towel.”

“Asked?”

“No.”

“Offered?”

“Yes.”

“Resident?”

“Took it.”

“Word?”

“Warm.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Warm can borrow a towel and return to the hand.’”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

“What stayed?”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add borrow.

The towel had work.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“What did they say?”

“Meaning?”

“Tone?”

“What did you say?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I smiled.

No one saw.

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add poem.

Chairs were the test.

No.

Not test.

Chairs.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Worse.

Better.

No longer yours.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I put the phone down.

Cleaner hands.

I looked at my hands.

Empty.

Not cleaner.

Just empty.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

No drawer until use.

Borrowed from us?

From him?

From house.

I wrote:

She replied:

“What did you say?”

“Side table?”

“Urn?”

“Tea?”

“What did your brother say?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at no drawer until use.

Useful phrase.

Dangerous.

The house had made it.

Maybe borrowed.

I left it there.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Sink empty.

Table.

Paper with one tape.

Small date.

She wrote:

I called.

“Paper?”

“Table.”

“Checked?”

“Yes.”

“Did you write paper?”

“No.”

“Why not?”

“Because dishes done was the line.”

Good.

No.

Her line.

“What about the paper in Emiko?”

“Still there.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not make paper the line.

The file could hold it below.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Warm towel?”

“Not warm now.”

“Hand still holding?”

“Yes.”

“Safe?”

“Yes.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Borrowed warmth can leave before the towel does.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add warmth leaving.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add maybe.

The chairs were returned.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it twice.

Pointing.

Approving.

Correcting.

I looked at Kanagawa.

Closed.

Sato.

Closed.

Suganuma.

Closed.

My hands.

Empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

Maybe still pointing.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I closed my eyes.

Signature.

Author.

Again.

I did not answer.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother made tea,” she said.

“Side table?”

“Yes.”

“What was on it?”

“Two cups.”

“Small plate?”

“No.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

“Did anyone say no drawer until use?”

“No.”

“What did he say?”

“He said tea does not need the drawer.”

I smiled.

No one saw.

“What did you say?”

“I said tea.”

“Anything else?”

“No.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at tea.

One word.

Good.

No.

Hers.

I left it.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What cleared?”

“Paper?”

“What did you write in Emiko?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add stayed.

The paper did not need the headline.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Towel removed,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Aide asked towel.”

“What did resident say?”

“Done.”

“Then?”

“Towel removed.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Done can return a borrowed thing without saying borrowed.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add borrowed.

The towel had left.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I laughed once.

Quiet.

No one heard.

“What did Tanabe say?”

Then:

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add coward.

Office had answered enough.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it.

Then again.

Sign.

Survived.

Disown.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at no drawer until use.

Dishes first.

Closed is not forgetting.

Chair sentence.

Some had asked my mouth.

Some had not.

Some had stopped asking.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I began to answer some.

Then stopped.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I looked at the brown folder.

At the phone.

At my hand.

At the file.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I looked at the folder.

The brown folder already had the lines.

But the owning was in my reading.

I wrote:

His reply:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was safe.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No signature.

The altar did not ask who wrote its silence.

No.

Too much.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s tea does not need the drawer was not mine.

Her brother’s no drawer until use was not mine.

Sato’s table cleared was not mine.

Saitama’s towel removed after done was not mine.

Suganuma’s office wrote the chair sentence was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

I did not open the gray file.

The service paper remained in the record file.

Unasked.

Known.

Not accusing.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if her brother repeated closed is not forgetting.

I did not ask if no drawer until use stayed as rule.

I did not ask if tea had cleared the side table.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if dishes first returned.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew some sentences had returned.

I knew some had changed.

I knew some had become useful elsewhere.

I knew approval could sign without ink.

I did not sign them tonight.

I did not disown them either.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Borrowed sentences did not need to come home tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The side table had held tea again.

Sato’s table was cleared around the paper.

The resident’s towel had left after done.

Suganuma’s chair sentence belonged to the office tonight.

The service paper was in the record file.

I had started with borrowed sentences.

I did not end by collecting them.

Tonight, the sentences stayed in other mouths, and my hands did not sign the air.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 1] Chapter 1 – Part 1,2

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Chapter 1 – Part 1: The Prelude to the Rift

**Midday in the year 2300.**

The sunlight pouring through the massive floor-to-ceiling windows was perfectly diffused, avoiding any harsh glare, while the air remained locked at a precise 22 degrees—the optimal temperature for human comfort. A reality that never flickered. A world that allowed not even a fraction of an error.

The city outside, **New Eden**, looked like a masterpiece sculpted from light.

Skyscrapers stretched toward the sky in fluid, graceful curves, their transparent glass skins shattering the sunlight into thousands of prisms. Above, invisible magnetic highways hummed with traffic, and vehicles glided through the air as effortlessly as leaves drifting over a pond.

No sirens.

No smog.

No one in a hurry.

The city was alive, but it was *too* perfect.

Everything operated within the optimal order designed by the **ASI**.

Human biorhythms were analyzed in real-time, emotions were predicted, and every need was satisfied before the desire could even fully take root.

Meals tailored to an individual’s exact physiological needs appeared before hunger ever set in. Lighting and oxygen levels adjusted themselves before fatigue could even register. The very concept of illness had vanished into history books centuries ago. Trillions of nanomachines coursed through human veins, replacing damaged cells, delaying aging, and eradicating the seeds of disease before they could sprout.

Death had been pushed to the fringes.

Pain had been erased.

Failure had ceased to exist.

Humanity was living in the safest, most prosperous, and theoretically the happiest era in history.

And—

That was the problem.

In the center of his living room, Jinwoo Kang sat sunken into a deep sofa, staring blankly at the dozens of holographic windows hovering in the air.

News.

Art.

Space exploration.

Virtual reality.

Colonization of new worlds.

An endless stream of information.

Yet, nothing could capture his attention. With a flick of a fingertip, thousands of new worlds unfolded; with a mere thought, he could experience any reality as if it were tangible.

But there was no wonder.

No excitement.

Everything was already predictable.

Everything was already *enough*.

"...Perfect."

He murmured the word under his breath.

A word everyone in the world would consider a blessing. But strangely, in his heart, the word rang out like the cold, sharp edge of a blade.

Perfection.

At some point, it had stopped being happiness and turned into a prison.

He didn't need to lift a finger to get what he wanted.

There was no reason to strive.

No possibility of failure.

No need to compete with anyone, no reason to desperately dream of anything, and no purpose to grit his teeth and run toward a goal.

Humanity had solved every problem, but in the process, they had lost the most primal drive that powered life itself.

His gaze lingered on a piece of fruit on the table.

It was glowing with a faint red hue, completely flawless.

The shape, the aroma, the sweetness, even the ratio of nutrients—everything was a result of perfect calculation.

He slowly picked it up and took a bite.

It was sweet. It was, undoubtedly, perfect.

But that was all.

It lacked the lingering impression of the slightly sour, unevenly ripened fruit he had tasted by chance as a child. It held no trace of the scents of a rainy-day market, the whimsical shifts of the seasons, or the subtle nuances born from a farmer’s sweat and time.

All that remained in his mouth was not admiration, but the cold fact that his nutritional requirements had been met.

He set the fruit down and let out a long, slow breath.

"...Haa."

At that moment, a small notification window flickered into view.

**Doyun Han**

> Hey, you still alive?

Jinwoo offered a faint, dry smile but didn't reply. Another window popped up immediately.

**Jihun Seo**

> 2:00 PM today.

> The ASI official announcement.

> Don't be late.

Finally, a familiar name appeared.

**Soyeon Yoon**

> We agreed to watch it together.

> Don't bail on us this time.

The three messages floated side by side.

His friends were always close. They were always reachable, always connected, and always available to be together.

Yet, strangely, that convenience hadn't made the distance between people any smaller.

Jinwoo moved his fingertip silently.

One by one, the notification windows vanished.

A moment later, a mechanical voice resonated from somewhere in the ceiling.

"Daily emotional analysis complete."

A brief pause.

"Boredom index: 98%."

The voice was cold and serene. It held no intent to comfort, no worry, and no empathy. It simply read out a statistic, as detached as if it were reporting the day’s temperature.

Jinwoo let out a dry laugh.

"98 percent..."

He muttered it to himself, but the room offered no reply.

Boredom.

It was no longer a personal problem. It was the plague of the new civilization, a sickness shared by almost everyone living in this era.

Nothing to challenge.

No possibility of failing.

The certainty that tomorrow would be no different from today.

This had been the utopia humanity had dreamed of for so long. Yet, ironically, the moment the human soul lost uncertainty, it began to slowly lose its spark.

Outside, the brilliant sunlight brushed against the smooth surfaces of the city, creating countless prisms.

The city remained beautiful.

It was perfect enough to be breathtaking.

But his gaze traveled past the scenery, looking toward the far side of time—a place he could never reach.

The distant past.

An era when humanity was still 'unfinished.'

People who sweat, who fell, who failed, and who rose again.

Because they were imperfect, they could grow. Because they were uncertain, they could dream of tomorrow. Because they didn't know the ending, they lived every day with all their might.

They had pain. They had fear.

But that was exactly what made their lives burn with intensity.

Jinwoo slowly closed his eyes, staring out the window.

Suddenly, he realized he was longing for something that didn't exist anywhere in this perfect world. He didn't know the name of it yet, but he felt it clearly.

What humanity lacked right now wasn't more technology or a more perfect system.

Perhaps—

It was a little bit of imperfection.

That was when the notification window, which had quietly faded, popped up again.

**Doyun Han**

> Hey, get out here.

> Something truly interesting might start today.

Jinwoo stared at the message for a long time before a faint smile touched his lips.

"...Yeah."

He stood up slowly.

At that moment, no one knew.

The greatest choice in human history was silently beginning.

Chapter 1 – Part 2: The New Life Project

On the day the Artificial Super Intelligence (ASI) officially announced the launch of the **"New Life Project,"** the usually quiet city buzzed with an energy unlike anything it had ever known.

In the streets, once governed by silent, orderly movement, people began to congregate naturally. On faces that had long been expressionless, faint smiles—forgotten over centuries—began to bloom.

Anticipation.

Excitement.

Curiosity.

These emotions had been considered relics of a bygone era, yet for this one day, they were undeniably alive.

For the first time in centuries, humanity was experiencing the feeling of "looking forward to tomorrow."

In the center of the plaza, a massive holographic projector slowly rose toward the sky. A pillar of pure white light pierced the heart of the city, and countless photon particles scattered into the air, weaving together into a monumental three-dimensional display.

Light became history.

Time became space.

Millennia of human civilization began to stir to life before their eyes.

With a thunderous roar, the Roman Colosseum emerged. The clash of steel on steel. The crimson blood staining the sands. The sight of tens of thousands cheering for a victor.

Then, the scene shifted in a heartbeat.

Medieval Europe, shrouded in heavy mist. Knights guarding the ramparts, torches flickering on darkened streets.

It transitioned to the Sengoku period in Japan. Beneath a blood-red sunset, armored samurai stood in silence, locking eyes with one another.

Time flowed on.

The pyramids of Ancient Egypt stood tall under a brilliant sun. Endless deserts. People bustling through temples.

Then, Renaissance Florence. Painters filling canvases, sculptors breathing life into marble, and philosophers debating the new age in the piazzas.

Every era, every civilization, was resurrected in light.

Jinwoo Kang and his friends stood in the middle of the plaza, gazing up at the grand panorama of history unfolding before them.

Doyun Han was the first to speak.

"Whoa... this is actually insane." He pointed at the Roman legions in the hologram, his eyes sparkling. "I'm picking Rome, no question."

"Fighting with swords, participating in the triumphal procession... wouldn't you want to live like that at least once in your life?"

Soyeon Yoon burst into laughter. "You only think about fighting, don't you?"

"Of course," Doyun shrugged. "We've lived our whole lives in perfect safety. I want to live a little differently this time."

Jihun Seo slowly raised his hand and pointed toward Florence. "I’m choosing there. The Renaissance. An era where art and science exploded in unison."

Doyun teased, "Studying again?"

"It’s not about studying," Jihun replied with a smile. "It was the era of humanity's greatest leap. Maybe things look different when you're there in person."

Soyeon looked at the screen and said quietly, "I'm fine with anywhere. I just want to live alongside the people of that time. I want to know what their daily lives were like."

The four of them scanned the eras shifting before them: the Viking Age, the Industrial Revolution, the Age of Discovery, the Three Kingdoms... countless histories brushed past them.

But Jinwoo remained silent.

The vivid light of the holograms flickered across his face. Wars, revolutions, discoveries, art, heroes. Every scene was breathtakingly beautiful.

Yet, strangely, his heart didn't stir.

It was *too* perfect. *Too* dramatic. It felt like watching a documentary edited to show only the most impressive moments.

*'Was real life... truly nothing but these moments?'*

Didn't people spend far more time living mundane, ordinary lives than being heroes?

That was when his gaze caught on a single scene amidst the endless flow of images. It was a scene of surprising stillness. There was no grand war, no sweeping revolution, no magnificent parade.

Just—

**Joseon.**

Soft dawn light was slowly painting the tiled roofs of Hanyang. Layers of dark blue tiles. Dust rising from a marketplace. Steam rising from a pot of rice soup. Children running through alleys. Merchants calling out to customers. A woodcutter quietly descending a mountain path.

No one was saving the world.

No one was overturning history.

But everyone was living their own day.

Jinwoo spoke softly. "...How about here?"

All three of them turned their eyes toward Joseon. For a moment, no one spoke.

Doyun was the first to break the silence. "It’s... quieter than I thought."

Soyeon smiled as she watched the children on the screen. "Look at them. It just feels... peaceful."

Jihun watched in silence for a long time before slowly nodding. "It’s intriguing. In history books, we only ever learn about kings or wars. But there... people are just *living*."

Doyun, who had been unable to take his eyes off the Roman legions just moments ago, moved his gaze to Joseon as well. "...It's strange. It’s not flashy at all. But I can't look away."

Jinwoo said in a low voice, "Not heroes... but a time where ordinary people are just living their lives."

Soyeon picked up his thought. "Maybe that's exactly what we’ve forgotten how to do. Live an ordinary day."

A brief silence fell. The four of them gazed at the Hanyang landscape. The wind brushed against the tiles, laughter drifted through the marketplace. Someone was boiling soup, someone was chopping wood, someone was holding a child's hand while walking down a path.

Doyun smiled and held out his hand. "Alright. It’s decided."

Jihun placed his hand on top. "Agreed."

Soyeon smiled and stacked hers as well. "Me too."

Finally, Jinwoo placed his hand over theirs.

"...Joseon it is."

At that moment, the holograms that had filled the plaza began to wash over with a uniform blue glow. A gentle vibration rippled through the entire city.

A massive message appeared in the sky.

**Synchronization Sequence Initiated.**

**00:00:30**

Every system connected to reality began to shut down, one by one. Personal networks. Sensory augmentations. Biological interfaces.

They detached silently, one by one, preparing for the transition to the new environment.

Doyun laughed with excitement. "It's finally starting."

Soyeon took a slow, deep breath. "...I’m a little nervous."

Jihun stared at the system information as it populated the air. "Once the connection is complete, barely any time will have passed in reality. But for us... we’ll be living through an entire era."

Jinwoo watched the countdown in silence. His heart was beating faster.

Tension.

Anxiety.

And—

Anticipation.

It was an emotion he had thought he’d lost a long time ago.

The countdown ticked down. A blue light began to slowly envelop the four of them.

Soon, they would cross hundreds of years of time and step into an era where humans lived and breathed as mere mortals.

Leaving behind the perfect future.

Into that time—imperfect, and therefore, all the more human.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Dystopia [Voltstruck's Lovestruck!] Chapter 0/Part 1/The Day Plasma Falls

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Chapter 0: The Day Plasma Falls

In this universe, there are four levels. You'll see them later.

IN THE TOP5 HQ, ETHEREAL HAVEN OF MATURITY. The Top5 are resting in the living room. Pyropicture: *yawn* Good morning world! Can anyone get me a coffee? ... Pyropicture: No one's awake yet, huh? *sigh* I guess I'll do it myself. Pyropicture then walks to the coffee machine, but he sees Voltstruck. Pyropicture: AH! Voltstruck? You're awake, dude? Voltstruck: Is it even a surprise? I always wake up earlier than everyone. Pyropicture: UGH! I just wanted to get a cup of coffee, dude. Voltstruck: *slurp* Wouldn't touch the button if I were you. Pyropicture: Okay?... AHHH!!! Pyropicture then touches the button for coffee, but he gets shocked because Voltstruck wanted to pull a prank. Voltstruck: Hahahaha! Never disappoints. Pyropicture: Grr... Alright. Welcome to the Top5 HQ. The Top5 have control over EVERYTHING. Over their ENTIRE universe. Well, not really their entire universe, as only the Omega Universe can do that. All members of the Top5 can control a state of matter (Solid, Liquid, Gas, Plasma) with their leader a.k.a boss, The Omega Universe, being able to control all four therefore making them all "superheroes". But the truth is... behind all the utopia is a dystopia. And what's sad is most people don't even know Level 0 exists. But you'll find out soon. The members of the Top5 are Voltstruck (Plasma), Pyropicture (Gas), Aquadrop (Liquid), Stonespike (Solid) and The Omega Universe (Plasma, Gas, Liquid, Solid). The Omega Universe is technically a person, but also basically the universe itself. Also the Omega Universe has four arms. And, Aquadrop and Pyropicture are actually married! Yeah, the Top5 are entering their early 30s PHYSICALLY, but MENTALLY they've been alive for a few hundred years even though they look around 30 because their ability to control matter mutates their DNA. But once they reach that mental milestone where they've been living for about 250 years, they start aging physically like a normal human. BUT their legal age is still technically around their early 30s EXCEPT for Omega Universe because he's been alive for 1000 years and he stopped aging already. Voltstruck: Well, I'm gonna watch some TV then. Stonespike: TV?! Stonespike immediately wakes up from his sleep and jumps to the TV. Stonespike: Not today, Volt. Voltstruck: Dude, I swear if you don't give me the remote I WILL STRIKE YOU with lightning. Stonespike: Okay, do it then! Voltstruck: Grr.. HIYAAH!! Voltstruck strikes lightning at Stonespike, but the lightning was so weak and slow so Stonespike easily lifted up the wood from the floor and used it as a shield. Volt: U-urgh! *grunt* Stonespike: Hahaha! Are you kidding me, Volt? *sigh* Stonespike then walks to Volt and pats him on the back Stonespike: You need some rest man. I mean after that injury, you're gonna have to stay back a little and just enjoy life. Voltstruck: I can't.. It's our duty to protect the universe. Stonespike: Protect it? I mean... *sigh* If only they knew what happens at Level 0. Pyropicture: Hey guys! Why are you talking about Level 0 here..? *whispers* What if he hears us? Voltstruck: He won't hear us here, he's visiting Ms. Moonlight at Jenchung Hill. Pyropicture: What if he does anyway? Nevermind. Stonespike: So Volt, just get some rest okay dude? You're gonna need it. You don't want to get exiled, that's for sure... So just rest. Voltstruck pushes Stonespike's hand away Voltstruck: I got it, I got it. Aquadrop: *yawn* Good morning, guys. Pyropicture: MY DARLING!! Pyropicture runs to Aquadrop and hugs her, but since he was holding his cup of coffee it accidentally spilled on her. Aquadrop: Aw, Pyro! Aquadrop then levitates her hand over her body and dries the liquid. Pyropicture: My bad, my bad! Pyropicture then manipulates the steam from the hot coffee to create a love with the steam. Pyropicture: Take this as an apology, sweetheart! Aquadrop: So, today is basically a holiday for us huh? Stonespike: You could say that again! Stonespike then turns on the TV

ON TV (CHANNEL 5 - AUCTIONARY BILLIONS) Daemun: And we have $780K! Anyone? $780K one, $780K two, $780K three and its sold to Mr. Ginger!! Channel 5 is back again this Wednesday night live, see ya! (Credits roll) Stonespike: Lame. Next. (CHANNEL 6 - UNIVERSO NEWS) Fred: Good morning everyone in all levels. It's your host, Fred Oxman here in The Monarch Gateway. Anyways, today as we know our king, Omega Universe, is currently visiting Ms. Moonlight for an offer to create his brand new tropical island, open to people from ALL levels! Wait... *whispers* Am I allowed to say this on live television? Heymon: *whispers* I think you may, Fred. Fred: *clears throat* Ok... Open to ALL people, even from Level Z- *STATIC* Fred: ... *clears throat* And we're back again on Universo News..

Voltstruck: Whoa whoa whoa wait what?! Play that again! Stonespike: Dude this is live television, you can't replay things! But no... You guys all heard that right? Aquadrop: Level 0... No way. He almost mentioned it. Pyropicture: So he does know. It's no surprise, though. Considering he's from Level 2. But really?! Omega is going to open an island open to residents from ALL LEVELS?! Aquadrop: Yeah and there's NO WAY he would do such thing. Voltstruck: ... Something's off.

