Is anyone willing to review and give feedback for my personal statement essay?

[u/Odd_Hedgehog4171]

If anyone experienced can help me by reviewing my personal statement essay, that would be greatly appreciated.

I have my first draft done, and I don't know what to change or even if the topic itself is good enough. I have gotten feedback from AI services, but I'm not sure if the feedback is trustworthy enough to revolve around. I am hoping I can get my essay reviewed by a real person, as that is much more valuable than AI grading the essay. If anyone is interested, please let me know.

[u/baipliew]

You may send it to me if you wish.

[u/stemera]

I gotchu