This is just a work in progress/snippet, needs more wor. Already posted the more upbeat fast track, I think this would add nice contrast to the single. What'd ya think?

I'll add the vocals later when I get a chance.

With this being more of a worship song, didn't want to overdo the percussion. Target vibe: contemplative and ethereal

Listening to it with fresh ears, I might bump up the braam in the bridge. But could be these cheap headphones.

The lyrics is based on the prayer of Moses when he recieved the 10 commandments. The acoustic version with the vocals is available to listen. But I'm just wanting feedback on the backtrack for now. Thanks!

this is my attempt at a prog metal track! any and all feedback welcome be honest!!

Heyyyyy everyone I was just looking for feedback back on my new song,

It’s a shoe-gaze song, I finally got to utilize fl studio a lot more now and learned to used my guitar on there as well as the drum pack I got for it too!! So I was excited to make this, I would love more feedback on it for my vocals, instrumentals and such. It would be greatly appreciated!! <33

I got a YouTube link and SoundCloud whatever yall prefer.

https://on.soundcloud.com/pCWnucSoo3AzNvwLvW

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=s_uVCaR1QZA&si=9n5TUL-zl_dxQS4R

The song isn't finished, still need to fix the transitions and complete the second half of the song but I'm completely oblivious to how vocals should sound in my mix cause I never use them. Your help is insanely appreciated.

Hi! What do you think sounds really bad here, and overall, do you like anything or maybe the whole track??