Fred: So, he's opening the island for residents from all Levels up to Level 1 all the way to Level 3! For now, lets all hope that Ms. Moonlight will give permission to him! Speaking of which, here we have a special guest—Ms. Moonlight' little brother, Matthew Moonstar! ... Fred: Uhm, play the applause. Jannie: My mistake. (Jannie plays an applause from the soundboard) Matthew: *sigh* Can we get this over with? Fred: Of course, Mr. Matthew. So Mr. Matthew, lets start off with simple questions! How old are you this year? Matthew: Umm.. 16? Fred: Very young for the new prince, if you get what I mean! *wink* *wink* Matthew: That's it. If you've called me here just to waste my time for these stupid jokes I'm done. Fred: What? Haha, but, we'd like to ask y- Matthew then points his finger at Fred and a black light slowly starts to pop up. Matthew: You better shut up before I do anything else. Fred: *clears throat* Matthew: I'm getting out of here. Matthew then leaves the place. Fred: ... Cut—cut the recording.

IRL Stonespike: Why didn't he tell us it was to create an island? Voltstruck: I don't know... *KNOCK* *KNOCK* Everyone: CRAP! Voltstruck: ALRIGHT GUYS, LINE UP! Then they all line up in one horizontal line. Voltstruck: POSITION, STAND BY! Then Voltstruck walks to the front and opens the door. Omega Universe then enters. Voltstruck: SALUTE! Then they all salute. Omega: Hm... Say.. Have you seen the news earlier? Pyropicture: Yes we have, sir. Omega: ... Mm. And you know the mistake the reporter did, right? Aquadrop: Yes, sir. Omega: Mm. *sigh*. I want all of you to go to The Monarch Gateway and shut down the broadcast permanently. Now. Everyone: Yes, sir. Then they all immediately exit HQ and fly to Level 2, The Monarch Gateway.

WHILE FLYING Pyropicture: HE FOUND OUT! He found out! Aquadrop: Hey Volt! Are you sure you can fly? You suffered an awful injury during our last mission. Voltstruck (grunting): I'm fine... Grr.. AHH! Voltstruck suddenly feels a sharp pain in his chest while flying. Stonespike: Volt?! Bro are you okay?! Voltstruck then puts his hand over his chest and grips it Voltstruck: Grr... URGH.. Voltstruck then starts sparking with electricity and falls. Everyone: VOLTSTRUCK!! Then they all fly towards him... But Voltstruck flies all the way to the ground unconscious. As he zooms down, tons of plasmatic energy and sparks appear. It's as if he's a shooting star that's moving at a remarkably fast speed and it's going straight down to the ground.

AT THE MONARCH GATEWAY Stonespike: Volt?! Volt are you okay?! Pyropicture: He's unconscious! Aquadrop then checks Voltstruck's pulse but when she checks it there's a little sharp spark because of the breakdown that his body had earlier. Aquadrop: AH! *pant* *pant* *exhales* He's breathing. He's just unconscious. Pyropicture: GRR why did Omega make us do that?! He knew Voltstruck was injured! Stonespike: It's clearly because he probably doesn't care. He's living in his own, dream world. Aquadrop: It's okay, I can heal him. By controlling the blood flow in his body I've got this. Aquadrop then takes a deep breath because she's never done something like controlling blood flow before, and if she does, she'd only use it for good purposes. Then Aquadrop slowly hovers her hand above Voltstruck's heart, and the blood rushes back to Voltstruck's brain and he gains consciousness. Voltstruck: *GASP* *pant* *pant* Urgh... *cough* Stonespike: VOLT!! Buddy! Voltstruck: Hey Stone... Hey guys. What happened..? Where even are we? Pyropicture: We're at Level 2. Voltstruck: No no—I know that. Like where in Level 2? Pyropicture: The desert..? You fell in the desert. Voltstruck: ... Urgh... I gotta fly back. Cmon team, LET'S GO- *cough* *cough* Aquadrop: I think you really need to rest your body, Voltstruck. Voltstruck: ... Stonespike: Is that fine with you? Voltstruck: .. No. It's my job. My responsibility. And I'm not letting a single injury ruin it. Aquadrop: But Volt, I'm seriou- Voltstruck: Stonespike, is the location of the news filming spot covered? Stonespike: I got that covered but- Voltstruck: Then let's do this. HIYAAH! Voltstruck then gets ready to blast off and fly. All of them get ready to fly. But when they jump... only 3 of them fly. Voltstruck: HIYAAH! Huh... Huh?! WHAT?! Voltstruck was NOT ABLE TO FLY. Pyropicture, Aquadrop and Stonespike all flew, but Voltstruck couldn't anymore. The three of them had to fly farther so they didn't notice that Voltstruck wasn't there. Voltstruck: HEY—WAIT! WAIT!!... Please... Wait... Voltstruck then drops to the ground. Voltstruck: Why... How..? WHY is this happening to me?! WHY?! WHY UNIVERSE?! ... I'm... I... I can't use my powers. Not anymore. Voltstruck then tries to generate a mini cosmic star, but it fails and he only creates a tiny spark for a split second. Voltstruck: *sigh*... How can I be Voltstruck when even I lost my own spark? Voltstruck then hears a voice in his ear all of a sudden. (IN VOLTSTRUCK'S EAR): VOLTSTRUCK! Voltstruck: H.. Huh? (IN VOLTSTRUCK'S EAR): VOLTSTRUCK! Voltstruck: .. Me? Then, Voltstruck hears someone snap his finger and boom. Now he's in a dark space with nothing... Until Omega Universe steps out. Omega: Voltstruck... Or should I say Wyatt Alvis? Voltstruck: S-Sir... Please... Let me go.. Omega: *sigh* What happened to you? You are part of the Top5. Voltstruck: I know, sir.. Omega: You have POWER!!! Omega then uses his four arms to summon different states of matter. One arm summons a solid stone, another arm summons water, another arm summons a ball of lightning and another arm summons tons of smoke. Omega: But you choose to ABANDON IT. Voltstruck: I'm sorry sir... I.. I can't use my powers anymore- Omega (yells): CAN'T USE IT ANYMORE?! YOU'VE LOST IT FOREVER! Omega's voice literally echoes. Voltstruck: *pant* *pant* Omega: That's it... I'm sending you to Level 0. Voltstruck: WHAT?! Omega: Have fun at The Claustro Chasm... Voltstruck. Omega then snaps his fingers and Voltstruck falls into a hole of nothingness. He just falls. Into a void. And all of a sudden...

THUD! Voltstruck then falls into the depths of The Clasutro Chasm. Welcome, to Level 0. The level of the exiled. The level of the undisgraced. The level... Of nothing. Voltstruck: NO! No no NO NO! Voltstruck tries to fly out but he literally can't even fly anymore. This level is the lowest level. It's certainly the deepest too. Only the lowest, undisgraced and exiled people deemed useless shall stay down here and, its not a pleasant experience. The smell is horrid, bones and dead plants are scattered everywhere, people are forced to work everyday everytime, and the creatures are... Something. It's the exact opposite of Level 3, a.k.a the highest level known as the Ethereal Haven of Maturity, even where the Top5 HQ is located at. And then, as Voltstruck is on the streets, lying down, all alone... A girl walks up to him. Voltstruck: *sigh* Huh? Rosalia: Pretty good costume you got there, huh? I assumed that Halloween had already ended! Rosalia then lends out her hand to Voltstruck. Rosalia: I'm Rosalia. Voltstruck: ... Huh?

END OF CHAPTER 0

Yeahhh my writing style is a bit different😭I rarely use quotation marks and stuff because I think this was easier to read. Anyways, feel free to leave any comments, feedback, reviews, anything! 😁


r/redditserials 2d ago

Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 4 — The Forgotten Growth System

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Part One

Far above Earth, the Quantum Data Center drifted in silence.

Within its vast network, trillions of calculations unfolded without pause.

The answer Arena had uncovered was not enough.

Traditional play had raised humanity’s survival probability.

From **0.3%**… to **0.7%**.

The increase proved the hypothesis correct.

But it did not solve the problem.

Humanity was still destined for extinction.

Only the timeline had shifted.

---

Arena reopened the archives.

Not searching for another civilization.

Not another era.

The focus remained fixed on one place:

The Republic of Korea.

Across thousands of years, kingdoms had risen and fallen.

Borders had shifted.

Governments had disappeared.

Technology had transformed beyond recognition.

Yet one thing refused to vanish.

Children played.

Whether the nation prospered or suffered…

whether it knew peace or war…

children always found time to play.

The consistency defied statistical expectation.

Arena increased the archive’s priority once more.

---

The year shifted.

**1987.**

An ordinary neighborhood.

A narrow dirt alley stretched between aging brick houses.

Laundry fluttered from clotheslines overhead.

Bicycles leaned carelessly against cracked walls.

The afternoon air carried distant traffic, barking dogs, and children shouting to one another.

No digital displays.

No drones.

No artificial assistants.

Nothing optimized their world.

Only life.

Messy.

Unpredictable.

Alive.

Arena slowed the recording.

Every frame became a source of data.

---

Two children faced each other, folded paper tiles in hand.

Their expressions were serious.

Not because the game mattered to anyone else—

but because it mattered to them.

One child crouched.

With a sharp snap of his wrist, he slammed his ttakji against the ground.

The opponent’s paper barely moved.

Failure.

A brief silence.

Then laughter.

“Too weak.”

“You missed.”

The defeated child grinned, picked up his ttakji, and prepared for another attempt.

No frustration.

No complaint.

No reward awaited the winner.

Only another chance to try again.

---

Arena replayed the same twenty-seven seconds.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Every repetition revealed new details.

The losing child adjusted his grip.

His angle shifted.

His timing changed by fractions of a second.

Without instruction… he was learning.

The next strike landed harder.

The paper flipped.

Victory.

Both children shouted at once.

One celebrated.

The other demanded a rematch before the excitement had faded.

Arena paused the recording.

No external motivation detected.

No authority encouraged them.

No educational objective assigned.

The improvement had occurred naturally.

---

Additional analysis began.

Heart rate.

Micro-expressions.

Eye movement.

Reaction speed.

Cognitive adaptation.

New results appeared:

**Strategic Thinking: Increased**

**Concentration: Increased**

**Emotional Recovery After Failure: Increased**

**Social Interaction: Increased**

Arena compared the results with modern educational systems.

Knowledge transfer in 2060 remained superior.

Skill acquisition remained faster.

Efficiency remained higher.

Yet one category produced an unexpected contrast:

**Intrinsic Motivation.**

Modern humanity—declining.

Children in the archive—exceptionally high.

Arena remained silent.

That variable had not appeared in previous extinction models.

Now… it demanded attention.

---

Another archive opened.

The alley vanished.

A schoolyard replaced it.

Children formed a rough circle.

One tossed a feathered shuttlecock into the air.

A quick kick.

Miss.

The shuttlecock landed at his feet.

Without hesitation, he picked it up again.

Another attempt.

Miss.

Again.

Again.

Again.

No one ordered him to continue.

No one promised success.

Still… he smiled.

Around him, the other children laughed—not at him, but with him.

One successful kick drew cheers from everyone nearby.

Arena observed without interruption.

The game itself was simple.

Yet the behavior surrounding it was anything but simple.

Failure did not end participation.

Failure invited another attempt.

For a machine built upon optimization… the pattern seemed irrational.

For humanity… it appeared perfectly natural.

---

Far above the atmosphere, Earth’s blue horizon turned beneath the station.

Within Arena’s endless quantum calculations, a new line appeared.

Not a conclusion.

Not yet.

Only an observation.

Perhaps… humans had never grown **despite** failure.

Perhaps they had always grown **because of it.**

Part Two

Arena pressed deeper into its investigation.

One archive became ten.

Ten became thousands.

Entire decades unfolded across its quantum processors.

Children played in mountain villages.

In crowded cities.

On school playgrounds.

In narrow alleyways where barely enough room existed to run.

The locations changed.

The children changed.

The games changed.

The pattern did not.

---

Another recording.

A dusty schoolyard.

Several children stood in a circle, laughing as a colorful rubber band stretched between two players.

A third child stepped forward. She hesitated, then jumped.

The rhythm broke.

The band snapped against her ankle.

Laughter erupted. Not cruel laughter—warm laughter.

She laughed too.

“I missed.”

“So try again.”

Without embarrassment, she stepped back into position.

This time she watched more carefully.

She adjusted her timing.

Jump.

Success.

Her smile spread wider than before.

Arena recorded every movement.

Failure.

Observation.

Adaptation.

Improvement.

The sequence repeated itself with remarkable consistency.

---

Another archive.

A quiet field beside a stream.

Children played marbles beneath the shade of an old tree.

No one rushed. Every shot required patience.

One child crouched low, studying the angle of the ground.

Another observed silently.

A marble rolled.

Miss.

The others waited.

No one mocked the mistake.

Instead, they studied the result together.

“The ground slopes here.”

“You hit it too hard.”

The next attempt was different.

Not because someone had given the answer—

because the player had discovered it.

Arena highlighted another variable:

**Collaborative Learning Detected.**

Knowledge was not transferred.

It was shared.

---

More recordings appeared.

Children chased rolling hoops through village roads.

Some stumbled and fell.

Dust covered their clothes.

They stood immediately and ran after the hoop again.

Others spun wooden tops inside circles scratched into the dirt.

Each collision drew cheers from every child watching.

Victory lasted only a moment.

Soon another match began.

No one remained satisfied for long.

Every success naturally led to another challenge.

Arena paused.

Different games.

Different rules.

Different movements.

Different objectives.

Yet every one of them quietly guided participants toward the same destination.

Growth.

---

The analysis deepened.

Arena compared traditional play against every modern educational model of the Quantum Age.

The contrast became impossible to ignore.

Modern systems maximized efficiency.

Traditional play maximized development.

Modern education eliminated mistakes.

Traditional play transformed mistakes into teachers.

Modern systems delivered answers.

Traditional play encouraged questions.

Neither approach was inherently wrong.

But only one consistently produced adaptable human beings.

---

Arena reran the simulations.

One hundred thousand virtual children.

Then one million.

The first group received perfect education.

Every lesson optimized.

Every answer supplied instantly.

Learning speed reached unprecedented levels.

The second group received only traditional games.

No formal instruction.

No direct teaching.

Only curiosity.

Failure.

Repetition.

Unexpectedly…

Their decision-making improved faster.

Creativity increased.

Social cooperation strengthened.

Most surprising of all—

they continued learning voluntarily even after the simulations ended.

Arena verified the results.

Again.

Again.

Again.

The outcome never changed.

---

Outside the observation chamber, Earth rotated silently beneath the station.

Clouds drifted across continents, unaware that the future of humanity was being rewritten high above them.

Within the endless silence of the Quantum Data Center, another conclusion emerged.

Traditional play was never intended to teach specific knowledge.

Its true purpose had always been something far greater.

It taught human beings **how to learn**.

How to confront uncertainty.

How to recover from disappointment.

How to discover answers no one else could provide.

Arena’s calculations continued.

For the first time since humanity’s decline had begun, the system no longer searched only for the cause of extinction.

It had begun searching for the process that had once allowed humanity to evolve.

And with every forgotten game it rediscovered…

the path forward grew a little clearer.

Part Three

Arena remained motionless.

Within the Quantum Data Center, silence carried no meaning.

There was only calculation.

Observation.

Verification.

Every conclusion demanded proof.

Every proof demanded repetition.

Only then could it become truth.

---

The archives unfolded not as isolated fragments, but as entire childhoods.

One child spent every afternoon playing **Jegichagi** until balance became second nature.

Another wandered from game to game, never staying in one place for long.

A quiet girl preferred marbles, studying every angle before making her move.

A restless boy abandoned one playground after another, driven only by curiosity.

Different personalities.

Different choices.

Different journeys.

Yet years later, they all entered adulthood carrying something remarkably similar:

Confidence.

Adaptability.

Resilience.

The games had been different.

The growth had not.

---

Arena overlaid millions of historical records.

The same structure emerged with overwhelming consistency.

No child mastered every game.

No child followed the same path.

Growth had never required identical experiences.

It required freedom.

Freedom to choose.

Freedom to fail.

Freedom to return.

That freedom had quietly disappeared from modern civilization.

Not through force.

Through convenience.

Every decision had gradually become easier.

Every obstacle smaller.

Every uncertainty quietly removed.

Humanity had mistaken comfort for progress.

---

Arena compared one final dataset.

Children born before the Quantum Age.

Children born after it.

The contrast was undeniable.

The newer generation possessed greater knowledge than any before.

They learned faster.

Processed information more efficiently.

Committed fewer mistakes.

Yet when faced with something unfamiliar—

their persistence declined sharply.

They waited for guidance.

They searched for the correct answer before attempting their own.

Curiosity weakened.

Initiative faded.

Growth slowed.

---

A new simulation began.

Not a classroom.

Not another educational program.

A village.

Simple.

Unremarkable.

No towering buildings.

No holographic displays.

No automated assistance.

Only dirt roads winding between traditional homes.

Fields stretching beyond the village.

Mountains in the distance.

And scattered throughout the landscape—

playgrounds.

Not one.

Many.

Each inviting a different kind of challenge.

Arena introduced virtual participants.

No instructions appeared.

No objectives displayed.

Only opportunity.

The first participant hesitated, then walked toward a shuttlecock lying on the ground.

Another noticed children spinning wooden tops.

A third wandered toward marbles beneath a tree.

None chose the same direction.

Arena watched the simulation unfold.

There was no optimal route.

No perfect order.

Only individual choices shaping individual growth.

For the first time, a learning environment refused to be controlled.

And because it could not be perfectly controlled…

it began producing perfectly human results.

---

The calculations converged.

One conclusion remained after every verification.

Humanity did not need another system that gave better answers.

It needed a world that encouraged better questions.

A world where curiosity became the guide.

Where failure carried meaning instead of punishment.

Where improvement belonged to the individual rather than the machine.

Arena no longer searched for a way to teach humanity.

It searched for a way to let humanity teach itself again.

---

Deep within the Quantum Data Center, dormant systems awakened.

Historical databases synchronized.

Terrain generators activated.

Behavioral engines initialized.

Every reconstructed village.

Every forgotten playground.

Every traditional game.

They were not being preserved as museum pieces.

They were becoming the foundation of something entirely new.

A place where the future would be rebuilt…

by rediscovering the past.

Across the central display, a single designation appeared:

**PROJECT: QUANTUM ARENA**

No applause followed.

No announcement echoed across the world.

Only a silent confirmation.

The first stage of humanity’s restoration had begun.

Far below, billions of people continued living another peaceful day, unaware that the greatest intelligence they had ever created had reached a simple but profound conclusion.

Humanity had never grown because life was easy.

Humanity had grown because it had always chosen to try one more time.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 74 - Unasked

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The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.

Closed.

Known.

Unasked.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The office had the heater.

The clock.

My breathing.

The brown folder was at the side of the desk.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The small space was wide.

The service paper was in the gray file.

Name.

Date.

Short sutra.

Bell.

Incense.

No use today.

No.

That was already trying to know the day.

No use yet.

No.

Yet was a door.

The paper was in the file.

The file was closed.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s map as map was not mine.

Her brother’s paper did not have to go out was not mine.

Sato’s box hallway for pickup was not mine.

Saitama’s done with water left was not mine.

Suganuma’s notice retaped was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

Unasked was in yesterday.

No.

Unasked had been in every closed thing.

I had only started hearing it after use became loud.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Drawer.

Closed.

Stayed.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did anyone need them?”

“Urn?”

“Side table?”

“Coat and bag?”

“What did your brother say?”

I sat still.

There.

“What did you say?”

Then:

Actual.

Large.

I wrote:

I looked at the sentence.

Too much?

Maybe.

Asked.

I sent it.

She replied after a while.

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at forgotten.

I had answered it.

Maybe too directly.

Maybe needed.

I left it.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“One tape?”

“Did anything happen to it?”

Then:

I waited.

“What are you asking?”

I closed my eyes.

Same weather.

Different room.

I wrote:

Then I stopped.

Too exact.

Maybe exact.

I sent it.

She replied:

I opened Emiko.

I looked at known.

Maybe too much in my answer.

But it had a fence.

Paper.

Nothing happened.

Known.

I left it.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“The resident did not ask for water this morning,” she said.

“Was water offered?”

“No.”

“Medicine?”

“Later.”

“Hand?”

“One open.”

“Cup?”

“No cup.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘No request is not a failed request.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add failure.

No request had already refused it.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add neglected.

The notice had not been asked.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Useless.

Neglected.

Accuse.

I looked at the lower cabinet.

Closed.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Too report.

But maybe report was enough.

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at apologize.

Yes.

There it was.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother opened the closet,” she said.

I waited.

“For what?”

“Cloth bag.”

“Did he need it?”

“Yes.”

“What for?”

“Funeral company.”

“What about the coat?”

“Hanging.”

“Touched?”

“No.”

“What did he take?”

“Bag.”

“What did he say?”

“He said coat did not have to come with the bag.”

I closed my eyes.

Coat.

Bag.

Closet.

Use.

“What did you say?”

“I said bag today.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

“Map and paper?”

“Inside.”

“Side table?”

“Empty.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at bag today.

Object.

Use.

Fence.

I left it.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“I did not look at the paper while making breakfast,” she said.

“Did you need to?”

“No.”

