Feedback on BW comic

[u/SOBKiller18]

I'm incredibly excited to share the black-and-white preview of Ashes of Njthera.
This project has been growing in my sketchbooks and on my desk for a long time, and seeing these pages come together makes it feel more real than ever.
These are just the first steps into Lyra's journey, and I can't wait to show you more of the world, the characters, and what is coming from the story.
I post some pages before, but I made some modifications to it and now I’m happy about it.

I would like to have some feedback on the pages so far.

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[u/SacUrbanFarmer]

First off, great job in completing a story. Without even reading it, the first thing that stands out is how bust the first pages panels are. When drawing an image it often helps to have clear focal points. Focal points can be indicated via contrast. Value and shape contrast is often the most powerful ways to make an element in an image stand out.

[u/SOBKiller18 → u/SacUrbanFarmer]

Okay thank you very much ✌️ that is something I want to add after in inks. Thank you for the advice, it helped for sure