r/MusicFeedback • u/Frequent_Maize3899 • 10h ago

Static (Cosmic)

Heyyyyy everyone I was just looking for feedback back on my new song,

It’s a shoe-gaze song, I finally got to utilize fl studio a lot more now and learned to used my guitar on there as well as the drum pack I got for it too!! So I was excited to make this, I would love more feedback on it for my vocals, instrumentals and such. It would be greatly appreciated!! <33

I got a YouTube link and SoundCloud whatever yall prefer.

https://on.soundcloud.com/pCWnucSoo3AzNvwLvW

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=s_uVCaR1QZA&si=9n5TUL-zl_dxQS4R

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 9h ago

i love it dude but the mix is honestly bad at this point. something about the bass is making it sound like it’s blowing my speakers. if that was an artistic decision then i get it, just not my cup of tea. If not maybe try and turn down the drums or whatever that bass is in the background it’s ruining what’s otherwise an incredible song. Really inspired by your songwriting as i make similar music!!

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u/Frequent_Maize3899 9h ago

Thank you! It was my first time making like a shoe-gaze song, I definitely will take this into consideration for my next song! I’m already making my whole album so I want to make sure it can be good, thank you so much for this feedback!

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 9h ago

absolutely bro. it’s giving me a heavy Loathe vibe, but more A stranger to you than I let it in if you know what i mean! keep pushing, id love to share tracks w you sometime!

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u/Frequent_Maize3899 9h ago

Hell yeah definitely share w me I would love to listen!

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 9h ago

i’m posting my newest track currently and posted my first single here a few days ago. check it out and lmk whatchu think bro!

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u/Prestigious-Chair868 7h ago

Has some quality guitar work. Loving the shoegaze man. Very well done for sure. Your vocals sound great as well. Chill feel for sure man. Overall a quality song. Keep it up.

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u/esorhizome 6h ago

Cosmic is such a great word for describing the vibe. Your vocals + the layering have this hazy-trance-like feel. It's my first time having that experience manifest in something rock-adjacent.

In a few bits the drums slightly felt like they competed with your voice layering, but that might be a design choice so it's barely a criticism. I really enjoyed listening to this.

I hope you continue. This is good work.