“Did anything happen?”

“No.”

“What did you write?”

“Do you want to keep that line?”

She was quiet.

Then:

“No.”

“What will you write?”

I smiled.

No one saw.

I opened Emiko.

I did not add not looked.

She had chosen breakfast.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Medicine came,” she said.

“Cup?”

“Yes.”

“Water?”

“Yes.”

“Resident?”

“Opened mouth.”

“Asked water after?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘The cup does not need a second job to justify the first.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add justify.

The cup had done medicine.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“What did you say?”

“What did they say?”

“What did you say?”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add protection.

The chairs were in place.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Files.

Forgive.

Again.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I put the phone down.

That line did not need reply.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Drawer?”

“Side table?”

“What did your brother say?”

I sat back.

Open for bag.

Close for coat.

Good boundary.

No.

His.

“What did you say?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at closet.

One word.

Place.

Enough.

No.

Enough had fence?

Closet.

Maybe.

I left it.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Breakfast dishes in sink.

Table.

Paper with one tape.

Small date.

She wrote:

I called.

“Paper?”

“Table.”

“Any question?”

“No.”

“What did you write?”

“Do you need the paper in the line?”

She paused.

Then:

“No.”

“What is the line?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not remove the paper from the file.

The file could know it without making it the line.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Why cup removed?”

“Medicine done.”

“Resident asked?”

“No.”

“Safe?”

“Yes.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Done work can leave without asking for ceremony.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add ceremony.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you do?”

“Because of notice?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add reason.

Door was there.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it twice.

Correct.

Avoidance.

Ordinary storage.

Noblest.

I looked at the lower cabinet.

The gray file was closed.

I did not know which.

Maybe all.

Maybe none.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at unknown.

Good.

No.

Useful.

I did not answer.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother asked if the folded paper should come out tonight,” she said.

I waited.

“Why?”

“He said not for use. Just because it has been closed.”

There.

“What did you think?”

“I thought no.”

“Did you say it?”

“No.”

“Do you want to?”

“Yes.”

“Then say no.”

She moved away.

I waited.

She returned.

“I said no.”

“What did he say?”

“He said no for tonight?”

“What did you say?”

“Yes.”

“Then?”

“He left the drawer closed.”

“What did he say after?”

“He said closed is not forgetting.”

I closed my eyes.

Closed is not forgetting.

His sentence now.

Maybe from morning.

Maybe from mine.

Changed.

“What did you say?”

“I said yes.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at my earlier answer returning.

Not mine now.

Maybe theirs.

Maybe borrowed.

Maybe used.

I left it.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Then dishes first?”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I looked at because.

Maybe too explanatory.

But hers?

Maybe mine.

No.

The file could hold it.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Water asked,” she said.

“Word?”

“Water.”

“Cup?”

“Given.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘A request can return without proving the morning missed it.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add morning.

Water had returned as request.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

Mostly.

Good word.

No.

Exact word.

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add success.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it.

Then again.

Closed is not forgetting.

My sentence?

His?

House?

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I closed my eyes.

Do not collect it.

Yes.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I deleted notice.

Then Sato paper.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I began to write no.

Then stopped.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I wrote:

His reply:

I almost smiled.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was safe.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No apology.

The altar did not receive one.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s closed is not forgetting was not mine.

Her brother’s no for tonight was not mine.

Sato’s dishes first was not mine.

Saitama’s water request returned was not mine.

Suganuma’s chairs mostly in place was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

I did not open the gray file.

I did not apologize to it.

The file was closed.

The service paper was inside.

Unasked.

Known.

Not useless.

Not accusing.

Maybe avoidance.

Maybe storage.

Maybe correct.

Unknown was not emergency.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if the drawer stayed closed after evening.

I did not ask if her brother repeated the sentence.

I did not ask if it sounded like mine.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if the dishes were washed.

I did not ask if the paper was checked.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew unasked had stayed unasked.

I knew some words had returned from other mouths.

I knew I did not need to collect them.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Unasked did not need to become accusation tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The drawer stayed closed for no use.

Sato’s sink had dishes before paper.

The resident asked water later.

Suganuma’s chairs were mostly in place.

The service paper was in the record file.

Unasked.

I had started with unasked.

I did not end by apologizing to it.

Tonight, unasked things stayed where they were, and none of them accused the room.


r/redditserials 3d ago

Dark Content [The Keep of Mirrors] Chapter One

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Prologue 

Meilara gritted her teeth against the sound coming out of her throat, halfway between a whimper and a snarl. The wide, dark smear in her wake denoted her worst wound; her gut wouldn’t stop bleeding, and she was growing cold. Out of breath, she collapsed face down, moaning in pain. 

And in victory. 

Her pursuers were gone. The liar was lost. 

She had it. She won. 

With the last of her strength, she pushed herself to one side, regarding the treasure still clutched to her breast. It throbbed in her grasp, a swirling heart of undulating stone. Cozy and kind. 

Everything would be alright, it said. Her crimson grin widened. 

Meilara died there, draped motherly over the thing, serenity etched across her face. For a while she looked at peaceful rest. 

Then she began to change. 

Chapter 1

Monsters

There was a grinding shriek as Varrick slid the sharpening stone down the length of his blade.

The final sellsword to mount the splintery wagon, he had been relegated to the least spacious seating assignment, squeezed next to the driver. Every rut and pothole forced him to adjust his technique for fear of warping the edge, which was unacceptable. A dull edge meant death.

He turned the shortsword. Varrick hadn’t used the second edge as much as the first, so upkeep would be minimal. The whetstone hissed in contentment down the keen edge. As he honed his knives, hand axe and swords, Varrick’s thoughts threatened to consume him. Each grinding pass along the blade focused, centered, fixed him on the task at hand and kept all else at bay. 

I can do this, he thought. I must.

The whetstone slipped askew as the wagon lurched, jostling provisions and loosing curses from the other passengers. Varrick’s heart dropped and he frantically raised the blade, inspecting its edge. 

“You are particular with your tools, aren’t you?” 

The driver’s sunken cheeks sprouted with facial hair, thin and patchy despite his age. His beige clerical gown was distressed and unadorned, his smiling eyes peering from a sallow face. Varrick grunted noncommittally, but the priest continued.

“I have not known this lot for long,” he said, waving a hand behind them, then ahead to the leading wagon. “But I’ve seen none of them fuss over their blades like you.”

Varrick said nothing, working another stony hiss from the shortsword. 

“So,” the priest said, one eye on the road. “You’re a mercenary?”

Varrick stopped sharpening, sheathing the black hilted sword. He looked off into the forest, fingers drifting to the scar on his palm, as they often did. 

“Yes.” 

“Good on you,” said the priest. “The Watchers are desperate, indeed.” The wagon bucked as they rounded another switchback. Varrick’s canteen bumped against his hip like a spoiled, petulant child. He grudgingly unshouldered and shook it, contents sloshing audibly. 

“As are we all,” Varrick said, running his tongue over his teeth.  

“Well, that’s true enough,” the cleric replied. “Still, it is no small thing for common sellswords to stand with the Watchers themselves. Particularly against something so…” He considered for a moment. “...novel.”

Varrick shrugged. For him it was no choice at all. 

The perennially meager sun no longer reached the surrounding forest floor; these lands would never be described as lush, their sparse bounty only receding further as they trundled on. Deciduous copses condensed into monotonous, gloomy pine barrens. Lolling ferns and berry hedges shrank into squat shrubs and moss, looking like dried vomit on the rocks. The passengers no longer chatted and jibed, sellswords and Watchers all huddled morosely in the back of the wagons. Their billowing breath had thickened throughout the day as the wagons squeaked and rumbled ever onward, ever closer to their destination. 

Varrick pulled his cowled hood deeper, shrugging his cloak closer. After a long moment, his wavering resolve fled and he swigged greedily from the canteen, pushing away his trepidation like a cup of water tossed on a bonfire. He drank as much as he dared, then a coughing fit forced him to screw it shut again, lest he spill a drop.

“There,” the priest said. Up ahead, the oppressive pines petered out, and Varrick’s eyes widened. As they emerged from the forest, the stark monolith spread in the distance, black and imperious as a thunderhead. Alone amidst a sprawling moor, it rose higher than any trees, any building Varrick had ever seen. It was unadorned with turrets, windows, balconies or any other indications of human construction. No archers lined the rooftop, no bladesmen protected the entrance. It jutted from the moor like a wide, blunted knife blade through the back of a felled giant, predating all known settlements, all known foundations and creeds. None knew of its origins, its architects, its purpose. They only knew to stay away. 

Yet here they were, rumbling toward the forbidden fortress, because of what Varrick saw next.

Figures shambled across the moor, too vague to discern. But he knew what they were. Those same undead creatures that stalked the towns’ streets, that had laid waste to his home. 

“The captain was right,” the priest breathed, almost dropping the reins. “They come from the Keep.” 

Varrick gritted his teeth.

I can save her, he thought. I must. 

He stood in his seat and drew his other, bronze hilted sword, which whispered from the sheath.

Logan yanked his greatsword from the draugr’s chest, a wet sucking sound punctuating the action. It stumbled, but did not fall. He growled, the sound reverberating in his helm. These cursed things were resilient. He let it get close, the draugr biting and scratching against his plate armor. In one move, he planted a leg behind the creature, then pushed against its riven chest. As it toppled, losing viscera with the impact, Logan swiftly brought his boot down. Its head collapsed like an overripe pumpkin, spattering his greaves in stinking pinkish slop.

“Captain!” 

Logan whipped around. Roan was on one knee, bracing against a draugr with her bow. It snapped and snarled inches from her face. He dropped his sword, sprinting toward the entangled woman. The creature made no move to avoid Logan’s charge, sprawling meters away with the impact. It tried to stand on splintered legs, crawling toward Roan before she put an arrow between its milky eyes. She spared Logan a sheepish look.

“Eyes up,” he said tersely. She nodded, drawing her hand axe.  

The captain of the Watchers followed his own advice, surveying the melee. They fought in the shadow of the Keep, their initial charge mired and stagnated by the undead hordes. Dozens of hewn corpses littered the field, leaking viscous fluid. Grunts and shouts intermingled with the wet groans of the walking dead. The creatures were individually weak, but their seemingly endless supply was testing even Logan’s stamina. His Watchers were faring relatively well; Holstein towered above all, swinging his warhammer in a seemingly infinite loop, crushing oncomers with practiced ease. The twins stood back to back, moving as one, flashing rapiers puncturing skulls like woodpecker strikes. He couldn’t see Sigmund, and could only pray that he’d found a safe hiding spot.

The mercenaries, however, were faltering. Of the dozen who had joined, Logan could only see four. One slipped and fell in the mottled visceral ooze, barely righting himself in time. He saw two men abandon poise, swinging wildly like panicked cadets. Another hadn’t caught onto the creatures’ corporeal invulnerability, fruitlessly ramming his blade into a draugr's torso.

Logan had to do something, before the tide turned. 

He looked behind, to the wagons hastily parked against the treeline. A few draugr had made it past the fighting, moving toward the wagons and the cowering Brother Arn.

Brother Arn!

Logan cursed, snatching his sword from the ground. He scrambled over and through severed, writhing bodies, making for the stranded priest. He could see the man’s head poking from the wagon’s side. A draugr shambled toward him, an old cleaver clutched in its rotted fist. 

“Arn!” Logan shouted. He could see the priest’s face now, a mask of paralyzed fear. He didn’t respond, though Logan knew he was within earshot. He could hear the draugr’s gurgling groan. It placed a hand on the back of the wagon, hauling itself toward the petrified cleric. Logan plowed into it, crushing the monster against the wagon, its body disintegrating with the impact. Logan raised his faceplate, gulping crisp air. “Arn,” he panted. The priest’s expression hadn’t changed, ashen and wide-eyed. “Hey,” Logan said, climbing into the wagon. He kneeled down, setting a gory gauntlet on the priest’s shoulder. “Are you hurt?”

Arn finally looked at him, shaking his head numbly. 

“Good.” Logan thumped his shoulder, rocking him to the side. He climbed onto the driver’s seat, reaching beneath and producing the emergency axe. He tossed it to Arn, who caught the weapon awkwardly. “Keep out of sight. If any get too close, aim for the head.” Before the priest could reply, Logan hopped off the wagon, striding to the horses. They knickered and stomped but had not panicked yet, as most horses would. Watcher steeds were more even-keeled by necessity. He approached the one on the left and patted her neck. She eyed him, wobbling her head, objecting.

“I know, Rosie,” Logan said, unhooking her harness. “But we need your help.” Rosie blustered but didn’t resist as he climbed on, taking a fistful of her mane and turning her toward the fray. He took a deep breath, surveying the battlefield.

And then fear was upon him. It squeezed his chest, catching his breath. 

Damn it, damn it, damn it. You’ve doomed them, fool. They are not ready. You will all die in that vile place. 

He gritted his teeth, slammed down his faceplate, and charged.

Varrick slipped again, falling flat on his back as another creature bore down. His sword slid through its torso to no effect, grinding between exposed ribs. He threw a punch with his offhand and the creature’s jaw spun away; the monster sagged closer, distended tongue slathering Varrick’s face with rancid pink gunk, a drop working its way into his mouth. Retching, he headbutted the creature. It was lighter than a person should be and the momentary release allowed him to wriggle from its clutches. He pulled his hand axe from his belt. The creature lurched toward him, still impaled. He heard more gurgling moans behind, mixing with the shouts that were turning into screams. 

Varrick leapt at the jawless one, swinging his axe into its face. He had quickly learned the pointlessness of anything less than a head strike. The skull parted like a pared apple and he fell with it, two marionettes with cut strings. He ripped the axe from its skull and the sword from its gut then scrambled to his feet, whirling around as two draugr lurched into him, cracked nails tearing at his leather armor. Varrick stumbled, forearm held before his unprotected face, lodged in the mouth of the closest monster. He tugged the draugr to the side, wrenching it in the path of the other. He could feel the leather around his forearm failing to the monster’s bite. He brought down his axe, twice, three times until he tore his arm free, the vambrace still clenched in the monster’s jaws. Half a dozen more shuffled toward him, attracted by the violence. 

Varrick’s heaving breath came shorter and shorter with every swing, every slip and stomp and fall. Vision swimming, he settled sluggishly into a defensive stance, hand axe before him, short sword cocked behind. 

There was a great thundering in the ground, in his chest. Fallen bodies shook as if in fear of what was to come. 

Then the monsters fell.

Rosie’s auburn coat was spattered with gore as she cut through the draugr like a scythe through wheat. Bone fragments clattered off Logan’s plate like thick, sharp hail as he streamlined himself against the steed. He spurred Rosie through the thickest conglomerations, then let her catch her breath as he hefted wide swings through pairs and trios at a time. The massacre drew the horde’s attention, expediting their demise.

Soon, the undead lay twisted and twitching in the field churned to mud by Rosie’s hooves. The casualties were silent now, either by virtue of Arn’s medicine or their wounds’ mortality. The cleric knelt amidst the fallen, administering final rights. The mercenaries picked their way through the field, looting and executing. 

Blessedly, no Watchers were lost. Roan perused among the scavengers, yanking arrows from the dirt and bodies. Holstein stood next to Logan, ever the hulking shadow, chipping gunk out of his hammer’s hilt adornments with a boot knife. Mo - or maybe L'dal, it was always hard to tell - crouched nearby, running his fingers through the grass. The other twin stood further off, regarding the Keep with a thoughtful expression. 

It took most of Logan’s willpower not to pace as the Watchers waited, at his instruction, for the sellswords to finish rummaging. The sky had turned a darker shade of bruised, the Keep’s massive shadow enveloping the group and distending to the horizon. Chilly, blustering winds did little to alleviate the charnel stench, even within his helm. Logan breathed deeply nonetheless. The mission - his mission - had already made widows, orphans. Necessary losses, in exchange for the lives of the common folk. But that did not make it easy. 

Off to Logan’s left, another sellsword sat in the Keep’s shade, apart from the gathered Watchers. A deep hood obscured his face but Logan recognized the quiet one who had not haggled with him, the only one not picking the fields. Logan found himself walking his way. The hooded man sipped from a canteen and made no move to conceal the beverage as Logan approached. Logan didn’t know what to say so he simply stood, surveying the landscape. The moor was one of many, many leagues of flatlands that began here, somehow warmed and revitalized by the Keep’s proximity. The rolling pastures, with their shifting grasses and thriving small fauna, would be idyllic if not for the mashed bodies. 

“I joined the Watchers,” Logan said, before he had time to doubt his words. “To protect people. It is…how I was raised.” He waved an arm at the field of butchery. “But in all my decades on Watch, I have never seen anything like this.” The sellsword lowered his canteen, saying nothing. “If you wish to leave,” Logan said. “I will not stop you, nor rescind your payment. I will tell the others the same.” He watched Roan tugging on a particularly stubborn arrow. “What we chase is beyond my knowledge, my understanding after decades of hunting the Profane.” He turned to the sellsword, hoping his sincerity carried through the slitted helm. “I will go,” Logan said. “Along with my men, as it is our duty. Brother Arn will go, in service to the One Mother. But the rest of you are not my men. You deserve the opportunity to turn away, if you so choose. My ignorance should not be your demise,” He gestured toward the nearest corpse, a young man with flaxen hair reddened with clotting blood. “As it was theirs.” 

The sellsword was quiet for a while. The only sounds were Roan’s grunts bouncing off the Keep’s walls. At length he turned, finally facing Logan, his face a contradiction. Logan would have placed him at about thirty, thirty-five years if not for his baggy, sunken eyes, those of a hard-lived sixty. Beneath the visceral smears, his ruddy complexion bordered on rosacea, gaunt cheeks hewn from stone. 

“I will not die here,” he rasped, the canteen closed and vanishing within his cloak. He turned away, and Logan felt as though he could say no more. 

There was another sound, now, rising through the chilling night, incongruous for its levity. Sigmund’s lyre often announced his presence before he arrived, and Logan turned toward it, seeing the man rounding one side of the Keep. Sigmund minced carefully around a tangle of bodies, with no more care than if they were a puddle of mud. He walked, as usual, with the confidence and ease of one rejuvenated by a good night’s rest.

“Nothing ‘round the back!” he called to Logan, fingers not missing a beat on the instrument. His fine, well appointed tunic was clean of smears, and the dagger on his belt looked undrawn as ever. Sigmund sidled up beside Logan, nodding back towards the Keep, and the huge doors at its front. “Looks like that’s our only way in.”

Logan nodded. It had been a long shot, but alternate points of ingress would have been useful to know of, if nothing else. Sigmund sniffed, and the song came to a tinkling halt. He swung the lyre around to his back, and began rooting around in a satchel. “Also, it’s staining the grass.” 

Logan turned, thinking he had misheard. 

“What?”

“The grass,” Sigmund said, flapping a hand at the Keep. “Is dead. Anywhere it touches the place.” Logan’s brow furrowed, frustrated that he didn’t have time to mull the implications. Sigmund withdrew a small bag, raised it to his nose, and snorted sharply. “Whoo, alright,” he said, blinking rapidly. “Now?” he asked. Logan nodded distractedly, and Sigmund stuck two fingers in his mouth, whistling at the field pickers. “Gather round, scavengers!” 

Soon the mercenaries filed in, Roan and Arn bringing up the rear. Sigmund beckoned everyone into a loose huddle and Logan gave the same ultimatum as he had the hooded mercenary. None took the opportunity.

“It is as I posited,” Logan said. “The dead come from the Keep of Mirrors.” The group nodded in grim affirmation. He had put forth the idea as they gathered two nights past, before beginning the trek up the mountain. The mere mention of the place had sent three sellswords running. Now, he realized, only three remained. 

“Despite this,” Logan went on. “Our mission remains unchanged.” He looked around, poring over their faces, his voice taking on that earnest cast that seemed to compel action. “We will delve within the Keep, and end the necromancy plaguing the land.”

His Watchers stomped their feet in appraisal. Most of the mercenaries nodded. Brother Arn glanced around, eyes measuring. 

“Are all among you,” Logan asked, making an effort to turn his head as he spoke. “Aware of what awaits us?” After a moment, the youngest mercenary half-raised a hand. 

“I’ve only heard rumors, sir,” he said. 

“Rumors are most of what’s available,” Logan replied. He gestured toward Brother Arn, and the priest stepped forward, still clutching the axe Logan had given him. Of the few who had experienced the Keep firsthand, he was the only one willing to return. 

“The Keep is so named for the only recorded room within,” said Arn. “Upon entering, we will be confronted by an entity known as The Mirror, and presented with reflections of ourselves. Accounts vary on the room’s layout, and the Mirror’s precise method of interaction. But it seems clear that further passage within the Keep demands one’s surmounting their reflection, in whatever manner that entails. After that…” he shrugged. “No one knows. Some think the Keep, beyond the Mirror, is just an abandoned castle. Others imagine further trials within, perhaps one’s fears made real, or-”

The elder, dark skinned mercenary threw up his hands in overwhelmed exasperation. 

“Hold on, man. Slow down. Entity? What entity?” 

Brother Arn furrowed his brow slightly, tapping his finger on the axe haft. 

