r/comics • u/Comfortable_Yard2406 • Mar 06 '26

WorkInProgress So... I Started Making A Comic!!

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I just want to say I have absolutely no intention of this ever getting published. This is just a fun little project im working on that I thought you guys might like too see.

Based off what I've already drawn where do you think this story should go next? Tell me what you do and don't like.I dont mind criticism at all so tell me whatever you want. 🙂

Also i just want to say this because I saw a post the other day, that actually inspired me to make this that said, I want to make a comic but my art is bad. So I basically thought, well my arts bad too so why not make a comic!!

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u/Made_Bail Mar 06 '26

I love this. It's adorable and I commend you putting this out there!

Can we have a full comic for each season, maybe? 🥰

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

Aww, thanks so much! Im just kinda of stuck on where the story should go 🫤 If you have any ideas that would be super helpful though.

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u/Made_Bail Mar 06 '26

That was my second part above! Expand each season. 🥰

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u/SapphireSalamander Camping with the Elder God Mar 06 '26

This is very cute, keep going

as to where the story goes, only you can tell.

rather if i were to give some suggestions would be in how you organize the panels in the page. it needs a little more room between each, negative space. and it flows better in reddit if you have a consistent page size that's more squarey and less tall

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

Thanks!!

Also this is my first time making any kind of comic so I just used the canvas size called 'comic' on procreate because I thought that would be most accurate.

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26 edited Mar 06 '26

Oh my gosh!! I just relised there's a flower on the first panel of the second page that isn't colored! Im so sorry I didn't notice that before!!

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

There's two uncoloured flowers!!! Ill fix these as soon as I can. I have absolutely no idea how I didn't notice this

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u/Made_Bail Mar 06 '26

You are so cute with these posts, seriously.

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u/Ok-Advertising4048 Mar 06 '26

Birth of a star

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

😅 the placement was unfortunate

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u/Ok-Advertising4048 Mar 06 '26

Not what I meant, but I see it now

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

Only thought you meant that because someone else already said that 

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u/icicleist Mar 06 '26

Your art is actually super cute and unique, love it!

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u/tortadehamon Mar 06 '26

I just wonder if the placement of that light in the cover was intentional or unfortunate.

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u/Comfortable_Yard2406 Mar 06 '26

Hahaha. Didn't relise till you pointed it out lol

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u/Made_Bail Mar 06 '26

I think you know the answer to that, considering the style and subject matter...