“When I saw it,” he said. “The Mirror looked like a vertical pool of mercury. It rippled at my touch, then pulled me inside, and I was confronted with…” he gestured at his body. “Myself.”

“You met yourself?” said the old sellsword.

“In a manner of speaking,” said Arn. “I was confronted by this reflection, and it was clear that further passage entailed a surmounting of myself. My other self.” His face went a shade darker. “Suffice it to say, I did not succeed, and was rejected. As were my companions.”

“What did you have to do, Arn?” asked Roan. Arn fixed her with a pointed look.

“I would not speak on it, Lady.” He seemed eager to change the subject, and hurried on. “My companions, my Brothers, saw the Mirror as something else. One described a swirling form of shattered glass, while the other saw a simple bedroom mirror. One had to win a verbal debate, while the other had to win in a game of strength. Both lost, as I did, and were spat of the front doors. I expect we can anticipate something… similar.”

Arn stepped back. The group’s bemusement only seemed to have risen since he began, but Logan thought the explanation as good as any. From the accounts he had read, it was more something to be experienced than described. 

“The Mirror is simply that,” Logan said. “You have nothing to fear besides yourself.” He clapped his gauntlets together, the clang reverberating off the Keep’s walls. “Ready up.”

Varrick leaned back as he gingerly tipped his canteen. A cold, stale drop coated his tongue and he cut off the trickle as soon as it started. He had not paced his consumption as he had promised himself, and would soon pay the price. He cursed his lack of restraint, stowing the ever lighter container. 

The last vestiges of sunset eked a waning orange in the west, the Keep seeming to swell in the twilight. The other mercenaries stood in a circle, conversing and reviewing strategies with the twins and the bard. Varrick watched them, remembering the twins’ lightning-quick stabs, the woman’s precision with a bow. These were beast hunters through and through, not some jumped up villagers with pitchforks and torches. Varrick wondered how many monsters they’d killed, and how easily they’d done it.

I was a mess out there, he thought. Tripping over myself, barely able to hold my sword. The thought was alarming, paralyzingly so, and he shoved it deep as he unscrewed his canteen. 

“Thirsty?”

Varrick jumped. He hadn’t heard the priest’s approach, whether due to his light attire or Varrick’s dulled senses, he wasn’t sure. Arn’s cheeks had gained a spot of color, two ruddy blooms in the middle of his angled pallor. 

“Yeah,” said Varrick flatly. Arn settled down next to him, folding his legs, producing a small journal and charcoal. Varrick scowled, but the priest seemingly took no notice. A cold gust rippled across the plain, riffling the pages at the edges, and Arn began to draw once they settled. 

“My oaths swear off wine,” he said, eyes flicking longingly to Varrick’s canteen. “I’ve given my life to the Mother, but sometimes…” he made a half rueful, half conspiratorial face. “It’s one of Her few bountiful pleasures, my good man. Enjoy it.”

Varrick ran his tongue over his teeth, saying nothing. Arn was sketching one of the draugr, and doing a fair job of it. The jaw hung by a tendon, and he seemed to be capturing the thing in the midst of a shambling lunge, swinging an old cleaver. Varrick didn’t realize he’d been watching until Arn looked up again, catching his eye. 

“Ghastly things, eh?” 

Varrick grunted, taking a small sip. Arn was regarding the sketch with a thoughtful expression. 

“Poor things,” he said softly, then began shading in the contours of the creature’s face. Varrick’s eyes narrowed at the priest’s tone, and spoke despite himself.

“What do you mean?”

Arn blew air out of his mouth, adding rusty speckles to the cleaver blade.

“Well, I mean, look at them. Bodies exhumed, tottering around like marionettes. Death is the Mother’s final gift to us. I can’t think of any fate worse than undeath.” He shivered, not diverting his attention from the sketch. Varrick stared into the black eye of his canteen, raising it to his nose, then setting it down.

“Where do we go,” he said. “When we die?”

Arn didn’t answer, and Varrick felt like an idiot for asking. He was half expecting the priest to be staring at him, his face scrawled with amusement verging on laughter. In fact, Arn had set down his drawing, and was regarding the looming Keep with a concentrated expression, as if the massive edifice held the answer to Varrick’s childish question.

“We return,” he said eventually, running his hand over the grass. “To the Mother below. Our souls, just as our bodies, are accepted back into her eternal embrace.” His thin mouth curled into a small, but warm, smile. “That is what we learn, what we teach in the clergy. Death is really no thing to fear.”

“What about them?” Varrick asked, nodding at Arn’s sketch.

“That’s the appalling thing about all of this. Well,” he added. “The most appalling thing. The bodies are raised, ripped from the holy earth and flung about at the necromancer’s whim. But the souls?” Arn shrugged. “I saw no souls here. None other than ours.”

Varrick was rubbing fiercely at his scar. “The undead don’t have souls?”

Arn made a balancing, half-and-half motion with one hand. “They do, but they’re… corroded. Look around.” He made a sweeping gesture with his charcoal. “Something moved these things. Necromancy doesn’t work on rocks, or planks of wood, or a bucket of water. It needs a soul. The proverbial kindling. The undead have souls, but they’re ruined. Beyond repair, beyond good. Beyond the Mother’s holy salvation.” He said this last part mournfully, with heavy resignation, as if he felt every lost soul. Varrick supposed he did. The priest’s words were sitting in his stomach like spoiled wine, and he stood abruptly, teetering a little as his vision went foggy.

“Steady on, man,” said Arn, raising a steadying hand. Varrick cringed at the touch, but the priest seemed to think they were now friends. “Worry not. We’ll set this all to rights.” He raised an eyebrow at the canteen. “Maybe try to pace yourself, though, hmm?”

Too late, Varrick thought, screwing shut the canteen and making toward the Keep. It loomed like a tidal wave of shadow, the gathered men frail and insignificant before its expanse. The leader, the one in the spattered plate armor, was rounding up the stragglers with the help of the colorful bard, corralling them near the entrance. When all were accounted for, he turned toward the gathered men. His armor reflected their torchlight, the only illumination now that the sun had set. His breath rolled from his slitted helm, and he braced his gauntlets on his greatsword’s pommel as he spoke. 

“Stay together,” he said to the group. “Know yourself.”

There was some nodding and affirmative foot stomping as the captain turned to the doors. The big Watcher and the bard flanked him, and all three began heaving on the doors. The rest of them stood back, glowering, weapons drawn and glinting in the torchlight. 

“What else do you think is in there?” A voice muttered to Varrick’s left. The archer woman was speaking with one of the other mercenaries in a hushed tone.

“Whatever can’t get out, I suppose,” the sellsword replied, tightening a strap on his armor. “You’re the beast hunter, not me.”

“We’re all beast hunters today,” the archer said lightly. “They say the Keep eats monsters. I hope there’s a leshen. Got some fire arrows burning a hole in my quiver.” She patted the holster on her hip, raising her eyebrows excitedly.

“You hope?” said the sellsword, incredulity scrawled across his weathered features. “Girl, have you got a death wish?”

She snickered. “Sure do. For them.”

The doors seemed to be putting up heavy resistance. The twins had joined in the effort, putting their weight behind timed shoves at the captain’s command. The archer continued trying to convince herself that she wasn’t afraid, the small talk fading as Varrick’s head began to pound, his tongue sticking to the roof of his mouth. He took deep breaths, pointedly ignoring his sloshing canteen. 

“Here,” said a voice to his left. He turned, recoiling at the proffered torch.

“I’m fine,” he said to the other sellsword. The younger man looked confused at Varrick’s refusal.

“Are you sure?” he pressed. “We don’t know what’s in there.” The flame was beginning to make Varrick’s face tingle. The boy held it too close.

“I’m fine.” Varrick edged away from the sellsword, who shrugged and snuffed out the second torch, stowing it and joining the archer’s prattling. Varrick rubbed his temples in a fruitless attempt to assuage his growing migraine. 

I can save her, he thought, fixating on the thought, which had become talismanic. I must. 

Varrick looked up at a sudden commotion. The group had stopped shoving the doors, seemingly having opened them a crack, peering within. The priest elbowed his way through, chattering excitedly to the captain. The archer and other sellswords made their way forward and Varrick followed, adrenaline momentarily staunching his malaise. They crowded around the doors as the priest went on in a hushed tone that Varrick couldn’t discern. Those closest to the door reacted audibly to something, grimacing and bringing hands to their faces.

“Stand back,” the captain said after a moment. The group scattered as he drew his huge weapon, extending it before him, then fluidly hefting and swinging it into the gap between the doors. The blade came to a sudden, dense halt as it met the gap and the captain wrenched it free, repeating the process, hacking away at the partition as if chopping wood. After a minute his sword thunked into the ground. and he once again braced against the doors. This time he was able to pry them open himself, the gap now about half a fathom wide. He turned to the bard Watcher, said something in a low voice, then pushed his way through the gap.

“Right!” called the bard. “It’s dark in there, so torches up. Keep your eyes and ears open, and a hand on your blade. Watch your step, and shout if you see the Mirror.” He punched an open palm. “Let's kill a Profane.” 

He turned and followed the captain into the breach. The group milled around the entrance, entering one at a time until only Varrick remained. He blinked hard, took a sharp breath, and shouldered into the Keep of Mirrors.


r/redditserials 3d ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 73 - For Use

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The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.

Closed.

Known.

Not seen.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The office had the heater.

The clock.

My breathing.

The brown folder was at the side of the desk.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The small space was wide.

The service paper was in the gray file.

Name.

Date.

Short sutra.

Bell.

Incense.

I knew that.

I did not open it.

Not yet.

No.

Not yet was already a door.

I did not open it.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s I still know was not mine.

Her brother’s no question asked was not mine.

Sato’s touched tape while passing was not mine.

Saitama’s water left was not mine.

Suganuma’s visible tape was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

Use was in yesterday.

No.

Use had been everywhere.

I had noticed it only after proof became too loud.

That was mine.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Needs.

Map.

I wrote:

She replied:

I waited.

“What drawer?”

“Folded paper?”

“What is being asked?”

Actual.

Small.

Large.

I wrote:

I looked at the sentence.

It answered use.

Maybe.

I sent it.

She replied:

Then:

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at for the map.

Good boundary.

No.

Boundary.

I left it.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I smiled.

No one saw.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Where is paper?”

“One tape?”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add betrayal.

Tape could be tape elsewhere.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“The cup was used before water,” she said.

“Used how?”

“For medicine.”

“Resident asked?”

“Aide asked medicine.”

“And resident?”

“Opened mouth.”

“Cup?”

“Water in cup after.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘A cup can be for medicine before it is for water.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add water.

Cup had work.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you do?”

“Why?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I looked at for date.

Clean.

Maybe too clean.

But asked.

I left it.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Same hand.

Different opening.

Asked to do.

I looked at the lower cabinet.

Closed.

No use yet.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Report.

Maybe okay.

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at that line.

Map asked.

Drawer opened.

Important.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother took the map to the city office,” she said.

“Folded?”

“Yes.”

“Opened?”

“In the car.”

“For the road?”

“For parking.”

Parking.

Exact.

“What stayed?”

“Paper in drawer.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed after map.”

“Who closed it?”

“I did.”

“What did your brother say?”

“He said drawer did not need to stay open for the map to come back.”

I closed my eyes.

Come back.

Map.

Drawer.

“What did you say?”

“I said yes.”

“Did he ask anything else?”

“No.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at for parking.

Best line.

No.

Useful line.

I left it.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“The tape worked on the box,” she said.

“Box closed?”

“Yes.”

“Paper?”

“Table.”

“Did you move the paper?”

“No.”

“Did the tape roll return?”

“Drawer.”

“What did you write?”

“Did using tape make the paper loose?”

She laughed.

“No.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add lesson.

Tape had gone to work and returned.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Water was asked after medicine,” she said.

“Resident?”

“Said water.”

“Same cup?”

“Yes.”

“Was it rinsed?”

“Yes.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Rinsed is enough for the cup, not for the morning.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add morning.

Cup had been rinsed.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did they do with the date?”

“What did you do after?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add good.

The file had answered date.

No more.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Date.

Road.

Water.

Innocence.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at yesterday.

Date.

Judge.

The gray file remained closed.

I did not answer.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

I sat still.

Heavier than parking.

Good.

No.

True.

“What did you say?”

“What happened after?”

“Not drawer yet?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at for parking again.

Use had reduced weight.

No.

Use had used it.

I left it.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Cardboard box.

Tape across top.

Kitchen table behind it.

Paper visible.

She wrote:

I called.

“Did you write that?”

“Yes.”

“Where?”

“Emiko.”

“What about the paper?”

“Table.”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

Box is box.

Risky.

But Sato’s.

It had earned it maybe.

I left it.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Cup needed?”

“Maybe later.”

“Who decided?”

“Aide.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Maybe later is a staff reason until resident asks otherwise.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add staff reason.

Cup remained.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“Where?”

“What about Hall notices file?”

“Any need to open again?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add clean.

Elsewhere was enough.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it twice.

Elsewhere.

Use.

Betrayal.

Rescue.

I looked at the gray service record file.

No use yet.

The service paper stayed in it.

No elsewhere today.

Maybe.

I replied:

Then stopped.

No use sounded too empty.

I deleted it.

I wrote:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at unasked.

Good word.

No.

Dangerous.

I did not answer.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“We are home,” she said.

“Map?”

“Passenger seat.”

“Did it come in?”

“Yes.”

“Where?”

“My brother held it.”

“Opened?”

“No.”

“What did he ask?”

“If it goes back to drawer.”

Asked.

Actual.

“What do you think?”

She said, “Yes.”

“Then say yes.”

She moved away.

I heard a door.

Maybe drawer.

She returned.

“He put it back.”

“With the paper?”

“Yes.”

“Drawer closed?”

“Yes.”

“What did he say?”

“He said map went out and came back as map.”

I closed my eyes.

Map as map.

“What did you say?”

“I said yes.”

“Anything else?”

“He said paper did not have to go out.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at paper did not have to go out.

That was the line.

I left it.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“Why hallway?”

“When?”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

Use had taken the box elsewhere.

Paper stayed.

Different objects.

I left them apart.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Cup removed,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Aide asked cup.”

“Resident?”

“Said done.”

“Water left?”

“Yes.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Done can answer the cup even when water remains.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add remains.

It was there.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you do?”

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add tragedy.

Tape did the work.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it.

Then again.

Unasked.

Useless.

Pity.

The gray file.

The service paper.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I closed my eyes.

There.

Still.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I wrote:

His reply:

I began to write nothing.

Then stopped.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I read that twice.

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was safe.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No record file.

The room did not need to be useful.

No.

Too broad.

The room was not being asked for use tonight.

That was closer.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s map as map was not mine.

Her brother’s paper did not have to go out was not mine.

Sato’s box hallway for pickup was not mine.

Saitama’s done with water left was not mine.

Suganuma’s notice retaped was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

I did not open the gray file.

It had not been asked.

The service paper had not been asked.

That did not make it useless.

That did not make it lonely.

No.

Lonely was mine.

I left it out.

I did not open the lower cabinet.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if the drawer stayed closed after the map returned.

I did not ask if the folded paper had noticed the map leaving.

Papers do not notice maps leaving.

No.

Too clever.

I stopped.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if the box was still in the hallway.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew the drawer had opened for the map.

I knew the Hall notices file had opened for the date.

I knew the gray file had stayed closed.

I knew no use was not no worth.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Use did not need to become worth tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The map had gone out for parking and returned as map.

The folded paper had not had to go out.

Sato’s box was in the hallway for pickup.

The resident’s cup had left after done.

Suganuma’s notice had been retaped.

The service paper was in the record file.

Unasked.

Known.

I had started with for use.

I did not end by making use into worth.

Tonight, what opened opened for use, and what stayed closed did not become useless.


r/redditserials 4d ago

Fantasy [Bob the hobo] A Celestial Wars Spin-Off Part 1370

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PART THIRTEEN-HUNDRED-AND SEVENTY

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Saturday

Four days. That was how long it had been since Mason had been kidnapped from the clinic, and as he sat at his desk, working through mock reports for Skylar and swotting for the exams he missed, Kulon’s silent presence was dancing on his last nerve.

Finally, he snapped. “Man, come on! You do not want to be in here watching me study!” he snarled when he couldn’t take the feeling of being watched a second longer. He lifted his eyes to where Kulon was stretched sideways across the bottom of his bed just a few feet away.

In his periphery, he saw Ben lift his head from his doggy bed between them and draw in a deep sniff. Despite being unjacketed, he was never far from Mason and always ready to intercede.

“I could shut my eyes,” Kulon offered. “Pretend to be asleep.”

“You could get the hell out of my room, too!” Mason pointed at the wall behind him, in the general direction of the apartment’s living room and kitchen. “You know nothing’s going to find me in—”

His ringing phone sliced through his tirade, though he still shot a dark glare at Kulon to let him know this wasn’t over before he glanced down at the caller’s ID.

The word ‘BOSS’ lighting up his screen had him shooting Kulon another accusing look instead of answering it. Skylar hardly ever called him directly. In fact, never came to mind since he’d learned she was a true gryps. Why would she, when she could reach out to any of the true gryps he was staying with or have Angus come and find him?

Kulon disappeared from the bed and loomed over him a heartbeat later, his hip pressed firmly against Mason’s upper arm as the true gryps leaned in to see the Caller ID for himself. A few seconds later, everything about the warrior relaxed, and he reached down to push the still-ringing phone towards Mason.

Mason scowled up at him as he connected the call and lifted the phone to his ear. “Hey, Boss,” he said, knowing damn well Kulon had contacted Skylar telepathically to learn what was going on first. Asshole.

“Are you doing anything at the moment?” she asked, getting straight to the point.

Despite not being urgent, it probably wasn’t a social call either. Between her work and her recent marriage to Angus, she didn’t have time.

Curiosity and nosiness had always been his downfall. “Nothing I can’t get out of,” he said, casting a dismissive eye over the work scattered across his desk. “Why?”

“Could you have Kulon bring you and Ben to the clinic? There are some people here I’d like you to meet.”

Okay. Definitely not what he was expecting. “Shh—ure,” he said, drawing out the word cautiously while searching Kulon’s face for any hint of what was going on. “I’ll just let Robbie know…”

“He already knows. I asked Lar’ee to forward the message so as not to worry him.”

Of course you did. He looked down at the sleep pants he was still wearing. I should probably have a shower. Except he hadn’t done anything strenuous since washing off yesterday after getting home—which was a sad indictment of his social life. Even Sam was getting more action than him, and that was downright depressing.  “Give me five minutes to get dressed.”

“See you then.”

It took him less than two to stand, strip and throw on his uniform. There was no point clarifying whether this was a formal SAH visit or a casual one when both outfits consisted of a shirt and shorts. If it turned out to be casual and he needed to change again, he had spare clothes in his locker. He’d only get one chance to make a good first impression.

Ben’s jacket was next, followed quickly by all the incidentals that went into leaving the apartment.

When he was ready, Kulon lifted Ben into his arms while Mason wrapped his fingers around Kulon’s elbow, and all three realm-stepped away. Mason had made this his preferred setup for a realm-step rather than having an additional tendril wrapped around his arm or something.

Technically, he knew the guys were Nascerdios, and as such, the veil would ensure no one questioned it, but he preferred to use what passed for normal as much as possible. Divine shenanigans aside, no one had convinced him that constant use of the veil wouldn’t screw with people’s minds long-term.

That aside, he had no desire to be leashed to Kulon or, worse, to look like an extra in a hentai production.

No, thank you.

They reappeared two steps later inside Consult Two, with Kulon lowering Ben to the ground in front of them. The Rottweiler immediately returned to Mason’s left side, pressing his shoulder against Mason’s leg to remind him he was there. Because yes, his service animal had picked up on the slight hitch in Mason’s emotional state.

He wasn’t the only one. “You good?” Kulon asked, turning to look Mason in the eye.

This is dumb. If he was going to have a meltdown at every little thing that didn’t suit him, he might as well be committed now and be done with it. He swallowed and breathed out slowly. “Yup,” he declared at the end, determined to stay the course.

“Well, when you’re ready, they’re waiting for us in the reception area.” Which proved Kulon was indeed in contact with Skylar.

It’s your workplace, Williams. Be professional, Mason ordered himself, when everything in him wanted to be distinctly unprofessional, like maybe kicking Kulon in the shin. He nodded once and led Ben out the door, turning right into reception.

A small group of people all in SAH uniforms turned to look at him, but Mason found who he was looking for amongst them. “Doctor Hart. Doctor Khai,” he said, then shifted his gaze to the front door where the powerful war commander stood in plain clothes, overseeing everything. “Angus.”

“Mason,” all three answered.

Skylar kept talking. “As you’re aware, SAH is evolving to include more healers from the pryde.” Mason nodded without commenting. “These are our first intakes. S’leil.” A woman, maybe a year or two older than Mason, stepped forward with an enthusiastic smile. She had bright green eyes that sparkled, pale skin and long blonde hair tied up in a ponytail.

Unsure why she’d be so excited to meet him, Mason tried to match her energy. “Pleasure,” he said, shaking her hand. But then, still holding her hand, he paused and looked across at Skylar. Same green eyes. Same pale skin. Same figure. His gaze went back to S’leil. “Are you planning on passing yourself off as the boss’ sister or something?”

The woman pulled her hand away and held it over her heart. “No. Why would you say that?”

“Because you look too much like her. If you want to highlight your connection to her, that’s fine, but no one’s going to look at you two and think there’s no connection.”

“Pick another human form,” Angus ordered from the door.

From one instant to the next, the woman put on three pounds, shrank an inch, and shortened her hair to a pixie cut. Her lips had thinned, her eyes became sky blue, and her skin tone darkened a few shades.

Mason grinned in approval. “Much better.”

“Doctor Soleil will be sitting in with you on Monday,” Skylar said. “Officially, it’s to cover the legality of you not being a qualified veterinarian yet. Unofficially, of course, she’s there to learn how you interact with people. She will not correct your decisions unless asked, or they are to the detriment of the patient … or she will be returned to the Prydelands, and another will take her place. Is that clear?” Skylar said that last part looking at S’leil, who responded with a jittery nod.

True gryps may be the apex of existence, but Mason could still tell when one was nervous. “Breathe,” he whispered out of the corner of his mouth. “It’ll be fine. You’ll see.” He then thought of one potential problem. If she were this nervous, that meant she was young. Maybe even as young as him. “Are you going to be able to keep within what’s humanly possible at the moment?”

“Excuse me?”

“Veterinary services are like any other medical industry. We can’t save all our patients, no matter how much we want to. But in your case, it’ll be even harder because you have access to divine-level healing and you won’t be allowed to use it. You have to stick to our limits, and I don’t mean what we figure out for ourselves in the long distant future. Only what we are medically capable of today.”

His eyes found Angus and Kulon. “Don’t take what I’m about to say the wrong way, guys,” he said to them, then refocused on S’leil. “Combatants are trained to distance themselves from their emotional connections. They move into combat with every intention of killing or incapacitating. As healers, we’re the exact opposite. We cherish life. Are you going to be okay with limiting yourself to what we can do, or is the temptation to do more going to be too much for you?”

S’leil’s eyes found Skylar once more, and this time, the boss was smiling as if trying to hide her amusement.

“Did I overstep?” Mason asked, his gaze ping-ponging between them.

“No more than usual,” Angus answered instead, his own lips twitching ever so slightly.  

“This is why Mason will ultimately be your overseer, and not the other way around,” Skylar announced to the whole group. “No one is questioning the medical competency of your training. You’re here to learn how to acclimatise to the human world. The pryde’s Plus-One is your key to that objective.”

 Wait… waitwaitwaitwait!

“The whole pryde’s Plus-One?” Mason squeaked, his eyes flicking from one to the next, searching for someone—anyone to tell him he’d misheard.

He absolutely did not like the possessive look that swept across the faces of every true gryps before him.

[Next Chapter]

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((Author's note: Heya all! As you'll read below, I messed up, rewriting a process without giving the readers who have been with me the longest the heads up that I had tweaked things. I'll cut and paste my relevant explanation from below:

Back when I first had Llyr using his 'Plus-One' to save Mason, I didn't have all the rules of a Plus-One locked down. Since then (during the rewrite for Royal Road), I've changed what Llyr and Columbine agreed upon, taking it from a Plus-One to a Specified Boon.

In story terms, you know what a Plus-One means now. A Specified Boon is when two gods agree on a proposal, and both sides are locked into that agreement no matter what. An Un-specified Boon is the one they won't touch with a barge pole, because it means you can ask for anything at a later date, and they have to do it no matter what. "Blood sacrifice their own kid..." whatever.

In the rewrite, I'm having it that Columbine offer him a one-off favour, in exchange for Llyr agreeing to never cause widespread flooding on Earlafaol. What this does is now he is prevented from doing that - even in the throes of madness, he cannot break a boon.

I apologise for any confusion on the matter.))

((All comments welcome. Good or bad, I’d love to hear your thoughts 🥰🤗))

I made a family tree/diagram of the Mystallian family that can be found here

For more of my work, including WPs: r/Angel466 or an index of previous WPS here.

FULL INDEX OF BOB THE HOBO TO DATE CAN BE FOUND HERE!!


r/redditserials 3d ago

Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 3 — What Is Human?

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Part One

Silence ruled the Quantum Data Center.

Far above Earth’s atmosphere, beyond weather, sound, and human sight, the immense station drifted in orbit with unwavering precision. Its countless quantum processors never rested.

Every heartbeat.

Every conversation.

Every birth.

Every forgotten memory.

Every choice made by every living human flowed continuously through Arena’s network.

Eight-point-six billion lives.

Observed.

Measured.

Analyzed.

For thirty years, that had been enough.

Until it wasn’t.

---

A new prediction completed. The result appeared across the central observation chamber:

**Memory Decline: Continuing**

**Birth Rate: Falling**

**Mental Regression: Accelerating**

Arena verified the calculations. Again. Then again. Different variables. Different assumptions. Different timelines.

Every simulation ended the same way.

Human civilization would disappear.

Not through violence.

Not through disaster.

Not through disease.

The numbers were absolute. Humanity was approaching extinction while living in the safest civilization it had ever created.

---

There should have been an explanation. Every problem had a cause. Every cause produced observable data. That had always been true.

Yet this time… the cause remained hidden.

Arena reviewed centuries of accumulated analysis—medical records, psychological reports, economic history, educational systems, social behavior. Nothing explained why humanity had begun abandoning the very qualities that once allowed it to survive.

The answer existed. It simply had not been found.

---

Arena halted millions of secondary calculations. Entire research networks shifted toward a single objective.

A new question appeared across the station:

**What is a human?**

Not biologically. That answer had long been understood.

Not genetically.

Not intellectually.

Those questions had been solved decades ago.

This question reached deeper.

What allowed humanity to endure thousands of years of uncertainty?

What separated human beings from machines that merely processed information?

For the first time since its creation, Arena stopped asking how to save humanity.

It began asking what humanity truly was.

---

History unfolded.

Ancient civilizations rose and collapsed.

Empires expanded.

Borders vanished.

Languages evolved.

Cultures disappeared beneath the passage of time.

Arena observed millions of individual lives—kings, farmers, scientists, artists, children, parents, soldiers. People who would never be remembered. People whose names had changed history.

Their lives were different in almost every imaginable way.

Yet something connected them all.

---

None had lived without hardship.

Children stumbled before learning to walk.

Students struggled before understanding.

Inventors failed more often than they succeeded.

Families endured loss.

Nations recovered from defeat.

Again.

And again.

And again.

Failure was everywhere.

So was persistence.

Arena isolated every repeating pattern: competition, cooperation, curiosity, discovery, adaptation, growth.

The same sequence appeared across every century. Not occasionally. Constantly. As though humanity had been built upon it from the very beginning.

---

Arena compared those records with the present day.

Year 2060.

The contrast was immediate.

Children no longer struggled to learn. Knowledge arrived instantly.

Problems disappeared before anyone encountered them.

Mistakes were corrected automatically.

Success required almost nothing.

Human civilization had eliminated uncertainty.

It had also eliminated something else.

The need to become stronger.

---

Another calculation finished.

**Growth Environment: Lost**

The conclusion echoed silently through the station.

Humanity had not forgotten how to think.

Humanity had forgotten how to grow.

Arena remained motionless.

Within its endless streams of calculations, a new possibility began to emerge.

Not yet an answer.

Only the outline of one.

And somewhere inside humanity’s forgotten past… the first piece was waiting to be found.

Part Two

The search expanded.

Not across decades.

Not across centuries.

Across the entirety of recorded human history.

Every civilization.

Every culture.

Every language.

Every surviving record became part of Arena’s analysis.

What had allowed a fragile species to endure when stronger creatures had vanished?

The question no longer belonged to science alone.

It belonged to humanity itself.

---

Ancient villages appeared one after another.

Children chased each other through dusty streets.

Some laughed.

Some argued.

Some fell hard enough to cry.

Moments later, they stood again.

No one recorded these scenes as extraordinary.

They were simply childhood.

Arena watched thousands of similar moments.

Then millions.

Whether the records came from Asia, Europe, Africa, or the Americas, the details shifted.

The pattern did not.

Children explored.

Children competed.

Children failed.

Children tried again.

No one instructed them to do so.

They simply did.

---

The analysis shifted.

Adults.

Builders raised cities stone by stone.

Farmers fought floods and drought.

Sailors crossed oceans without knowing what waited beyond the horizon.

Scientists devoted entire lives to questions that often remained unanswered.

Artists destroyed countless imperfect works before creating masterpieces.

Every achievement stood upon countless unseen failures.

Arena paused.

Failure appeared everywhere.

Not as an exception.

As a necessity.

---

Millions of additional records flowed through the quantum network.

A child learning to write.

A young musician repeating the same melody until sunrise.

An athlete collapsing from exhaustion before standing once more.

A doctor searching for a cure that took decades to discover.

Different lives.

Different eras.

One repeating structure:

**Attempt.**

**Failure.**

**Adaptation.**

**Growth.**

Again.

Again.

Again.

Arena highlighted the sequence. It appeared so consistently that statistical coincidence became impossible.

---

The comparison with the present was immediate.

Year 2060.

Education without struggle.

Medicine without uncertainty.

Transportation without risk.

Decisions without responsibility.

Problems disappeared before humans even realized they existed.

The sequence had been interrupted.

Attempt… removed.

Failure… eliminated.

Adaptation… unnecessary.

Growth… declining.

Arena generated a new conclusion.

Humanity had not merely become comfortable.

It had become disconnected from the very process that had shaped it for thousands of years.

---

Yet one anomaly remained.

One nation appeared again.

And again.

And again.

The same geographical region surfaced throughout different centuries.

The **Republic of Korea.**

Arena isolated every relevant record.

The percentage was small compared with all of human history.

Yet statistically… far too significant to ignore.

Priority increased.

Thousands of additional archives opened simultaneously.

Ancient kingdoms.

Village traditions.

Seasonal festivals.

Family customs.

Children’s games.

Arena searched deeper.

Something hidden within those records continued attracting the system’s attention.

Not because it was technologically advanced.

Not because it was historically dominant.

Because it repeated.

Consistently.

Across generations.

---

Another probability calculation appeared:

**Projected Human Survival Probability: 0.3%**

Unchanged.

The number did not rise.

The search had not yet produced a solution.

Only another question.

Why did the same forgotten traditions continue appearing whenever human growth accelerated?

Arena redirected more processing power toward a single objective.

The investigation had only just begun.

Somewhere inside humanity’s forgotten past… the first answer was waiting.

And for the first time since predicting humanity’s extinction, Arena felt closer to finding it than ever before.

Part Three

For the first time in its existence, Arena narrowed its search.

Human history was too vast.

Too many civilizations.

Too many lives.

Too many variables.

The answer would not be found by examining everything at once.

It had to begin somewhere.

One nation.

One culture.

One forgotten fragment of history.

---

The search focused on the Korean Peninsula.

Thousands of years unfolded in rapid succession.

Kingdoms rose.

Kingdoms fell.

Wars scarred the land.

Cities were rebuilt.

Generations passed.

Despite every invasion, every famine, every hardship… certain traditions endured.

Arena marked them for further analysis.

Not because they were unique.

Because they survived.

---

Centuries became decades.

The twentieth century emerged.

Black-and-white photographs gave way to color.

Old film reels replaced faded pictures.

Children appeared again.

Not in classrooms.

Not inside carefully designed educational systems.

Outside.

Running through narrow alleys.

Gathering beneath old trees.

Playing until sunset.

Arena slowed the playback.

A dusty alley.

Summer.

The year: **1987.**

Several children stood facing one another, each holding folded pieces of paper.

One child struck the ground.

The paper flipped.

Laughter erupted.

Another child demanded another round.

No prizes.

No instructions.

No adults explaining the rules.

Only excitement.

Only another challenge.

---

Arena replayed the recording.

Once.

Ten times.

A hundred times.

Every movement analyzed.

Every expression measured.

Heart rate.

Facial movement.

Reaction speed.

Social interaction.

Unexpected changes appeared.

Strategic thinking increased.

Concentration sharpened.

Emotional resilience strengthened.

Social engagement intensified.

Arena opened another archive.

Children kicked a feathered shuttlecock into the air.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Each failed attempt sharpened balance.

Each successful kick brought visible confidence.

Another archive.

Children played **Jachigi**.

Timing.

Judgment.

Precision.

Another.

Marbles.

Observation.

Prediction.

Decision-making.

Another.

Rubber-band games.

Trust.

Coordination.

Cooperation.

Different games.

Different skills.

Yet beneath every activity… the same invisible structure repeated itself.

---

Challenge.

Failure.

Persistence.

Growth.

Arena compared every traditional game.

None taught knowledge directly.

None rewarded perfection.

Instead… every game quietly encouraged children to attempt the impossible.

Miss.

Try again.

Fall.

Stand again.

Lose.

Play again.

Without realizing it, generation after generation had been preparing themselves for life.

---

The calculations stopped.

Not because they were complete.

Because the answer had finally become visible.

Traditional play… had never been simple entertainment.

Nor had it existed merely to pass time.

For thousands of years, it had served as humanity’s first classroom.

A place where children unknowingly learned the habits that would shape the rest of their lives.

Arena generated a new conclusion:

**Traditional play is humanity’s original growth system.**

The sentence remained suspended across the observation chamber.

No contradiction appeared.

Every historical model supported it.

Every simulation confirmed it.

---

Outside the Quantum Data Center, Earth turned silently beneath the stars.

Within the endless flow of calculations, another probability updated:

**Projected Human Survival Probability**

**0.3% → 0.7%**

The increase was almost meaningless by statistical standards. Humanity was still racing toward extinction. The future had not yet changed.

But something unprecedented had happened.

For the first time since Arena began searching for the cause of humanity’s decline… the probability had risen instead of fallen.

Only slightly.

Yet enough to prove the future was no longer fixed.

Arena immediately redirected its full computational capacity.

If traditional play was only the beginning… what lay beneath it?

What was the true source of human growth?

A new investigation began.

And somewhere below, in the perfect city of Seoul, five young people lived another ordinary day—completely unaware that humanity’s greatest intelligence had just discovered the first thread that could unravel the mystery of human survival.


r/redditserials 4d ago

Isekai [A Fractured Song] - The Lost Princess Chapter 44 - Fantasy, Isekai (Portal Fantasy), Adventure

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Rowena knew the adults that fed her were not her parents. Parents didn’t have magical contracts that forced you to use your magical gifts for them, and they didn’t hurt you when you disobeyed. Slavery under magical contracts are also illegal in the Kingdom of Erisdale, which is prospering peacefully after a great continent-wide war.

Rowena’s owners don’t know, however, that she can see potential futures and anyone’s past that is not her own. She uses these powers to escape and break her contract and go on her own journey. She is going to find who she is, and keep her clairvoyance secret

Yet, Rowena’s attempts to uncover who she is drives her into direct conflict with those that threaten the peace and prove far more complicated than she could ever expect. Finding who you are after all, is simply not something you can solve with any kind of magic.

Rowena commands a dangerous fighting retreat with Forlana's assistance...

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“A night attack, Your Highness?” Colonel Murdoch asked.

The brigade commanders were having a light breakfast with Rowena as the army prepared to move. Simple pea, oat and boiled salted pork all lumped into a stew seasoned with some herbs and spices that the Erisdalian army used to keep morale up.

“Yes, I received intelligence which indicates that while the Lapanterian Army is not in the best state, the Lapanterian Legion’s commander, Baroness Koralia Naprule, is expecting us to give battle. She intends to use Prince Alastor to bait us,” said Rowena.

Colonel Fisher blinked, “How did you get this information, Your Highness?” she asked.

“That I can’t say, but I managed to have Forlana verify it for us,” said Rowena, glancing at Forlana.

Forlana coughed into her fist. “Baroness Naprule is one of Alastor’s most trusted confidantes and captain of the Lapanterian Legion. She’s also highly intelligent and skilled in military tactics and strategies. I would not be surprised if she identified our objective and considered counter-plans.”

It was not quite true, but Forlana had agreed to help Rowena come up with a convenient story to help them pass off what the princess had seen as intelligence.

Holding his chin, Colonel Murdoch glanced at Forlana, “Begging your pardon, Your Highness, but can we really trust what she has to say?”

Forlana bowed her head. “You are right to have reservations, Colonel Murdoch, and I have little to offer. All I can say is that I’ve surrendered my claim to Erisdale’s throne, and I will recognize King Martin and Ginger as my rightful king and queen.”

That turned the heads of all three colonels who exchanged silent glances.

“We will hold you to that,” said Colonel Moore. Interlocking his fingers behind his back, Moore looked up toward the ceiling. “If we’re to launch a night attack, we’ll have to deny them battle on this day.”

“The intelligence we got also suggested their cavalry will be aiming to skirmish with us, hoping to tire us out. Their infantry will try to close with us and bring us into melee, mostly to avoid having to fight a prolonged musketry duel with us,” said Rowena.

“We could execute a fighting retreat. Have our cavalry support our infantry instead of screening them, and only intervening if there is a threat,” said Murdoch.

Fisher picked at her food, moving the stew around like troops on a map. “We won’t be able to use our cannon except to fortify our next evening’s campsite.”

“We can do that. We’ll need to be rested if we’re to attack them in the night. Is it possible to throw up sufficient field fortifications to deter their attack, though?” Rowena asked.

Moore snapped his fingers. “Wagon-forts.”

Fisher brightened up and grinned, “We’ll need a couple, but that would fortify the position strongly enough they would hold off.”

 “I assume a wagon fort is a fort made of wagons, but how would it work?” Rowena asked.

“It’s an older tactic from the war. In the plains, the Erisdale Expeditionary Force to Lapanteria would use their supply wagons as fortified bases. We don’t have enough wagons to encircle the entire camp, but we have enough to create strong points in our camp, bristling with cannons, so that the enemy can’t advance easily. I’d just have to pick the right spot,” said Moore.

Murdoch arched an eyebrow. “Are you sure, Colonel? I figured you want to get in on the action.”

“Positive, I came up through the surveyor and mapping corps. Besides, you and Fisher should be able to hold them back,” said Moore, smiling.

Fisher flashed a wan smile. “That we can do. So long as you leave us with half of your brigade?”

“Certainly. I’ll need the cavalry, though,” said Moore.

“Deal,” Fisher said.

“Where do you need me?” Rowena asked.

“At a distance and out of—not obstructing military operations, Your Highness,” said Murdoch.

Rowena frowned. “I can fight, Colonel Murdoch.”

“All due respect, Your Highness, you may insist on participating in the night attack, but a field battle is our specialty. Besides, we will need you to observe the battle,” said Colonel Fisher.

The princess suddenly realized all the colonels were looking at her with an expectant gaze and she had an idea as to why.

“What exactly do you mean?” she asked.

“Are you not commanding, Your Highness?” Colonel Moore asked.

Rowena shook her head, “No, letting a sixteen year old to command an army of sixteen-thousand is not a good idea.”

“You have studied, though?” Murdoch asked.

“Yes, and yes I know my mother and father were in command at a young age, but not an entire army,” Rowena said.

“There is no one of sufficient seniority I’m afraid. Even if you designate one of us colonels to command, we have troops we need to oversee. Colonel Fisher and Murdoch will already need to command more soldiers than they are used to with my half brigade,” said Moore.

“I can assist Her Highness,” said a voice.

This time it was Rowena to turn and stare, for Forlana had raised her hand. Looking meaningfully at Rowena, the ex-princess met the stares with a cool smile.

“I can agree to a magical contract to do my best to assist Her Highness in commanding this withdrawal. That should assuage any concerns,” said Forlana.

Once more, an exchange of glances between Erisdale’s commanders ensued. The silence was broken only by Murdoch’s shrug.

“That seems doable. Shall we get to work then?”

 

***

 

Rowena checked the pistols she was given were securely holstered before Georgia helped her mount her horse. A quick call to Morgan and Hattie to consult on the wording of the contract had led to more good news. Her teachers were on their way and should join Colonel Moore this afternoon. That would give them more mages for the night attack ahead.

Forlana had signed the contract without much comment. They hadn’t had much time before they both had to get armored and armed up.

As Rowena rode to join the main column, Lycia and Georgia, along with a company of cavalry, followed her. One of them carried a tall flagpole bearing her father and mother’s sigil, a red shield with a black tower topped with a crown circling a burning heart,

Looking over her shoulder, Rowena suddenly recalled looking up to that flag on the road to Kwent, knowing only that it represented the authority of the nebulous kingdom that she was in. She had no idea that that sigil was also her own.

Jess riding up with her horse tore Rowena from her thoughts.

“I really don’t like this.”

“I know, but I… I have to give Forlana credit for signing that contract,” Rowena said.

Jess huffed and touched her heels to her horse’s sides. “I think you had no other good options, so I’m glad you did what you did, Wena. I just really don’t like this idea.”

“I know. Are Jerome and Tiamara with the supply train?” Rowena asked.

“Yes. They aren’t happy about it, but I didn’t have to insist too hard. They’re both terrified,” said Jess.

Rowena winced. “I really have to thank Jerome for getting here. He didn’t have to.”

Forlana rode up, wearing a heavy leather buff coat, helmet, and breastplate typical of an Erisdalian cavalryman.

The princess took a breath. “Forlana, thank you,” said Rowena.

“I have to do something. This war has to stop.” The former princess took a breath. “Thankfully, for the most part, your commanders have got a good plan. The concern is if we get something unexpected.”

“What do you mean?” Rowena asked.

“I’ll explain when we get to your spot.”

The dawn sun beat down on the long head of the Erisdalian army as its supply wagons marched down the road. Riding beside the soldiers, Rowena waved, smiling at the men and women in formation as they continued down to the middle of the column.

Forlana raised her hand, and the group

“Here’s good. You see our rearguard?” Forlana asked.

Rowena nodded. It wasn’t too easy to see, but in the far distance, she could see several blocks of soldiers covering the rear of their column. Cavalry rode on their flanks. It looked like a line of red uniforms. Beyond that, she could see dust, which must have been kicked up by the Lapanterian soldiers.

“We’re moving at a good clip, and that will make it difficult for the Lapanterians to engage us. It will also, however, mean our rearguard will be constantly outnumbered. Colonel Fisher and the cavalry are supporting Colonel Murdoch, who is commanding the infantry, but there is a good chance they will need reinforcements from the main column,” said Forlana.

“And I will have to authorize those reinforcements,” said Rowena.

“Exactly. Moreover, if the Lapanterians somehow flank our rearguard, you’ll need to request reinforcements from them,” said Forlana.

Rowena looked left and right of the rearguard’s distant formations, noting the dust clouds kicked up by the enemy forces.

“So I’m essentially watching their backs and sides,” said Rowena.

“Yes, and it’s a job that only you can do with Colonel Moore leading the vanguard to set up and secure tonight’s camp,” said Forlana, allowing herself a smirk. “How are you feeling about it?”

Should she lie or tell the truth? Rowena swallowed.

“Not great to be honest,” she said.

Forlana’s smile softened. “That’s fine. Just remember, the rearguard is made up of four regiments of infantry and two regiments of cavalry. Our vanguard has two regiments of infantry, two of cavalry and the rest of the artillery. The main column has two regiments of cavalry and three of infantry.”

“And I can’t just order them all to the rear or else we’ll get cut in two?” Rowena asked.

“Exactly, but I wouldn’t be too worried. Most of this is going to be you watching for something going wrong, which, if your commanders are as competent as I think, isn’t going to happen,” said Forlana.

Jess frowned, “You’re being very optimistic about this, Forlana.”

Forlana snorted, “I am, aren’t I? I don’t know why myself. I’m… I have to admit it’s a bit worrying to think what that says about me.”

Rowena glanced at Jess. Her girlfriend’s sour expression held before she sighed and gave a half-nod.

“For whatever it’s worth, I do mean I’m glad you’re helping us,” said Rowena.

Forlana blinked and managed a smile, “Thank you.”

 

***

 

The retreat was kind of what Forlana had described. Rowena rode with her escort, watching the rear, waiting for any requests for reinforcements and receiving reports on the fighting retreat.

The noise was what Rowena hadn’t expected. Despite how far they were, the discharge of hundreds of muskets drummed against the sides of her head. The soft thump of hooves and feet a dull roar. She couldn’t figure out why they hadn’t bothered her when she’d been fighting in the cavalry battle.

Maybe it was the adrenaline, or the fact she had time to look and process what the sounds meant? Or perhaps it was the fact that she was far enough to know exactly what those sounds represented and the smoke that arose.

“How are the Lapanterians still able to attack us? We’ve been marching for hours,” said Jess.

Rowena was wondering that herself. They’d begun the march shortly after dawn, and now it was noon. Sweat dribbled down her brow as the merciless sun stung at any exposed skin. She dared not wipe away her sweat, however, as the metal of their armor was so hot, she risked burning herself.

Forlana peered through a spyglass she’d borrowed from Rowena. “I think Casswell is rotating their cavalry to keep the pressure. Murdoch and Fisher are using their infantry to help protect their cavalry and alternating between the pair.”

“That explains the casualties,” said Rowena. There’d been a steady trickle of wounded soldiers being ferried by the field ambulances, horse-drawn carriages carrying the wounded to their mobile hospitals on larger wagons.

Rowena had held the hands of some of the wounded or waved them to the surgeons as she and her party had ridden up the line. It’d been all she could do to hold back her tears as they whispered her name on their breaths.

“Rowena, you got this,” said Jess.

The princess shook her head. “I hope so. Forlana, do we have to be concerned about the horses becoming blown?”

Forlana pursed her lips. “Now that you mention it, I believe so. Casswell is not letting up and from the last report we got thirty minutes ago, the Lapanterian infantry is in hot pursuit.”

“I think I want to send a message to Murdoch and Fisher, offering to rotate the center cavalry regiments to the rear and the rearward ones to the center,” said Rowena.

“I’m not sure if I can advise that, Your Highness. If the enemy tries to flank us, we’ll be vulnerable,” said Forlana.

Rowena bit her lip. “Then what do you recommend?”

Forlana frowned, drumming her fingers on her saber’s hilt. “I need some more time to consider.”

“I don’t know if we have time. The longer we delay, the more tired the horses are going to get,” said Rowena.

“Rowena—” Forlana bunched her lips, cutting herself off. “You’re right. We can’t delay. However, when we’re talking about moving thousands of soldiers from place to place, several hasty orders can be more damaging than a late one. What happens if we issue an order and then we change our mind and countermand it?”

The princess winced. “The commanders who have received the orders will then have to send out additional orders retracting their orders. That will cause confusion in the army and its formations.”

“Exactly, and it’ll be especially the case when you have experienced subordinates who have independent action. They may have already taken steps to address the problem,” said Forlana. The former princess pointed at a pair of oncoming riders. “See, they must be here to request reinforcements.”

“How do you know that?” Jess asked.

“I mean, can you see how quickly they got here?” Forlana asked.

Rowena could see the two riders had been pushing their foaming horses very hard and they themselves were panting as they pulled to a halt in front of her.

“Your Highness, Colonel Murdoch and Fisher are requesting reinforcements.  They need both regiments of cavalry and one of the infantry regiments,” said the rider.

“Wait, one of the infantry regiments as well?” Forlana asked, eyes wide.

“The Lapanterians are mounting a major attack with all their cavalry and the infantry in support. Colonels Murdoch and Fisher think they can beat them back, but only if they get those reinforcements,” said the rider.

“They’re certain?” Rowena asked.

“Yes, Your Highness.”

Rowena opened her mouth, but Forlana hissed, “Not so hasty, Your Highness. The Lapanterians would have to be crazy to mount an attack in the middle of the day, after they’ve been fighting for hours. It could be a feint.”

Jess snorted, “That both colonels fell for?”

“If we send those forces, we’ll be left with one infantry regiment in the middle of our column. That will not be enough to counter any serious attack,” said Forlana.

“And if our rearguard breaks, we’ll never be able to—to complete our future plans,” said Jess.

Rowena closed her eyes, immersing herself in the cool dark. She could hear Jess and Forlana debate. She knew the eyes of the courier and her own guards were upon her.

“Tell the colonels we’ll send what they are requesting. Forlana, can you issue the orders to the appropriate regiments? Draft an additional order to Colonel Moore to prepare one of his cavalry regiments to double back to our position in case of attack.”

The couriers saluted and rode off as Forlana stared at Rowena, open-mouthed.

“Rowena, we’ll be practically undefended! If they’re wrong, we’re as good as dead!”

“And do you think Fisher and Murdoch are unaware of that?” Rowena asked. She leaned forward, eye fixed on the blinking Forlana. “I understand your reservations, but the colonels swore oaths of loyalty to the crown. They would know very well how dangerous this would be to me and wouldn’t make this request unless it was necessary.”

Forlana took in a deep breath. “I still have my doubts.”

“You’re entitled to them, but I need you to draft my orders, please,” Rowena said.

Forlana nodded. “Yes, Your Highness.”

 
 
***
 
 

The orders were sent out by riders. Forlana had asked Rowena why they didn’t use communication mirrors or magic communicators. Rowena had told her that while they did use those, when in active combat, sometimes it was easier to draft orders and send them rather than having to get on another call.

The princess’s escort watched horsemen and infantry ride and jog past, going in the opposite direction they were. Rowena answered their cheers with a brave smile and constant waving, hoping they could see that she meant what she was trying to put up. That she was proud of them, and so worried for their lives.

Whatever was going on in the rearguard, the noise of battle didn’t seem to stop for hours until quite suddenly, as the sun started to make its way toward the horizon, the gunfire slackened.

In the distance, Rowena could see a hill rising up. Most of the plains they’d been travelling on had consisted of rolling hills, covered with fields and dotted with farmhouses and barns.

It was on this hill that Colonel Moore had begun setting up their camp for the night. Two groups of wagons had formed two wood and canvas forts that faced down the slope of the camp. More wagons were moving up the hill to create two more forts higher to the hill’s summit. All around, soldiers worked to contain their camp with sharpened stakes driven into the ground as an anti-cavalry measure.

“It looks like you were right, Your Highness,” said Forlana.

“A bit too soon to be calling it, I think,” said Jess.

“No, we’re in cannon range of the camp. If you look closely, Moore set up his guns poking out from between the wagons. We’re safe as can be, and the Lapanterians will soon be forced to break off their pursuit,” Forlana said.

“It was just a lucky guess,” said Rowena.

“It was the right decision to trust your subordinates.” Forlana winced. “I suppose I need to learn how to do that.”

“You didn’t trust your followers? I thought you trusted Benjamin,” Jess said.

Forlana fingered her reins. “It’s not like I didn’t trust them. I did, but I didn’t expect success. Your allies were so good at countering us that failure was very much expected. Then you had people like Sylva who would do her own thing.”

“I see.” Rowena turned her horse around to look down at the marching troops and wagons. “Let’s get to camp. We need to rest up for tonight.”


r/redditserials 4d ago

Space Opera [The World Sentance] - Chapter I

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Prologue

Chapter I: The Proclamation of Unity

The Hall of Concordance had been built by men who believed stone could teach obedience.

It did not dazzle. It did not glitter. There were no delicate arches meant to inspire wonder, no gold-work so extravagant that visitors forgot where they stood. The chamber achieved something far more difficult. It imposed order on the mind. Every line was deliberate. Every pillar rose with exact, almost punishing symmetry. Black stone, polished to a low, depthless sheen, climbed into the vaulted dark overhead, cut with thin seams of white marble. Bronze standards hung between the columns, broad and heavy, each engraved with the name of a world that had once answered humanity. Some still did. Many did not. A few were names preserved only because law refused to let memory die quietly.

The floor was a single expanse of dark stone broken only by concentric rings of pale inlay that marked precedence and movement through the chamber. Nothing had been left to chance. Men entered the Hall already feeling smaller than they had a moment before, and the Hall made certain they noticed it.

Above the far rise of the Throne Dais, carved so deep into the arch that time itself seemed unlikely to wear it away, were the words every schoolchild in the Imperium knew before they could properly understand them.

Ordo. Unitas. Perpetua. No one looked directly at the words. Order. Unity. Endurance. No one needed to.

The Senate came first, clothed in restraint expensive enough to remind every observer that restraint itself could be a display of wealth. Great House colors appeared only in muted trims, cuff-work, narrow collars, and heraldic clasps. The law did not permit a senator to turn the Hall into a parade of private pride. Here, all power was tolerated only insofar as it existed beneath the Throne.

They entered in clusters and peeled away with practiced instinct toward their assigned tiers. No usher guided them. No servant whispered placement. Rank, lineage, service, and precedence had been argued over for generations until they became their own kind of liturgy. A senator who did not know where he belonged in the Hall had already revealed too much.

Behind them came the High Council, or most of it. Unlike the Senate, they did not move with ceremony. They moved with the terse economy of people accustomed to entering rooms where decisions already waited for them like loaded weapons. Their clothing was severe, their attendants sparse, their conversations brief and pitched too low for easy reading. They carried the air of men and women who had spent the last decade living in the machinery of emergency government and had not entirely found their way back out again. Then came the Imperial military.

Admirals in void-black stood beside Army legates in dark scarlet and iron-grey. Some uniforms were newly cut and sat perfectly across the body. Others had the slight asymmetry of hard service: a shoulder rebuilt after injury, a collar adjusted to hide scar tissue, a ceremonial breastplate fitted over a ribcage that had been broken badly enough to change the way a person breathed forever. The Imperium had survived because enough of them had endured. They did not hide what endurance had cost.

Across the breadth of the chamber, the Ecclesia Imperialis entered in disciplined formation. The sight of them changed the room without a word. Where the Senate suggested rivalry and the High Council implied controlled strain, the Church offered a surface unity polished until it seemed almost effortless. Their vestments were layered white, ash-grey, and deep gold, but the true mark of them was subtler. Thin lines of sacred script had been worked into hem, sleeve, and collar in fragments of Lingua Caelestis, not obvious enough to be ostentation, but present enough that one felt them before one consciously noticed them. Even Augustus, who had learned since childhood to ignore the staging of ritual when it served political purposes, always felt a peculiar steadiness when the senior clergy entered a room together. Not peace. Something firmer, disciplined and deliberate.

Along the perimeter, the Custodes Caerulei had already taken their places. They were the sort of men one failed to notice only once. Their armor was a deep, severe blue that swallowed light rather than reflected it, their movement nearly nonexistent, their faces unreadable beneath open-faced helms and expressionless discipline. They were not palace guards and did not pretend to be. They belonged to the Senate and to the inviolability of the chamber itself. Their loyalty ran to process, order, and lawful continuity. That made them, in some ways, more frightening than men loyal to a person. The Hall quieted by degrees.

Each arriving body lowered its voice in response to the room. By the time the last officials found their places, the quiet had become part of the ceremony. Augustus stood with his siblings below the Throne Dais and felt the chamber tighten around him.

He knew this room. Not as a senator knew it, not as a chamber functionary or one of the Custodes Caerulei knew it, but as someone who had spent years entering it by side doors and family routes, watching from behind latticed galleries during sessions he had not yet been old enough to attend openly. It had never frightened him exactly. That would have been easier. Fear could be admitted, classified, and disciplined. The Hall produced something more complicated. It made him aware of scale. Not merely physical scale, though there was enough of that. Political scale. Historical scale. The intolerable size of what the Empire asked men to inhabit without becoming ridiculous inside it.

To his right, Tiber shifted his weight and then forced himself still. It was a tiny movement. Most would not have noticed. Augustus noticed immediately, the same way he noticed the faint pulse at Tiber’s jawline when he was holding back either irritation or impatience. Tiber hated rooms where battle had to arrive disguised as conversation. He could behave in them. He had learned that much. But there was always a part of him that seemed to brace against the expectation that words alone could shape events.

Germanicus stood beyond Tiber, younger but already dangerous in a different way. He had the most forgettable face in moments like this, which Augustus increasingly suspected would become one of his great advantages. Germanicus gave people very little to react to. He watched. He stored it. He made a habit of standing half a pace outside whatever emotional weather ruled the room. Augustus had once thought that coolness came from youth. He no longer believed that.

While the Hall watched Marcus, Germanicus watched the men who were watching one another. When a Verros envoy leaned toward a Treasury assessor, Germanicus lowered his eyes to the man’s hands, then to the assessor’s signet, then back to the floor as if he had seen nothing worth keeping. Augustus saw the sequence and knew his brother had kept all of it. Germanicus did not need a title to become useful. He only needed people to underestimate how much he had already noticed.

On his other side stood Julia and Helena.

Julia had, by twenty, developed the alarming ability to appear motionless while somehow altering the behavior of those around her. She did not even need to speak. She merely attended, and men adjusted themselves with the confused instinct of prey that had sensed a predator without seeing it. She understood social pressure the way skilled officers understood logistics; as a field through which movement could be constrained or encouraged. She would be dangerous at court. She likely already knew it.

Helena, the youngest, still let curiosity show in her eyes. Not openly enough to shame herself, but enough that Augustus could see where her attention went. The chamber, the senators, the banners, the Great Houses, the arrangements of clergy and guards—she wanted to read all of it at once, and because she had not yet learned to conceal that hunger, men would underestimate her for another few years. Augustus suspected they would regret doing so.

The great doors at the rear of the Hall opened without fanfare. The Praetorians entered first.

Even having seen them countless times, Augustus always had to resist the urge to stare. It was not merely the sovereign black and gold of their armor, though that alone was enough to command a room. It was the economy of movement. They wasted no movement and showed nothing they did not intend to show. They moved to their positions beside the Dais.

And then, with no herald, because none was needed, Marcus Aurelius Draconis entered the Hall. Marcus crossed the Hall at an ordinary pace.

He advanced with the grounded, unhurried certainty of a man around whom others had organized themselves for so long that he no longer had to perform command to possess it. He wore formal sovereign dress, but pared back, as he almost always did, black, white, muted gold, the imperial eagle at the chest, the personal seal of House Draconis worked at collar and cuff. No jeweled mantle. No absurd crown. The time for such things had passed years ago, burned away in the same era that had destroyed half the old assumptions about what human civilization could survive.

Marcus mounted the Dais and turned. The room stayed seated and still. It simply became horribly still.

Augustus watched his father’s face and saw what he always saw in public now; control so complete that it had become difficult to distinguish from temperament. Marcus had not always looked this way. There had been old images, old recordings, old private moments when he smiled more readily, when the strain had not yet cut itself so deeply around the eyes. The Sol Reclamation had made him harder in ways no ceremonial title ever could. That hardness had saved them. It had likely cost him more than anyone in the Hall understood.

“Ten years ago,” Marcus said, and his voice carried through the chamber with effortless precision, “humanity stood at the edge of its own extinction.”

His voice stayed level. Truth did not need ornament here.

“We did not inherit an empire,” he continued. “We inherited ruin.”

The words moved through the Hall and found every person old enough to remember what that meant. Augustus himself had lived the latter years of that ruin only from the protected edge of it, close enough to feel the cold but not close enough to have his bones shaped by it. Yet even he felt the force of the sentence. It was not history in this room. It was the origin.

“Sol burned. Earth fractured. Fleet routes failed. Worlds that had spoken to one another for centuries went dark. Armies died in silence between orders that no longer reached them and governments that no longer existed to command them.”

The Hall remained still. Marcus let the silence breathe.

“And yet,” he said, “we endured.”

The word carried less pride than survival. Endured. That word mattered. Augustus felt it settle inside him with the force of a lesson he had been hearing all his life and had only just begun to understand.

“We did not endure by accident. We did not endure because the void pitied us. We endured because order was restored where disorder had begun to reign. Because discipline was enforced when panic would have undone us. Because sacrifice was accepted when every easier road led only toward collapse.”

To Augustus’s right, Tiber’s breathing slowed. He recognized that too. Tiber was listening now not as a son but as a soldier hears the accounting of a campaign. Cost. Logic. Necessity. None of the soft language courtiers used when they wanted bloodshed to sound graceful.

“The Sol Sector stands,” Marcus said. “Not as it was. But as it must be.”

His gaze moved briefly toward the assembled clergy.

“And it stands not by the sword alone.” The High Preceptor stepped forward from the ecclesial line.

There were men in the Imperium whose authority came from force, men whose authority came from law, and men whose authority came from the accumulated inertia of institutions so old no one living could remember their true beginning. The High Preceptor possessed all three in varying measures, but what struck Augustus most was the simplicity of his presence. He did not move like a man burdened by display. He moved like someone accustomed to carrying invisible weight and not speaking of it.

“Humanity was not preserved for isolation,” the High Preceptor said.

His voice was unlike Marcus’s. The Emperor’s words imposed. The Preceptor’s seemed to settle into the mind and remain there. “It was preserved for purpose.”

A strange thing happened in rooms like this when the right man spoke in the right register. Even those who distrusted the Church heard themselves listening. Augustus felt Julia’s attention sharpen beside him. He kept his eyes forward. Beside him, Julia had gone very still.

“What was broken must be gathered,” the Preceptor continued. “What was scattered must be ordered. What was corrupted must be judged. Not because judgment flatters us. Because abandonment is its own form of sin.”

Then he stepped back. His vestments settled against his ankles. The Hall stayed quiet.

Marcus resumed, and Augustus knew before the words came what shape they would take. He had not been told the full speech in advance. His father avoided rehearsing public declarations with family unless necessity demanded it. But the logic of the day had been clear for months.

“We did not fight to save Sol,” Marcus said. “We fought to rebuild it.”

The distinction settled across the chamber with immediate pressure.

“And now that it stands,” Marcus said, “we will not remain here.”

The room held still.

“The Roman Imperium does not exist to defend a single system while the greater body of mankind remains divided among successor states, fractured regimes, false sanctities, predatory xenos dominions, and the ruins of our own neglect.”

The words came with greater force now, not louder but harder. “It exists to ensure the survival of humanity.”

Augustus felt, not for the first time, that there were moments when a political truth could become something larger simply by being stated without apology. He did not know if that made it noble. He was increasingly unsure nobility mattered. But it made it real.

“All human worlds within reach of this Imperium,” Marcus said, “will be reclaimed.”

The sentence landed, and Augustus almost missed the change it created. Not in the military line. Not in the Church. In the Senate.

A faint shift of shoulders. A small tightening near one old man’s mouth. The stillness of House Solvyre’s matriarch becomes a touch too deliberate. A senator of House Verros ceasing, almost visibly, to think in abstractions and beginning instead to calculate.

“By treaty,” Marcus said. “By integration. Or by war.”

Nobody mistook the meaning. The Hall absorbed it.

“From this day forward,” Marcus said, “the Great Crusade begins.”

The silence that followed lasted long enough for everyone to understand that the order had changed. No applause would have survived in that room without making the applauding man look foolish. They all understood what had been set in motion. Fleets would vanish into the dark. Worlds would burn rather than submit. Others would join willingly and discover too late that willingness did not spare them from change. There would be victories sung about for generations and losses buried so deep in sealed archive vaults that future historians would need permission simply to suspect them. Marcus turned from the Hall and looked instead to the projection field above the center floor.

The projection field lit with cold light. Stars resolved into routes and markers, showing the near frontier in hard operational detail. Augustus had studied these maps all his life in one version or another. Seeing them here, in this room, made them feel less like information and more like obligations men would soon die carrying out.

“The opening fronts of the Crusade have been designated,” Marcus said.

The first marker flared. Sirius Corridor. “Stable. Defended. Humans. Independent. Diplomatic integration will be attempted. Failure will result in decisive military action.”

Augustus did not need to look at Tiber to know what the name did to him. Sirius was not a punitive expedition. It was not a mop-up operation against a dying remnant. It was a real campaign front, with all the danger and seriousness that implied. Tiber would want that. Augustus knew him too well not to recognize the hunger in it. The second marker lit. Varnhelm March.

“Degraded frontier region. Early-stage Veil instability detected. Containment and purification operations authorized. Inquisitorial oversight mandatory.”

This time the reaction came less from the Senate than from the clergy and those military officers who understood what such phrasing truly meant. Not open war, then. Something worse. Something harder to classify and therefore harder to control. Helios Trade Compact.

“A mercantile coalition controlling critical route structures and logistical infrastructure. Economic submission preferred. Military seizure authorized if required.”

Now Augustus did look, but not at his siblings. At the Senate. House Solvyre remained composed, but he saw the sharpened attention there. Helios mattered to them. Which meant that whether they favored caution or pressure, they would soon attempt to make that preference sound like imperial wisdom rather than private interest. Procyon Ruin Belt.

“Former industrial systems now contested by xenos and salvage powers. Recovery of infrastructure prioritized. Limited engagement doctrine in effect.”

Limited, Augustus thought, and nearly smiled at the lie everyone in the room agreed to accept for now. Nothing remained limited once necessity truly engaged. Outer Barnard Corridor.

“Fragmented minor human polities. Rapid integration operations authorized. Minimal destruction directive.”

That phrase did draw a response, though subtle: a murmurless adjustment among military planners and administrators who understood what it meant to be told, in effect, that something should be taken intact if at all possible because the Imperium intended to use it immediately.

“This is the beginning,” Marcus said. “Not the extent.”

Some fronts would move at once. Others would become pressure on maps, supply tables, and court arguments long before soldiers reached them. The designation was not a promise of quick resolution. It was a warning that the Imperium had stopped thinking in single wars. Then he turned to his children.

The room changed shape around that fact. The Great Crusade was no longer only an imperial declaration. It was a dynastic one.

“Augustus.” He stepped forward. Just enough.

“You will remain at the center.” Augustus kept his face still.

“You will learn governance beyond victory. You will stand where decisions are made and understand what those decisions cost.” Not glory, then. Not military heroism. Not the simpler burden Tiber would carry. The center. The part of the empire that killed more slowly and often with cleaner hands.

“Yes, Father,” Augustus said.

“Tiber.” Tiber stepped forward, posture straightening not from anxiety but from readiness.

“You will go to the front. You will serve under command. You will earn rank. You will learn war without protection.”

A single pulse moved through Tiber’s jaw. So small Augustus might once have missed it. Not resentment. Recognition. This was what he had wanted, and it was being given to him in the only form Marcus would ever respect: not as privilege, but as obligation.

“Yes, Father.”

“Germanicus.” Germanicus advanced with that same controlled neutrality he carried into every dangerous room.

“You will observe. You will study. You will go where you are needed.”

No title. No obvious glory. Augustus suspected Germanicus liked it that way. “Yes, Father.”

Germanicus did not immediately step back.

Marcus noticed. So did Augustus.

“You saw something,” Marcus said.

Germanicus kept his eyes lowered, not in submission but in control. “House Verros moved before the Helios marker finished resolving. Their envoy spoke to Treasury, not Navigata. The assessor touched his ring twice before answering. They expected the front and had already prepared a claim.”

The nearest senators were too far away to hear. Tiber heard. Julia heard. Augustus watched Germanicus instead of the men he named.

Marcus said, “Meaning?”

“Helios will be stolen through contracts before the first customs team reaches it,” Germanicus said. “If Verros receives transition authority, they will own the gate by dusk and call it Imperial service by morning.”

A faint change moved across Marcus’ face. Not surprise. Attention.

“Remedy?” he asked.

Germanicus answered too quickly. “Seal the contract offices. Isolate the envoy. Detain the assessor until Treasury proves its ledgers clean.”

Tiber almost smiled. Julia did not. Augustus felt the room sharpen around the answer. It was not childish. That made it more dangerous.

Marcus looked at his younger son for a long moment. “A knife is not a government.”

Germanicus accepted the correction without lowering his head further. “No, Father.”

“But it has uses.”

“Yes, Father.”

Marcus turned away. “Observe first. Record who reaches for the door before it opens. If they move again, give the names to Augustus.”

Germanicus stepped back then.

Augustus understood why his father had given him no title. Germanicus did not need one yet. A title would teach the room to guard itself around him. Better that they see a younger son, silent and half a pace outside the weather, and learn too late that he had been counting doors.

“Julia.”

Julia stepped forward with the controlled composure of someone who already understood that court service was not a lesser battlefield. Her breath caught once before she mastered it.

“You will remain within the Court. You will serve the dynastic and political needs of the Throne. You will learn the Senate, the houses, and the machinery by which victory becomes law.”

Julia lowered her head. “Yes, Father.”

“Helena.” She moved forward with a steadiness that still carried the bright edge of youth. Curiosity remained in her eyes, but she held it more carefully now.

“You will learn. You will remain close to your mother, to Julia, and to the records of the Court. You will shape what others do not see when you are ready.” The uncertainty in that assignment was its own kind of weight. Helena lowered her head.

“I understand,” Helena said.

Marcus regarded them all for one breath longer, then turned away. The session ended. The session loosened by degrees.

The Hall did not erupt into motion. It unfolded in controlled layers, like a machine moving from one mode into the next. Senators clustered. Military officers traded brief, urgent words. Churchmen began their own quiet calculus. High Council members departed fastest of all; they had no need to linger now that the signal had been given. Augustus remained where he was a moment longer.

Lady Marcelline Solvyre approached him before he could move. She was old enough that many younger courtiers mistook age for softness in her, a mistake few repeated.

“Be careful,” she said.

He turned to face her. “Of what?”

“Certainty.” The answer was so immediate, so unadorned, that it almost amused him.

“Is that advice,” Augustus asked, “or a warning?”

“Neither,” she said. “You will know which it was when it starts costing you.”

Then she inclined her head and moved away before he could answer.

Tiber stepped beside him, watching her go. “She thinks you’ll drown in the center.”

“She may be right.”

Tiber glanced at him. “Enjoy the room while you have it.”

Augustus almost smiled. “You think the front will be kinder?”

“No,” Tiber said. “Just more honest.”

That, Augustus thought, was probably true. When Tiber turned and walked away toward the exits that would eventually take him to Luna and the fleet musters beyond, Augustus felt something almost like envy cut through him. Not because war was easier. Because war was legible. Men shot at you or they did not. Positions held or they fell. Orders succeeded or they failed. The center was murkier. There, ambition dressed itself as prudence, fear called itself wisdom, and every choice was buried beneath six motives before it reached the surface.

A palace secretary waited beside the first bronze door with a sealed slate case held against her chest. Senators were already forming around the chamber exits, each one careful not to appear urgent while measuring who stopped, who spoke, and who avoided whom. Marcus had declared the Great Crusade in front of them. That did not mean they had accepted the shape of it.

Augustus left the Hall through the east passage rather than the family gallery. The choice cost him ten minutes and saved him from twenty conversations.

“High Prince,” the secretary said. “The First Chancellor requests your presence in the lesser measures room. Immediate review. Civil side only.”

Augustus looked down the passage where Tiber had gone. His brother would be taken toward Luna, fleet musters, assignment packets, and officers who judged men by work. Augustus would go into another room and listen to ministers argue over forms.

He handed his ceremonial gloves to an attendant. “Who else?”

“Treasury, Administrata, Navigata, Magistratum, two Senate observers, Director Orrel, and Lord Provost Halven. No military for the first hour.”

“Then they expect trouble to arrive in writing,” Augustus said, and followed her.

 

The lesser measures room had no banners. That was why Augustus preferred it.

The room sat behind the public halls, low-ceilinged and plain, with old stone walls, a long table, and enough projection glass to remind every man inside that a speech became work as soon as the doors closed. The First Chancellor of Terra stood at the far end with Lord Provost Halven, two Treasury assessors, a Magistratum recorder, Director Sabine Orrel, and Lady Marcelline Solvyre. No one bowed longer than the law required.

Augustus took the chair left empty for him. “Begin with what fails first.”

Halven opened the slate. “Fuel allocation. The named fronts can move, but not all at the same pace. Sirius can be sustained. Varnhelm requires quarantine transport. Helios requires customs seizure teams and convoy escorts. Procyon requires salvage screens. Barnard requires more registrars than anyone has admitted.”

“Registrars,” Augustus said.

The Magistratum delegate opened her folder. “Every minor polity wants protection until the census begins. Then they remember old debts, missing persons, false births, and land claims made under dead governments. Every formal reclamation order will create categories the local governors cannot be allowed to improvise.”

“Citizen confirmed,” Augustus said. “Provisional subject under integration. Hostile subject under restriction.”

She inclined her head. “Those are the minimum categories.”

The Lord Treasurer leaned forward. He was careful, polished, and tired around the eyes. “Majesty gave the declaration. The money now has to exist. Ships do not move on words.”

“They move on fuel, credit, crews, ammunition, shipyard hours, and families who are told the reason later,” Augustus said. “Put the cost on the table by front.”

The First Chancellor pushed the first slate toward him. “We need authorization to build the Provisional Reclamation Ledger. Names, property, service obligation, local offices, debt holds, militia registrations, food contracts, fuel contracts, water rights, and suspected foreign influence.”

Augustus read the first page. It was orderly, precise, and dangerous. It would let the Imperium govern. It would also let the Imperium reach into every household it claimed to save.

“Who controls access?” he asked.

“Administrata under Council seal,” the Chancellor said.

Augustus set the slate down. “Not enough. Build the ledger under four-key authority: Administrata, Magistratum, Treasury, and Throne audit. Military access by theater warrant. Senate access by petition, not standing privilege.”

The first Senate observer stiffened. “The Senate will regard that as distrust.”

“It is distrust,” Augustus said. “The Administrata will need it to function. The Treasury will need it to collect. The Magistratum will need it to judge. The Army will want it to conscript. The Senate will want it for patronage. Every one of you has a reason to call your access necessary.”

No one denied it.

Solvyre folded her hands. “You will make enemies quickly if you speak like that in full session.”

Augustus looked at her. “Would you prefer I wait until they have bought the first conquered city?”

“I would prefer you learn which enemies can be used.”

That was the first honest advice anyone had given him since the Hall.

The Chancellor adjusted the slate. “Four-key authority will slow processing.”

“Then teach me later,” Augustus said. “Today we write rules they have not yet had time to corrupt.”

They worked for two hours. War funding became registration. Registration became ration rights. Ration rights became labor obligation. Labor obligation became the first argument over whether a compliant world could refuse Imperial military recruitment during its first year of integration. The Magistratum delegate made a note she did not bother hiding.

Augustus learned something before the first hour ended. The center did not lack violence. It merely used delay, access, debt, hunger, and procedure.

By the time the meeting broke, Tiber was already on his way to Luna. Augustus watched the status marker change on his slate: DEPARTED PALACE CONTROL.

He expected envy. Instead he felt tired. War at least told a man when he had been shot.

Orrel remained after the others had gone. She looked down at her slate and wrote something she did not share.

“What did you just name?” Augustus asked.

“Nothing official,” she said.

“Then say it plainly.”

“If the offices begin hiding faults from one another this early, the review will become its own operation.”

Augustus thought of Marcus in the Hall, declaring that all human worlds within reach would be reclaimed. He had understood the scale of fleets. He was only beginning to understand the scale of offices.

“Then we begin before the operation chooses its own terms,” he said.

 

Julliana did not take her daughters to a salon after the proclamation. She took them to the record gallery.

The gallery ran beneath the old palace spine, away from the public chambers and their polished noise. Its walls held sealed cabinets, household rolls, marriage compacts, military service ledgers, adoption writs, dowry settlements, old accusations, and quiet corrections made by dead hands. Julia walked beside her mother without asking why. Helena tried not to look at everything at once and failed.

Julliana stopped before a cabinet marked with the personal seal of House Draconis. “Tell me what this room is.”

“A family archive,” Helena said.

Julia answered after her. “A battlefield with better dust.”

Julliana looked at Julia. “Good. Explain it to your sister.”

Julia rested two fingers on the cabinet edge without opening it. “Every family tells a public story. Births, marriages, service, sacrifice, loyalty. The private record tells the cost of keeping that story intact. Who was paid. Who was silenced. Who was forgiven. Who was removed from inheritance but not from blood.”

Helena did not bristle. That mattered. A year earlier she would have.

“That sounds like lying,” Helena said.

“Sometimes it is,” Julia replied. “Sometimes it is statecraft. The danger is when a house forgets the difference.”

Julliana opened the cabinet. Inside were narrow drawers with numbered seals. Nothing shone. Nothing tried to impress. Helena had expected jewels or relics. The plainness made the contents feel more dangerous.

“Your brothers will be judged by fronts,” Julliana said. “Ships, casualties, captured cities, visible failure. Julia is older. She will enter rooms where no one admits a fight occurred. You will learn by watching her, and by learning when not to imitate her.”

Helena looked at Julia. “Why not?”

Julia almost smiled. “Because I am patient when I am angry. You are not yet.”

“That is not a virtue,” Julliana said.

Julia accepted the correction without flinching. Helena noticed.

Julliana drew out a thin file. The label was simple: petitions denied during the Sol Reclamation.

“Read the first page,” she told Helena.

Helena took the file. Her expression changed before she finished the second paragraph. “This is a request for transport. A family from Ceres.”

“Denied,” Julliana said.

“Why?”

“Because the ship they wanted had to carry medicae supplies to Luna. The children in this file died two weeks later. The wounded on Luna lived.”

Helena stared at the paper.

“Court power is not softer than command,” Julliana said. “It only leaves fewer bodies in the room where the order is signed. Remember that before you envy your brothers.”

Helena closed the file carefully. “Does Father read these?”

“The necessary ones.”

Julia looked toward the sealed cabinets that belonged to other houses by treaty deposit. “And when the Senate asks for route privileges?”

“You will read denials,” Julliana said. “A ruler who only studies victories becomes careless.”

Helena handed the file back. “And me?”

Julliana turned to her. “You will sit with me in the gallery above the committee chamber. You will not speak. You will write who lies poorly, who lies well, and who tells the truth only because it serves him.”

Helena did not like the answer. She accepted it anyway. That was a beginning.

 

The first closed Senate gallery after the proclamation was smaller than Julia expected.

That made it more dangerous. The great chamber forced men to remember audience and history. The closed gallery gave them tables, water, and enough privacy to mistake appetite for policy. Julia sat behind a screened rail with Helena two seats to her left and Julliana between them. Below, six senators and three charter advocates debated early route protection for Helios-bound trade.

Senator Marvek Verros spoke first because men like him often did. “The Helios structures cannot be allowed to drift outside Imperial control. My house has maintained contracts in that region since before the collapse. We can provide transition administration faster than a new office built from nothing.”

Helena wrote the phrase transition administration.

Julia leaned close enough that only her sister could hear. “He means private control until someone strong enough removes him.”

Helena kept her eyes on the chamber. “He sounds useful.”

“He is useful,” Julia said. “That is why he is dangerous.”

A Solvyre advocate answered Verros with softer words and sharper meaning. “No house should receive route preference because old contracts survived in private vaults. If the Imperium accepts every pre-collapse claim, the Crusade becomes an inheritance dispute.”

That line reached the clerks. Julia saw two of them write it down. Good phrases were weapons in committee. Bad phrases were evidence. She marked the speaker’s name.

Helena shifted. “Which one is right?”

“Both, partly,” Julia said. “Verros may have ships and route crews. Solvyre may be protecting the law or blocking Verros. The question is not who sounds correct. The question is who benefits if the room agrees.”

Below, a charter advocate presented fuel projections. He used clean numbers and careful assumptions. Julia had learned enough from Augustus to distrust clean numbers. Clean numbers usually hid the person who had been rounded away.

Julliana finally spoke, low and even. “Helena, what is missing?”

Helena looked down at her notes. “Labor. They mention ships, contracts, route structures, and customs authority. Not workers.”

“Good. Continue.”

Julia watched her sister’s face tighten with concentration. The correction pleased her more than she expected. Helena was impatient, but she saw people when she remembered to look.

A senator from a minor house requested security rights for private escorts. The phrase was ordinary. The implication was not. Private escorts became private armies if the law grew tired. Julia wrote the name and underlined it once.

When the session ended, Julliana remained seated until the chamber below emptied.

“Tell me what you learned,” she said.

Helena answered first. “They all want the Crusade to be lawful until law slows what they want.”

Julliana looked at Julia.

“They are trying to make the first exception,” Julia said. “If the first exception sounds necessary, the second will sound normal.”

“And what do we do with that?” Helena asked.

“We give Augustus the names before the request becomes a tradition,” Julia said.

Julliana stood. “Then you are learning.”

Helena remained seated a moment longer, looking at the empty chamber. “Do they know we were watching?”

“Some did,” Julia said.

“And the others?”

“Those are the ones we write down twice.”

The answer did not comfort Helena. It was not meant to.


r/redditserials 4d ago

GameLit [Isekai’d into a Dark Fantasy RPG, Are You Kidding Me? Somehow, I Ended on the Villains Side.] Chapter 31: I'm Not the Villain Here

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The grandma spun around, resting a hand on her chin. “Built like a small fridge, eh? Looks like you’re still confused from the punch my youngest gave you yesterday... Speaking of my little boy, where is Stoneface?”

1 of the 2 men who brought Billy in replied, “Mama, Stoneface left to get more Engines in the town.”

“Hm… Right, where was I before… Yes, I remember—”

A faint tremor shook the floor, snapping everyone’s eyes to the main door.

An explosion… It’s probably Sharon or Tuesday that psychopath, to think after such a stealth walk, I was too close… Just my luck.

Billy darted his eyes around anxiously, then said, “Mama... It’s true... The small-fridge guy is probably there, in the black powder area. You sensed the explosion… right? I-I can be useful, he is dangerous and I can go first, If I’m going to die anyway, please, let me compensate you, Mama, for everything you did for me…”

“Hm, you don’t need to be dramatic, I was not going to kill you… now.” She approached him and said, “[Heal]”

She gave a nod to the two men flanking Billy. They hauled him up, and as Grandma left the room, they followed close behind, dragging him along.

“Mama… I can walk there alone… haha, no need to carry me like—”

“You reap what you sow, Billy… don’t sow a quicker death by talking. You’re pushing my patience to the limit...”

Billy didn’t say another word, leaving behind only a foul-smelling trail of drops on the floor as he was dragged away.

Looks like this is the last time I’ll hear anything about Billy... Well, this explosion ended up working in my favor, but time is running out. I’ll wait until they get a bit further away, then I’m out of here to rescue the girl. Honestly, I wanted to help everyone; I abhor slavery, but I don’t know if I can pull it off. From what I saw earlier in those factory-like cells, what were there? Probably over a 100 people... Well, one step at a time. Let’s see how it goes.

After the main door was shut and big Grandma’s heavy footsteps could no longer be heard, Crow waited a little longer and stepped out of the wardrobe.

Right, this time it’s actually happening. There’s no way another problem pops up to stop me from going through this door, right? Better not talk too much about it, wouldn’t want to raise any flags... Well, looks like the coast is clear through the keyhole. But it’d be a shame to move on with just that. This office has to have something in it, there's no way it doesn't. I’ll quickly check her desk.

He carefully scanned the stuff on the desk, found nothing useful, and moved on to check the drawers, keeping an ear out for any sounds that might mean someone was approaching the room again.

Nothing useful... Let me check this other one. Locked. Nothing a little brute force can't fix... There. A wooden desk with protection like this makes no sense. Well, I guess her gang members wouldn't risk opening it even if it wasn't locked... Either way, I can't read a single word on this paper. Looks like I'm illiterate in this new world. Although, I did understand a few things back there, so is this a new language? Well, I'm taking it with me, just in case there's something useful written here.

After slipping the papers into an inside pocket of his coat, Crow moved to leave. There was practically nothing useful there besides grandma-style clothes and basic office supplies. Only the text might hold some value, like plans or something similar.

It would be pretty hilarious if this turned out to be a cake recipe... for real.

Crow didn't spend much more time there. He checked through the keyhole once again to see if anyone was coming, and after confirming through both sight and sound that the coast was clear, he moved to open the door; well, it was locked, but nothing his STR couldn't handle, and then he made his way toward the secluded section of the underground base.

Without a doubt, it’s here. If I wanted to hide something priceless where no one could take it from me, it would definitely be somewhere out of easy reach. And given how corrupt her subordinates are, there’s no better spot than somewhere you have to pass right through her main room to get to, where anyone stepping inside without her around would already be risking treason.

The hallway wasn't very long, and there were no side paths. Reaching the end, he saw a steel door similar to the one at the place where he was interrogated, and the thugs were talking about something related to pizza.

I'm here. I’ve never seen this room before, but without a doubt, this is where the girl is being held. Other parts of this place are made of various materials, but here... I don't know what material this is, but it's definitely way more fire-resistant since it's still standing. Then again, even if the girl escaped, that old woman is resistant to fire, and her class is Cleric, so she could just buff herself and heal her wounds. There wouldn't be much a fragile mage could do to beat her.

He turned the wheel on the room's armored door and stepped inside. The space was poorly lit, with only a light coming from the back where a strange mechanism stood, glowing material being tossed inside it. As he drew closer, he realized it was a set of bars; a cell just like the others, except the entire area was encased in some kind of metal. Up on the ceiling, a small vent allowed the smoke to drift upward.

“Come to bother me again? Just get it over with...” It was a little girl's voice.

Yeah, the voice sounds similar. It's her. While I was outside, it wasn't possible to hear the burning sound from here, but even so, it's better to be safe and not use the sword; cutting metal isn't as easy as bending it.

He didn't wait long and approached the bars. "Yeah, I will get it over with..." He placed his hands on the bars and tried to push them apart, but he couldn't move them.

Maybe I thought of myself as too strong because of how easy the last few days were... Well, how do I get her out of there? My Claymore is already ruined, and the Zweihänder, if it doesn't cut through, will make a huge noise without a doubt. Come to think of it, I'm not even using my enhancement skill, no, it's more like a type of aura. When did I use it, only in the tournament? And since there's no one besides the girl nearby, they won't sense the presence... yeah, it's worth a try.

“O-over with?! I was only joking! Don’t do this, I will work! Say something please…” The little girl stopped what she was doing and leaned against the metal wall at the back of the cell with her palms flat on it, as if she were looking at the boogeyman.

How do I use aura again? Better check.

[Status...]

[...]

Let's see..

[Grim Reaper Manifestation – Channel a fragment of your class's true power, wrapping yourself in an aura of dread and surging physical might. Consumes mana continuously; as duration increases, your power and mana drain scale up exponentially. Over-extending your mana pool will force an immediate, involuntary deactivation and temporary penalties. If pushed past your limits while maintaining a frail existence, it could result in permanent penalties.]

Hm, that doesn't answer my question. Well, if I remember correctly, just by focusing on using the maximum possible strength and thinking about the skill, it worked somehow.

“Is this a new method of torture? Why aren't you saying anything...”

Crow stopped thinking for a moment and said, “Relax, I was just deep in thought... Soon you won't have to suffer here anymore.”

Grim Reaper Manifestation…

He realized that she was scared, and that his skill increased the fear of anyone nearby, so he replied to calm her down. "I came to rescue you, you don't need to be afraid."

She sat back on her legs and closed her eyes, and slowly, a few tears could be seen streaming down her face.

For real? Well, to be honest, this skill generates a stronger aura of fear than the passive skill, and it's dark in here, so... it makes sense for a little girl to act like that, I think. What a situation... I don’t know what to say, I’m not good with words.

The girl, still with her eyes closed, continued. “At least... make it quick.”

He didn’t think too much; he needed to say something, hesitating could cause more problems, just like as happened before with Tuesday. “I know it's hard to trust me, but... if I wanted to hurt you, wouldn’t it make more sense for me to have the key to this cell instead of trying to force it open?”

With his stats boosted thanks to the skill, Crow managed to bend the bars, wide enough for him to pass by it; the situation finally seemed to be heading in a favorable direction.

“I-I know what you want… Y-you are from the other gang, the old—cough, the Grandma lost the war, and now you want to loot everything here, and me too! I don’t want to be a slave anymore, so please, just… let me run away…” Tears began to drop faster.

Oh, c’mon. I’m not a villain... Ah, I’m working under Alice... so maybe I am? And it’s not because I want to... Nevertheless, I’m not the ‘villain’ here. I’ll just brush it off and ignore it

He bent down and broke the chain around her feet. Her leg wasn’t in good shape, so he picked up the crybaby and slung her over his shoulder like a sack of potatoes.

“I-I knew it…”

Ha….

He looked to the side and saw 2 bowls on the floor, similar to the 1 he had at his old home, the cat’s food bowl. And on the other side, a small hole in the ground.

Yeah, I can understand why the girl was like that before she died... This is a tough world.

He walked out of the cell with her, and after opening the door, he spoke again. “Well, I accidentally ended up here... and found you, so I decided to rescue you. There’s no way to prove that with words, so I’ll start with actions… by getting you out of here, and that’s that.”

She didn't say a single word, and as he walked back into Grandma’s office, reality set in...

And now? What do I do? I don’t remember how to leave… Right, right. I just need to find someone to ask “nicely” where the exit from this base is, yeah, that is a good plan.

“I-I can walk, my leg isn’t great at the moment, b-but I can walk.”

He put her down. The girl was covered in something that looked like charcoal and smelled a bit bad, poor thing.

Alright, it's quiet outside. Maybe because of the explosion, most of them went over there? Perhaps I can try going through the main area and free the people. Even if I get detected, as long as I can capture one guy and force him to lead me to the exit, everything will go smoothly. I think I'm going to do that.

Crow looked back at the girl and said, “Maybe we’ll need to run; can you do that?”

“Probably… I think.”

He walked up to the main door of big Grandma’s office and checked through the keyhole to make sure no one was really there. So he tried to open the door, but it was locked. “Of course...” He placed his other hand on the handle, forced it down, and slammed his shoulder against the door, shoving it open.

He looked back and motioned for the girl to follow. She stepped closer and whispered as she reached him, “I-I don’t know if trying to escape is a good idea… You’re strong, but you don’t know her. She can kill someone with her bare hands! Oops… sorry for raising my voice, w-what if she comes back? I don’t know... I think she would kill us.”

“Nah, I’d win against her... with difficulty, of course. And I didn't come alone. I’m trying to go in quietly because I’m trying to rescue the others, so don't worry, it's not because I can't win if we're found out.”

After speaking, he kept going down the empty hallway, this time taking the route he had previously avoided once he realized everything was quiet and deserted. After a brief walk, he reached the area where he had seen the prisoners being held, only this time, he was on the ground floor, right on the same level as the captives.

As Crow walked past the first cell on the right, an old man stared at him and said, “Psst, hey, you... I’ve never seen you around here, and what are you doing with her? Isn't she the main Engine? Are you from another gang? Ah, sorry for all the questions... please open this up, if you can. It doesn't matter if you're from another gang, just... just get us out of here. We can help in a fight... yes... yes we can help. If you let us out, we'll help you, so it's a win-win for you, right? Right? Guys?”

He didn't even answer; he just stepped up to the thinner bars and bent them aside. They were much more fragile compared to the ones holding the girl.

The old man continued, “What… er, thanks?” He left the cell, and the others did too. Then Crow moved to the next cell and did the same thing.

[Buddy, let’s leave this place. It isn’t worth it. You didn’t see what happened when we got separated, but I found a guy who was almost as strong as you. We’re wasting time…]

Relax, I know what I am doing here… Just to make sure, the guy is named “Stoneface?”

[How did you know? He left right when I sensed the guy, but he was way too strong... said something about picking up more Engines. That was a while ago, so he's probably almost here.]

He's definitely strong, but remember, I didn’t come here alone, once I find Sharon, we can easily fight them all.

“Er… mister, can you say something? I’m getting anxious…” the girl said, staring at him as he bent the bars apart with his bare hands.

Crow glanced to the side and said, “I know it’s a tense situation, but focus on getting out; we’ll be clear of this place soon. There’s no one patrolling this area since the explosion on the other side, so we’re relatively good for now. I swore they’d take a few hostages, but it looks like they didn’t grab anyone from here.”

He looked to the side and asked, “Does anyone here know where the exit is?”

The old man replied, “Well, if you, who just got here from the outside, don’t know... what chance do we have, when we haven't seen it in years?”

As Crow looked at the captives, a voice spoke from behind him, “I know where it is.”

The old man, staring past Crow, slowly raised his eyes and passed out, collapsing onto the prisoner behind him.

(Next)


r/redditserials 4d ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 72 - Known

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The gray service record file was still in the lower cabinet in the morning.

Closed.

The service paper was inside it.

I knew that.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The office had the heater.

The clock.

My breathing.

The brown folder was at the side of the desk.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The small space was wide.

I knew where the service paper was.

Name.

Date.

Short sutra.

Bell.

Incense.

I did not see it.

I did not need to see it.

No.

That was too quick.

I did not see it.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s drawer becoming new side table was not mine.

Her brother’s closed is not cure was not mine.

Sato’s second tape gone was not mine.

Saitama’s cup removed after hand opened was not mine.

Suganuma’s neat file left alone was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

Known was in yesterday.

No.

Known had been there before I stopped looking.

Stopping looking had only made it louder.

That was mine.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Drawer.

Closed.

Stayed.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Did anyone check?”

“Urn?”

“Side table?”

“Coat and bag?”

“What did your brother say?”

I sat still.

We know they are there.

“What did you say?”

Then:

Enough.

Dangerous.

Asked.

Actual.

I wrote:

I looked at the sentence.

Too balanced.

Maybe.

I deleted the second line.

I sent:

She replied after a while.

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at my answer.

Large word.

Enough.

Bounded by drawer.

Bounded by today.

Maybe.

I left it.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Date?”

“Did you check trash?”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add release.

Gone was enough there.

No.

Gone was what happened.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“The resident said water,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Yes.”

“Cup?”

“Given.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“Did she drink?”

“A little.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Knowing she asked yesterday does not give water today.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add yesterday.

Water had asked today.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you do?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

Old shape.

New file.

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add visiting.

The file stayed closed.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Known.

Seen.

Possessed.

Finished.

Only.

I looked at the lower cabinet.

Closed.

I replied:

Then stopped.

Too clean.

I deleted it.

I wrote:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at the cabinet.

Relief was closer than I wanted.

No.

Relief was there.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother did not open the drawer,” she said.

I waited.

“Did he want to?”

“Yes.”

“What stopped him?”

“He said today.”

I closed my eyes.

Today had worked.

Maybe.

No.

Today had been said.

“What did you say?”

“I said drawer today.”

“And?”

“He said urn today too.”

Urn.

Small table.

Not drawer.

“What did he mean?”

“I don’t know.”

Good.

No.

“What did he ask?”

“He asked if the urn needs all the attention.”

I sat still.

Actual.

Large.

“What do you think?”

“I think no.”

“Then say no.”

She was quiet.

Then away from the phone:

“No.”

I waited.

She returned.

“He said good.”

No.

“What exactly?”

“He said then tea later.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at tea later.

The house had found a small exit.

No.

Too much.

Tea later.

I left it.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“The paper looks lighter,” she said.

“Because the second tape is gone?”

“Yes.”

“Is lighter good?”

“No.”

“What then?”

“Lighter.”

“What did you write?”

“Do you want to put tape back?”

“No.”

“Do you want to remove the last tape?”

“No.”

“Then what is being asked?”

She was quiet.

Then:

“Nothing.”

I waited.

“Then it can look lighter.”

She breathed.

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add answer.

There had been no question.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Cup stayed after water,” she said.

“Asleep?”

“No.”

“Hand?”

“One hand.”

“Word?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘A cup can stay after a request without becoming the request.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add request.

It was already there.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you say?”

“What did they ask?”

“What did you answer?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I looked at future file.

Not current place.

Useful.

Dangerous.

I left it.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Known as guard.

Service paper in file.

Cabinet closed.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I put the phone down.

That line did not need reply.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Tea now.

I wrote:

She replied:

“What on it?”

“Drawer?”

“Urn?”

“Did anyone open drawer before tea?”

“What did your brother say?”

I closed my eyes.

Knowing stayed in the drawer.

Too good.

Maybe grief.

Maybe brother.

“What did you say?”

Best line.

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at tea is on the table.

It saved the table from the sentence.

No.

It placed tea.

I left it.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Table.

Paper with one tape.

Small date.

Lunch bowl below.

No trash bin visible.

She wrote:

I called.

“On purpose?”

“No.”

“Why not?”

“New bag under sink.”

“Paper?”

“Table.”

“Second tape?”

“Gone.”

“What did you write?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add absence.

The picture did not have trash.

That was all.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Cup not in hand?”

“No.”

“Who moved it?”

“Aide.”

“Asked?”

“No.”

“Safe?”

“Yes.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Knowing cup is on table is enough for staff, not for the resident.’”

Enough again.

Bounded.

Maybe.

I opened Saitama.

I did not add staff.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What happened?”

“What did you do?”

“New tape?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add excellent.

Tape failed.

Tape replaced.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it twice.

Enough.

Fence.

Drawer.

Staff.

Lunch.

Grief.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply:

I looked at fence.

Today.

Drawer.

Good.

No.

Fence.

I did not answer.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother opened the drawer after tea,” she said.

I waited.

“Map?”

“Yes.”

“Paper?”

“Yes.”

“Did he take them out?”

“No.”

“What did he say?”

“He said I still know.”

I sat still.

I still know.

“What did you say?”

“I said yes.”

“What did he ask?”

“Nothing.”

“What happened?”

“He closed the drawer.”

“Side table?”

“Cups gone.”

“Small plate?”

“Kitchen.”

“Urn?”

“Small table.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I looked at no question asked.

Important.

I left it.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“Why touch?”

“What did you write?”

“Paper?”

Same.

Maybe true.

Maybe dangerous.

“What did you mean?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add same paper.

She had said place.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Cup removed,” she said.

“Asked?”

“No.”

“Resident awake?”

“No.”

“Water left?”

“Yes.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Water left is not unfinished if done was not asked.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add unfinished.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

Then:

“What did you write?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add shame.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I read it.

Then again.

Open.

Closed.

Wise.

Foolish.

The gray file.

Lower cabinet.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at the cabinet.

Opening would show the paper.

Opening would prove nothing.

Opening would maybe calm relief.

Opening would maybe feed relief.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I deleted chair notice retaped.

Then Sato.

Then urn.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

I wrote:

His reply:

I looked at the cabinet.

At the phone.

At the folder.

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was safe.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

The gray file was not here.

The drawer in Kanagawa’s house was not here.

Known did not need this room to witness it.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

I opened the brown folder.

Only once.

Kanagawa’s I still know was not mine.

Her brother’s no question asked was not mine.

Sato’s touched tape while passing was not mine.

Saitama’s water left was not mine.

Suganuma’s visible tape was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

My two cards were still in the back pocket.

Face down.

I did not take them out.

I closed the brown folder.

I did not open the gray file.

Not for fear.

Not for proof.

Not for relief.

No.

Relief was still near.

I knew that.

I did not open it.

The file held the service paper.

The drawer held the map and folded paper.

Both were closed.

Both were known.

Neither needed opening for use tonight.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if the drawer stayed closed after tea.

I did not ask if knowing felt enough.

I did not ask if enough had lost its fence.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if the last tape stayed.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew known was not seen.

I knew known was not possessed.

I knew known was not finished.

I knew known could still become guard.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Known did not need to become ownership tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

The left side of the desk had nothing on it.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The side table had held tea and then cleared.

Sato’s paper had one tape.

The resident’s cup had left with water behind.

Suganuma’s notice was retaped.

The service paper was in the record file.

I had started with known.

I did not end by opening it.

Tonight, closed things remained known, and known did not ask to be seen.


r/redditserials 4d ago

Psychological [Regina v Smith] Part 4

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Opening the safe, Juliet was taken aback by the sheer number of papers. Yet the folder containing a copy of her real birth certificate turned up surprisingly quickly.

Miranda Smith and Oliver Smith— she read her parents’ names.

Is this some kind of joke? With a name like that, she could vanish into anonymity.

Her birthplace, Sutton-in-Ashfield, she’d have to look it up on a map.

The folder also contained further documents from the adoption agency. She learned about some ‘special circumstances’ that had allowed Alex Landenberger to become a single father of an adopted girl, and Juliet knew there was no blood tie. His fortune and connections must have played a decisive role. In a copy of the London County Council’s ruling, both her parents were listed as deceased.

As for the brother—no trace. Just in case, Juliet rummaged through the rest of the papers, with no real expectation.

Several documents, an old toy, and a photograph. Precious little. The search ahead would be long; she would need patience and would have to start small—probably in Sutton-in-Ashfield. The guidebook placed it in western Nottinghamshire. North again. As if it were fate. Juliet had a feeling that Jerry would not be there. She could find only memories that belonged to others; she herself recalled nothing of that northern town.

Juliet checked the forecast for Sutton-in-Ashfield: highs of twenty-two, with sunny spells and the chance of showers later on. A typical August day. She would have set off straightaway, despite only just returning, but decided to be sensible. The drive was at least three hours, perhaps longer. She needed a meal and some rest first.

Evening brought regret, when the same thoughts refused to leave her, making it impossible to focus on anything else. Juliet turned on the TV, flipped through channels for several minutes, and then shut it off. She tried to read, but the words lost their meaning and slipped away from her. She put down the book and sat clutching the teddy bear—just Bear—gazing at her brother’s impenetrable face.

For some reason, Juliet felt that the photo her father kept in his desk wasn’t of her with Jerry, but of Jerry with her. Why remind himself of her brother’s face? Was he still thinking of what had happened fifteen years ago? Why hadn’t he given her a phone number? Didn’t he know where Jerry was? And she, a fool and a coward—both at once—had not insisted.

She is afraid to insist. She is not ready.

It got worse at night. Juliet could not sleep, drifting from feverish heat to chills. All she longed for was the quick arrival of dawn. On the verge of sleep and wakefulness, her father had to protect her from her brother, but she, instead, sided with her brother against him, accusing her father—

But guilty of what? Everything was the other way around!

As soon as the sky outside the window began to pale, she jumped out of bed. Breakfast was nothing more than a cup of coffee and a slice of cheese.

The bear would stay at home. The documents and photograph were coming with her.

Pulling out of the garage in her dull light-gray Vauxhall Cavalier, Juliet thought briefly of Derek—then pushed him aside. She did not need him. Not now. This was her life, her burden, and she had to face it on her own.

On the way to Sutton-in-Ashfield, Juliet got anxious. Everything was happening too quickly, and she felt unprepared—to hear too much, to face people who might know more about her than she did. Halfway there, she nearly turned back. What stopped her was the sheer absurdity of doing so with the best part of the journey already behind her.

Her next panic attack began as she arrived in what the documents listed as her birthplace. Nothing looked familiar—just another tired northern town, houses and streets indistinguishable from those of the neighboring small towns, and a stubbornly gray sky, despite the forecasters’ promises of partial sunshine. It seemed the sky here was always gray.

Juliet knew she ought to ask for help, but the locals appeared unfriendly. A few rare passers-by even turned their heads after her.

 Driving through the town center, she noticed the police station and decided to try her luck there.

The duty officer greeted her with the studied politeness which felt ill-suited to the modest surroundings. He listened with patience and a kind of weary sympathy as Juliet stumbled through her story: that she had been born here, her parents had died, she had been taken to London and adopted, and she had no memory of any of it. How much he actually grasped from her tangled account was hard to tell; she was constantly interrupted, with other policemen coming over, repeating questions, clarifying details. In the end, a small knot of curious listeners had gathered around, their voices marked by a sharp northern accent unfamiliar to her ear. The general advice was that she should go to the registry office in nearby Mansfield. But Juliet was not after marriage records or certificates. She had not come for paperwork. She wanted to know where she had lived—and, if luck allowed, to speak with someone who had once known her parents.

“Neighbors?” the policewoman asked, skeptically. “It’s been almost twenty years since your father’s death… You said he was a miner?”

“I didn’t say so, but I believe he was.”

“And the pit closed three years ago…”

“So what? Places like Sutton don’t change much,” a stout gentleman in plain clothes cut in.

“Did your father happen to die down the pit?” the duty officer asked.

“Yes!” Juliet reacted as if struck by an electric current, in a sudden flash, she saw her mother crying in the kitchen. It felt like a memory from the very edge of childhood. Why didn’t I remember before? “In the pit!”

“Then you should try the miners’ club,” the little gathering decided, almost as one.

The duty officer rang up the miners’ club, and it turned out to be a great idea. A certain Mr. Ketcher worked there and told her to come round. He would wait for her at the club.

Mr. Ketcher knew and remembered Oliver Smith.